The Villain Becomes a God

I was poisoned in the first chapter of the game! At the beginning, the protagonist has to confess that he is also a time traveler? Being restricted by the system, he takes out his temper on his maid. This kind of intelligence and quality are not as good as pig's feet. It is really meaningless.

You can still become a god just like this,,, haha

I can't stand it, so I'd say it's time travel. I've added a lot of my own original settings and plots. I'd call it original, but it's still time travel across different planes. It's a mess, with no original sparkle or the feel of the original work. Since you have traveled through time, you can pick up girls and rely on your predictions to seize opportunities. What is the use of adding a lot of original links? Let's just talk about Zhu Xian. There are a lot of tests to join the Qingyun Sect? Brother, are you Lin Jingyu, okay? There are also qi-boosting pills and pulse-expanding pills, haha, why not just write about time travel into the cultivation novels that the protagonist has read. Wouldn't it be better to be all original? In the end, Zhu Xian is not Zhu Xian, and originality is not original. When writing about time travel, especially time travel into classics, it must at least be in line with the setting of the original work, and have a feeling of three-thirds of the original work. You can follow the plot, but don't add some messy things. To put it bluntly, "Zhu Xian" is a love story between cultivating immortals and mastering martial arts. In this world, there are no immortals, no upper realm, no flying, no messy skills, no pills, and no even storage bags. You add those worlds that are more suitable for mortals to cultivate immortality and are not suitable for Zhu Xian. Looking at what you wrote, even those who have seriously read Zhu Xian and like Zhu Xian can't bear it.

Just read the introduction. Zhang Xiaofan and Xiaoyan may have to fight with them, but if you ignore me and I won't ignore you, Old Devil Han, it's better for everyone. If conditions didn't allow it, he'd wish he could become the Shilipo Sword God. I'm wondering what kind of painful plot the author will arrange to keep Old Devil Han and the protagonist alive. Of course, if the system's brainless force stipulates that the opponent will be wiped out if not killed, then there's nothing to say.

The setting is not done well, water, the protagonist is just a loser, a woman's kindness, childish

Aren't villains always suppressing the protagonist in everything, and end up talking too much or doing their own thing? How come you have become a passerby here? Those are clearly not villains, okay? The author hasn't figured out what the villain is yet!

As soon as he arrived at the Immortal Sect, he became a fool.

Looking at the thread, all the chapters are missing and I have withdrawn them.

It feels so confusing when I look at it, and I don't want to read it anymore.

It looked good in the early stages, but when it came to writing about reality later on, it didn't work. It felt like it was written by two people.