Urban Medical Martial Arts Immortal

Is this you?

By the way, why do you always go to other people's class reunions? I don't understand the author's thinking.

Can you update a few more pictures every day? It's not enough to read.

Didn't like the check-in for this book.

An immortal will spend a lot of time fooling around in a shabby school after rebirth. The structure is too small.

In fact, I want to say to those authors who write about campus cultivation, write a few 8, a cultivator will only show off on campus, just like Jack Ma in kindergarten, it is just as ridiculous. If you want to show off, you have to find a bigger place, but you have to show off on campus! ! You can either write campus romance, urban rebirth,... Without any sense of immersion, and it's very embarrassing to watch.

Even if you don't read it, I know that Long Aotian is a pretense and a slap in the face. If it was read ten years ago, it would have been okay, but now the routines have become more sophisticated. Many readers have begun to choose books rationally, paying attention to writing, logic, and rationality. From the introduction of this book, it can be seen that it is not logical and unreasonable to give away. An invincible immortal in the previous life, he was crazy and pretended to be like a second-rate kid in school. He has a set of skills. Only when he is crazy will he choose to continue studying. If he does not recover his cultivation early, he will read a crap book.

Do you know why this book is not a classic? Do you know what it means to kill decisively? Do you know what master style is? Others are threatening you and insulting your ancestors. How can you still survive if you sleep with your woman? What about dignity? Do you know what it means that a master cannot be humiliated and must die?

The novel here is really speechless. At the beginning, the identity of the protagonist is raised so high, and his behavior is so childish. He always talks a lot with a bunch of little ants. He can obviously solve it by himself, but he has to pretend to be low-key. It's really tiring to read.

I am Shen Nong, I have tried hundreds of poisons without dying, and I despise the poisons in the world. Now, Nong Guan has returned from this book. Every time I think about the medicinal properties of this book, I feel very tight in my chest. I know that Nong Xiao underestimated the world. This book can harm Nong's life. Fortunately, Nong can resist this poison for a while, so I wrote this book to tell all Taoist friends: Leave it alone. It is enough to burn incense, comfort farmers and encourage farmers.

I have read novels for more than ten years and have never seen a protagonist as cheap as you.

They are still cultivating. There are people who are still dreaming after getting into bed. They are being painted as bastards without even realizing it. How many people like this don't want to die?

Is there anyone else who has been following the update since the beginning? Let's talk about why after more than 4,000 chapters, the protagonist is only at the peak of the late Golden Core cultivation level, but his combat power has surpassed Yuanying, Huashen, and Jiesheng and is directly comparable to the Nirvana realm. This is directly digging a chaos sinkhole, and it is estimated that he will not be able to come back in another ten years 😂

There is too much nonsense, the plot has no rhythm, and so many useless plots have been written. It is still a fake elixir after 2700 chapters, and the fake elixir has been upgraded many times, and the same plot has been repeated after the elixir has been upgraded. And is it necessary for the protagonist to deliberately pretend to be a slap in the face? If not, just kill him if he is unhappy. If it is too deliberate, it will be boring.

There are all kinds of pretense and slaps in the face, with an average of one pretense every two chapters. Every fifty chapters a hero comes to save the beauty. 😅😅😅😅

I knew what the book was when I read the title outside. Then I came in and read the introduction. Sure enough, I guessed it right.

The characters in the plot are all gay, the beauties are mentally retarded, and the chickens and dogs are all ascending to heaven. The protagonist does not want his family to have a long life, enjoy more blessings, and enjoy too much beauty. What kind of cultivation is so sinister and lonely, doesn't it have a protagonist? "Without a protagonist, no strength, no power, sometimes it's hard for you to be an ordinary person, right?" Let your family and friends have the strength to at least attack? Can you hide? If the protagonist really can't take care of his family, then don't make excuses...

What is an immortal, seeing through the world of mortals, and having the supreme Taoist heart? What has been written about it? From beginning to end, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. It was easy to deal with the immortal who insisted on ink, but he did not develop his strength to collect resources and practice back. The most speechless thing is that the immortal has become invisible and cannot be invisible. Don't you worry that his subordinates will not use soul restraint? Don't you know how to use formations to protect your family? Is IQ online?

I just don't know how to write anymore. Every time I write, I'm just pretending to be cool at the bottom! A god-forming combat power has been abusing the base-building combat power for 2000 chapters! Rubbish!

It's amazing. I haven't got a golden elixir after more than 1,000 chapters. I keep pretending to be a slap in the face. I'm afraid it will take 5,000 chapters to get back to the top. Farewell, I lose.

The plot is too protracted It's so procrastinated that you can jump through dozens of chapters without affecting the coherence of the plot. An occasional slap in the face is enough. As a result, subplots like pretending and slap in the face take up a lot of space The combat effectiveness in the later period completely collapsed The content written in the first two to three thousand chapters It shows that a person who can achieve half-step transformation into a god on earth is unparalleled. It is even difficult to achieve a Nascent Soul based on the contents of the first one or two thousand chapters. In the first thousand chapters, the golden elixir from Nanzhou was the most awesome person and people from second-level sects were sent to fight. Now that a person in the stage of god transformation can emerge from Nanzhou, the ancestor of Xingchen Mountain is just a fake baby. What else is there? The guardian I met when I ran out of the cave for the first time was in the false elixir stage. When I met him again, he directly changed into the middle stage of Yuanying. I didn't know it was the later stage. It was also previously set that to break through the false elixir level seven, you need to completely integrate this life. Logically speaking, you should write a plot related to your family to completely integrate the past and present lives. However, after a few hundred chapters, this setting was forgotten directly at the eighth level, and then after another hundreds of chapters, it was forgotten again. I reached level 8 and then broke through from level 7 The double golden elixir was obviously shown to others by the protagonist around chapter 3700. Now I asked how the dragon knew about it, and whether I could take notes on the settings I made There are also a lot of book-eating plots that I won't list. In short, the main plot can be read, but there is a small 3000 chapter in the 4000 chapter. It is useless and has no meaning. It does not contribute to the main line at all. It is just a slap in the face.

After reading a little bit, I couldn't help but say, this birdman is here to pick up girls, and he is also played around by girls! Every few chapters, there is a new woman entangled with the pig's feet. Oh my God, how many women are there after thousands of chapters? Does this make sense to people who have been cultivating for countless years? Don't you think this routine is idiotic? And what I hate the most is that you are so awesome and you keep hiding this from your family, always making them worried. Did you steal a nuclear bomb or a dragon egg? Isn't this a crazy idea? The plots of the novels are exactly the same. They are all about the granddaughter of an old man, working in a special department, being an instructor, etc. It makes me vomit! And along the way, we were pretending to be pigs and eating tigers. Isn't this interesting? And there are ink marks all the way. People who have been reborn after countless years of cultivation are actually extremely naive. It's really shocking to see...

It suddenly ended and you can't continue writing?

I can't stand it any longer. I'm so confused that I can't even remember the realm. For a while, I was promoted to three levels in a single period, and it was promoted twice, and it was still three levels, and then it was promoted to eight levels, and after hundreds of chapters, it became seven levels. . . . No more watching, bye bye

Update quickly, what are you doing?

How much money did the book make? He actually wrote more than 10 million words

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

To be honest, the rest of this book is okay, but it lacks rigorous logical thinking, and some places just talk and talk nonsense.