Villain Becomes God

I was poisoned in the first chapter of the game! At the beginning, the protagonist has to confess that he is also a time traveler? Being restricted by the system, he takes out his temper on his maid. This kind of intelligence and quality are not as good as pig's feet. It is really meaningless.

You can still become a god just like this,,, haha

I can't stand it, so I'd say it's time travel. I've added a lot of my own original settings and plots. I'd call it original, but it's still time travel across different planes. It's a mess, with no original sparkle or the feel of the original work. Since you have traveled through time, you can pick up girls and rely on your predictions to seize opportunities. What is the use of adding a lot of original links? Let's just talk about Zhu Xian. There are a lot of tests to join the Qingyun Sect? Brother, are you Lin Jingyu, okay? There are also qi-boosting pills and pulse-expanding pills, haha, why not just write about time travel into the cultivation novels that the protagonist has read. Wouldn't it be better to be all original? In the end, Zhu Xian is not Zhu Xian, and originality is not original. When writing about time travel, especially time travel into classics, it must at least be in line with the setting of the original work, and have a feeling of three-thirds of the original work. You can follow the plot, but don't add some messy things. To put it bluntly, "Zhu Xian" is a love story between cultivating immortals and mastering martial arts. In this world, there are no immortals, no upper realm, no flying, no messy skills, no pills, and no even storage bags. You add those worlds that are more suitable for mortals to cultivate immortality and are not suitable for Zhu Xian. Looking at what you wrote, even those who have seriously read Zhu Xian and like Zhu Xian can't bear it.

Just read the introduction. Zhang Xiaofan and Xiaoyan may have to fight with them, but if you ignore me and I won't ignore you, Old Devil Han, it's better for everyone. If conditions didn't allow it, he'd wish he could become the Shilipo Sword God. I'm wondering what kind of painful plot the author will arrange to keep Old Devil Han and the protagonist alive. Of course, if the system's brainless force stipulates that the opponent will be wiped out if not killed, then there's nothing to say.

The setting is not done well, water, the protagonist is just a loser, a woman's kindness, childish

Aren't villains always suppressing the protagonist in everything, and end up talking too much or doing their own thing? How come you have become a passerby here? Those are clearly not villains, okay? The author hasn't figured out what the villain is yet!

As soon as he arrived at the Immortal Sect, he became a fool.

Looking at the thread, all the chapters are missing and I have withdrawn them.

It feels so confusing when I look at it, and I don't want to read it anymore.

Pig's feet are so stupid. Not only does she have nothing to do with Baguio, but she also told her the Book of Heaven, which is a blatant act of supporting the enemy.

The writing is poor, messy, and somewhat incomprehensible. The plot lacks necessary explanations and twists

The two worlds of food and grass in the front, what the hell is the fairy gate in the back, the author has changed?

As someone who has been pursuing this book for the first time, I feel that it has not been so good since writing about reality. Please change the author. Fan records can be checked. Thank you.

Randomly changing the name of the realm in the original work makes me feel dizzy.

It's so boring to watch, I feel like I can't keep up with the rhythm. Are there any spiritual power chapters in Zhu Xian? It doesn't respect the original work at all. You can add your own ideas to it, but don't add something that doesn't exist. It's too awkward.

It looked good in the early stages, but when it came to writing about reality later on, it didn't work. It felt like it was written by two people.

It doesn't feel like a dark novel at all.

The author may not have even read the books he wrote. The names and realms are all wrong.

It's so disgusting, I wish the main character died

To be honest, this book doesn't seem worthy of a villain. It's better to change the name to a supporting role and call the cannon fodder a god! Villain? How can the people in the first two stories be called villains? At most, they are cannon fodder! Even if the plot is just copied, and you insist it is original, just a few words will make it original? It's awkward to change it from here to see it. Change Bajibeng to Bajibeng? Qingyun changed to Qingyun? It's really painful to watch

I can name a dozen books that are pure bad guys, do you believe it?

There is only one fundamental reason. The title of the book says "Villain" It turns out the protagonist is the Virgin Anyone who sees this title is a reader of dark books. It turns out that the Holy Mother left And the audience for this kind of book will stop reading when they see the title. So: Your name is Villain, the content is dark, neither black nor white, who are you showing it to? The concept of righteousness and evil is outdated and disliked by people. To put it bluntly, righteousness and evil means: only save beauties but not fat women.

When I see Old Mo Han, I have to come and take a look.

Junk books can only say

I want to say that is not a fighter? Why did you become a spirit? Isn't it vindictive? Why did it become aura?

Why do I act like a fool as soon as I wake up in Immortal Sect? What's wrong with this book? I can't understand it. It wasn't written by one person at all.

I recommend you to read One Piece: Cavendish and see how others write dark stories. How to write a villain