Fantasy Miraculous Life

It looks so familiar, it's the anime Grimgar of Fantasy and Ashes, right?

You, the author of this book, made the protagonists so kind-hearted. Also, I saw that the teams and battle groups in the book have orientalized names. It's also a bit weird to see orientalized names for those who are not the chosen ones.

If the Qingfeng Chapter dies, don't you search the corpse?

"A Certain Misaka Girl's Comprehensive Comic Journey" comes to support, come on——

I was in junior high school when I played Miracle. The stunning skill special effects, weapon special effects, and various bonus points all made me addicted to it and couldn't extricate myself. (The legendary magic is too boring and Yitian can't understand it.) Later, the appearance of plug-ins made me lose myself, abandon my smart girlfriend, and go further and further on the road to singleness.

The plot of the Golden Young Dragon was written too deliberately.

Sorry, I don't think I'm suitable for your book. Finally, I'll give you a suggestion. The protagonist and their friends are just trying to die all the time. Besides, not many people will read this kind of book. The concept of this book is good, but you have to capture the types of books that people read today, such as (cool writing, upgrade flow, comedy, etc.).

Since this book is biased toward Western fantasy, don't bring in some aspects of the East. For example, in Chapter 6, "Master, Master, Uncle", people in the West call them "teachers", otherwise it would look too weird. The author hopes to improve it after seeing this.