I'm Such a Great Artist

This is my first time writing an article, and I know that I must have many shortcomings. There will be some logical inaccuracies, some sentences that are not refined enough, and there will definitely be deficiencies in the characterization, and I don't know how to grasp the reader's mind... When I had 30,000 words before, I automatically applied for the visa, but unfortunately it didn't pass. Of course, now I'm lucky enough to have been notified, and then I got it. But even so, I also know that I still have many shortcomings, and I also want to know where I am lacking and where I can improve. If you can see this advertisement, I hope you can help me, read my book, and tell me where I am lacking. I will treat you with sincerity. Book Title: The Trial of Infinite Death Thank you!

I don't understand what you are trying to express. You are going all over the place.

After reading a few chapters, I understood why the author was so confused. What a mess! ! ! The author puts n unrelated things together, what exactly is he going to write about? ? ? 😥😥😥😥

After reading Chapter 33, I decided to give up; the author's writing was too confusing.

Walking all the way, the author is so strong

Not to mention your conception, outline, and plot. Your writing style is too poor and wordy, at least you have to let people understand what you are writing...

The author's writing style is extraordinary, the characters are vividly drawn, and the plot is contrary to expectations and unexpected! It is a masterpiece of ten years of online literature! In order to repay her kindness, she risked a huge crime and married him without hesitation. For the sake of his wife's safety, he listened to the slanders and almost caused his wife to die several times. For her husband, she did not hesitate to set off a flash flood and poison all living beings. In order to be with his wife, he actually did something earth-shattering. The story between her and him was touching and is still being circulated today! I wish the author may sell more than 10,000 copies a day and may all his wishes come true! Xu Xianchou, the anchor of "New White Snake Live Room", is broken. His live broadcast system cannot be turned off. What should I do?

I was so confused. In Chapter 97, I was still PKing in the desert. Then I bought a car and went home. Damn, I really can't support it anymore.

Who the hell is Liu Daqian? 🤔🤔

I recommend "The Road to Hegemony at the End of Qin". Friends who like the end of Qin can check it out.

This level of sloppiness rivals that of Zhang Weiyou... What do you want to do?

What a situation? This rhythm is wrong! Isn't it time to dance? Damn it, I read it on Chuangshi Chinese website, and no one paid attention to my comments. I came here to see if the author had any reaction.

What I hate most is that everything is tied to the name of charity.

It's just a little bit different! The protagonist's IQ and the system's pirated attributes. I hope some newbies can read it. I've been poisoned!