Star Traveler

I'm writing about Xianxia again. Isn't the name "Taikou Tianzun Jue" very cool? Please help me collect it and give me some suggestions 😃😃😃. It's okay to read it.

Once upon a time, there was a scholar who passed by a dilapidated temple on his way to Beijing to take the exam, so the scholar slept in the dilapidated temple that night. There is a female ghost living in the ruined temple. Unfortunately, she is not beautiful. In fact, the female ghost looks pretty good, but I can't say how beautiful she is. So the scholar was a little disappointed. The female ghost ignored the scholar, lit a string of castor beans with dancing flames, and sat at the table, braiding a pair of grasshoppers with long green grass. The female ghost used the dim light to look blankly at the scholar's slightly raised eyebrows and straightened nose, and her cheeks felt slightly warm. So the scholar decided to chat with the female ghost. Scholars are more talkative, and the popular saying is that they can fool people. The scholar talked about the places he passed along the way. He once took a small boat and sailed in the vast river, passing steep cliffs, wide farmland, passing the soft singing of girls and the loud chants of fishermen. Driving from day to night, passing by either colorful or dim lights. He seemed to see many past events passing by like the scenery on both sides of the Taiwan Strait. There was a kind of sadness and peace hidden deep in his heart that began to become clear in the darkness. The future was far away and untouchable in the increasingly deep darkness. The female ghost Zhiyi listened quietly, her thoughts seemed to drift thousands of miles away with the scholar's narration. One or two castor beans on the table burned, and the crackling flame gradually dimmed... The female ghost could no longer remember the things in the world. The scholar's narration made the female ghost feel strange, wonderful and inexplicably sad. The female ghost gently caressed the pair of grasshoppers. The long tentacles trembled slightly, and they were cool. They were clearly holding them in the palm of their hands but seemed to be about to run away at any time. When it was almost dawn, the scholar and the female ghost said goodbye. The female ghost said, "When you came back from the exam, you passed by and asked me to play with you." The scholar smiled, took a pair of green grasshoppers in the female ghost's hand, and said, "Give these grasshoppers to me to play with." After speaking, he gently patted the female ghost's head. The female ghost wants to say, when you come back from the exam, can you take me out to play with you? But the scholar had already turned around and left. If you go down this road, you will never come back. The female ghost thought to herself. Many years later, an old man passed by a dilapidated temple. He was once a scholar. He went to Beijing to take the exam, got a neither high nor low ranking, became a medium-sized official, and later married a wife who was not too good-looking but not very beautiful. Now he was returning to his hometown. On his way back to his hometown, he complained about a dilapidated temple. There was a female ghost living in the dilapidated temple. The old man chatted with the female ghost. The old man said that when he was young, he always wanted to meet a gentle and beautiful female ghost. The female ghost suddenly realized that she was also old. The female ghost turned and walked away, leaving the old man sitting alone for a long, long time. He suddenly remembered that there once was a pair of green grasshoppers, their cool, long tentacles trembling slightly in his hand. The pair of grasshoppers are so beautiful, but I can't remember who they gave them to or where they were thrown away. "The Guide to Bliss" Go deep into the memory of the deceased, fulfill his unfulfilled wish, and extradite him! The structure is rigorous but the story is relaxed, and the genre is supernatural but not scary. It is composed of small interlocking stories, suitable for getting into!

The plot is a bit stiff... A bit too taken for granted, so it is suitable for readers with a younger reading age.

You are totally out of tune as a shuttler.

This is my first time writing an article, and I know that I must have many shortcomings. There will be some logical inaccuracies, some sentences that are not refined enough, and there will definitely be deficiencies in the characterization, and I don't know how to grasp the reader's mind... When I had 30,000 words before, I automatically applied for the visa, but unfortunately it didn't pass. Of course, now I'm lucky enough to have been notified, and then I got it. But even so, I also know that I still have many shortcomings, and I also want to know where I am lacking and where I can improve. If you can see this advertisement, I hope you can help me, read my book, and tell me where I am lacking. I will treat you with sincerity. Book Title: The Trial of Infinite Death Thank you!