King of Ball

Damn, let's practice the left foot for the protagonist. If the feet are not balanced, except for a few people, it is easy to be targeted, especially at the end of his career. If you think about Melo and Messi's incompetence in recent years, it is not because of the imbalance of the feet.

Kongshan, it will rain again in the next chapter. You need to hold an umbrella. Anyone who doesn't hold an umbrella is just a hooligan. Senior Xiaoqiu is a good girl. Remember to hold an umbrella. Ding is a good boy. Hold on!

No commentary for football matches? I've read 100 chapters and haven't seen any commentary yet. How can a competitive novel be read without explanations to enhance the atmosphere?

Eunuch?

Been lying for so long. . . Come on

Good book, I hope the author will stick with it

11111111 Come on

Updates are finally resumed, come on!

This novel is good, but there is too much nonsense and it is not passionate enough...

It's rare to find such good football writing

Damn it, I was planning to save for 20 days, but it turned out to be too cheap?

The writing is pretty good, but why does the author's emotion take up so many words?

I thought we were going to be eunuchs 😅 Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

Chapters 189 and 190 are reversed

Kongkong, given a role, accurate long pass, good overall view and organization, average speed, poor shooting skills, weak in confrontation, very slippery free kicks, I have already thought of the name Yue Ding, the person who will pass the ball to Ding Ding for the national team in the future.

Except for the author's portrayal of Xiaoqiu like a person who has never been in love, this book is very well written, the characters are flesh and blood, and the players are not the kind of newcomers who are directly competed by Real Madrid and Barcelona in the first year after having a golden finger. By the way, looking at the writing style, I really feel that the author is a girl with delicate emotions. It's rare for a girl to write about football!

The competitions in the book are written without passion. Most of the competitions are voice-overs. There are too few descriptions of the competition scenes, there is no coherence, and there is no feeling when watching them. The protagonist has very few scenes, and most of them are narrated from the perspective of the fans, which seems awkward. Author, you can think about it, if you watch a game, the camera will scan the audience and commentators for most of the time, and I will only show you a few clips of each game. When it comes to the highlight scenes, the cameras are all in the audience's commentator's seat, reading about the fans' reactions, commentators' reactions, and finally giving you a short replay. Use these supporting characters to enhance the atmosphere to replace the game you most want to watch. Will you want to smash the monitor? In addition, there are a lot of names in the game. Those unknown players only have a name. Who knows where they came from and what position they play? So many characters are unclearly explained, there is no focus and there are a lot of fans hanging around, and the perspective is too confusing. These are all aspects that affect the reading experience of competitive novels.

What the hell are these two articles about recently? The author is enjoying himself, but the comments are negative.

Is the author a Yujie control? Also, is this book about a harem? Why is there an extra cuckoo? ? ? If it's a harem, just evacuate it first, don't waste time

Xiaokong, do you want to play a supporting role or not? Let's reinforce the role for the Chinese team.

I came here after reading your new book. It's very good.

The book is good, but the emotional drama is a failure. The overall style is narrative and lacks passion. In some places, you can feel that the author is suppressing the emotions in his heart when writing. Overall it's a good book, please end the emotional drama as soon as possible.