Let's Move Forward Literary Club

More than 6,000 words, so many clicks, I feel so sad

The city curtain is decorated with sparse lights, and the fields are filled with silver. It's time to gather for the moon festival, and I'm afraid to stay alone in the swinging house. The clouds are full and the moon is round and round, and the ventricles of the heart are crescent and crescent. I hope you will sing to the moon with no heart, and there will be no one to leave you in this world.

Ha ha! (I don't mean to laugh, because I write very slowly) In my opinion, you are only suitable for publishing, about writing, and controlling the circle... But you are not suitable for writing. I think there is no other reason than impatience! (This is just my opinion. 😜)

Dreams... Are not very formal things after all. When I was in the second grade of middle school, my writing was always cheerful...

I read the book reviews, and the reviews were very good, but I was a little panicked when I saw that this was updated 4 days ago.

The post seems good. I saw it was updated in 2017 and four days ago...

First of all, there are typos... There are too many. This is the basic quality of a writer... Then there is the problem of dialogue layout. To be honest, it is a bit messy and makes people a bit tired to read But what is interesting is that the novel is not a modern world view. Fewer and fewer students have the emergence of brain computers. In fact, these things can be put in the introduction. Those who like science fiction can also be attracted There is also the feeling that there is not much depth about the meaning of writing, and I don't know if it is the character setting... Anyway, come on, author, I can see that the author really wants to write a novel (from the update date (even though you yourself said you can't survive anymore))

The beginning of the book is as beautiful as a picture in a child's dream, as clear as a lake in my hometown, like a fish swimming into my heart, like the smoke and willows in the south of the Yangtze River entwining me... With the unreal beauty of a dream, I continued reading, and found that the book is not just a book. It is a joyful book, and it also contains various sorrows or childhood pains of the protagonist and childhood sweetheart, or during the conversation, Dahe felt that his parents did not want him. In fact, it does not matter what youth is, people are always alive with various kinds of sorrows, sorrows and joys, beauty and darkness. What is sadness and what is joy? Come to think of it, perhaps the author of this book wanted to experience the mixture of sadness and joy because he wanted to use this melody throughout the book. I wouldn't be surprised if there are very dark stories in the future. However, the disadvantage is that the characters and protagonists in the book change too much. I have read some such books or works in other industries. Most of them are authors who want to use different characters to express different meanings. Many of them are successful. It can be seen that although the story of this book is centered on the literary club of young high school students, there are many other stories, such as (brain-computer), photovoltaic highway, etc. As written in the book, as well as the metaphorical way of showing that there are fewer and fewer students, almost abandoned idle classrooms, etc. All of this shows that the author is laying the groundwork for a variety of future stories. It breaks the framework of youth, campus, literary clubs, and even musical-like literary flows, allowing for greater room for development. For example (a murder caused by a steamed bun), although the core of the theme is still a steamed bun, it is not limited to steamed buns. You must know that most of the stories written like this in the past were based on science fiction such as "Doraemon", "Infinite KB", etc., Or they were written on magic and fantasy. However, what I want to say is that youth two-dimensional campus and this kind of industry novels about how to create novels are often not the highest priority. Although this is said, industry articles are not that easy to write, or how to write them is still a matter of controversy. Moreover, the market does not seem to be very friendly to industry literature. Although there have been pioneers such as "Happy Writing Methods of Light Novels", "The Idle Wolf Writer is a Beautiful Girl Monster", and "Choke the Neck", these works are all isolated and do not leave any practical inspiration for the latecomers. These works are all relatively complex. In recent years, "Huang Man", a relatively popular industry article on the market, has directly entered the setting that comics can only be drawn if they are hugged by beautiful girls. So breaking the past and opening up a new path does not necessarily mean that this approach is good. It still depends on the author's own ability. At this time it is too early to say whether this book and the author will succeed or fail, but there is no doubt that this will be a magical book if it is written.

Have you been writing this book for two years?

Just write whatever you want, don't worry about what others think. Whether it is good or wrong, it doesn't matter. Everything that has been created in the past will become the fuel for the present, giving it a higher enthusiasm for the next creation. Are you still afraid of making mistakes in your life? It doesn't matter anymore. Just write.

There are works such as Clannad and The Shepherd in the Library. It can be seen that the author's ambition is not small. Even for the style, it must be kept at the top of the list. The writing style needs to be improved, the plot moves too fast, there were several parts in the first chapter that made me feel embarrassed, and logically speaking, a person would not have this kind of conversation with a stranger. However, the overall potential is huge, and I am very optimistic about it. It would be great if I could improve my writing skills. Needless to say, if you keep writing, you may become a god, so keep working hard!

Is it really okay to be so casual? Code words to see how you feel!

After reading it, I feel that the writing is good, but the structure needs to be strengthened. It can be considered a good book, but it is difficult to read because some scenes are not well described briskly, so it may be difficult to read. If you change these, it will be an excellent work.

There have been many times when I wanted to write other works, but I don't know why this book always stuck in my heart, which also made me unable to create new works with peace of mind. I always felt that this was wrong or that was not good, and it was clear that nothing would work. So I came back to write this book. The Literary Club is here.

Monday... The cycle begins again... (I write planned updates every week, but never...)

"Taoyuan Suppression of Bandits" The soldier loves to read and has collected it permanently. Come on 🤝

Very well written! Collected! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

It seems that I am really at my wits end, so I specially found a remote area to live and write these ten novels, but it only took two or three days for me to fail again