The Bad Immortal of Reincarnation

The fighting scenes have no feeling at all, they are all just spoken out. There is no blood or passion. I suggest the author to look at how the masters describe fighting in the future.

Does anyone still remember the invincible lucky star back then?

This book is extremely poisonous for the following reasons. First, the author Shui is in a whole world, and the damn 150 chapters are not finished yet! Second, the author's book is very slow. He repeatedly writes about one thing, and it takes about 20 chapters. Third, this book is really mindless and highly poisonous. You will know it after reading it. I advise you not to read it!

It's a bit like "The Lord of the World". Beginning, process

Suddenly another chapter pops up, should I continue to hang on?

When I was cleaning out the bookshelf, I discovered that there was still a book like this...

Did he write "Invincible Lucky Star"?

Was he the one who wrote "Xiaoyaoji"?

Probably when I was in the second year of junior high school, I bought a book called "Online Game Battle" from the bookstore, and I was fascinated by it. I was cleaning up my room today and accidentally found this book. I searched it online and found that it was written by Qidian. Com. If you think about it, it's been at least ten years. From the first time I came into contact with paper novels, to now I have become an online writer, which is very emotional.

What's going on? I've subscribed the same number as the previous one several times.

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Has the author given up? It's all finalized, I hope it won't become a series in my lifetime

Wrong, it's not Luan Tingyu, it's Shi Wengong

Isn't this right? There is no reaction at all when a companion dies?

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

This fighting scene made me tear my fingers off. It's so embarrassing.

I think Zhenwu Potian was well written, but maybe the plot was too big, and I couldn't stop it at the end, so it ended directly. I don't know what the fate of this book will be.

It's okay, but the writing is not layered. Too much ink is spent on unimportant occasions. Cause aesthetic fatigue.

Huizong's paintings and Cai Jing's calligraphy are both good things.

So you will get a lot of merit, right?

Just kidding about Big Invincible Lucky Star, I used to think it was the most awesome book

Laying down a dragnet, just waiting for you to come

The author of today's text is very troublesome...

It's really strange that such a lukewarm book has someone who criticizes it.

I came here because of the invincibility of fighting games in online games for many years. Very missed. I remember that there were not many online games. This is the first one that comes to mind. Very pure and beautiful

Having said all that, what is Jiang Yuetian's original status? Not the protagonist? Impossible

It's uncomfortable to read. I want to say that the author's writing style and the concept of the book are all right, but it is too slow. I always feel that the author is overthinking. The protagonist kills a minion of the Zhang family, and the author has to use a long speech to introduce the adventures of the dead minion and the origin of the treasure, and the forced introduction is extremely boring. It is not, ah! That's it! This feeling of sudden enlightenment, don't be fooled!