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I just want to know what the hell is this, it makes me want to vomit.

1. Everything written is spoken. In a sentence of 20 words, at least 4 are false words. 2. It's too procrastinating, writing a chapter in one phone call. 3. Maybe you want to write something meaningful, but it is too preachy. When you write a novel, who can you report your writing and thoughts to?

It's not that you don't support newcomers, you have to give me an advantage to support you. How can I support you if I don't write well?

Can the pig's trotters be given a normal name? . .

The names you choose in the game are too careless. It's better to register with your real name.

To be honest, when I saw the name of the protagonist, I didn't want to read this book. It's about the world of martial arts. Look at the introduction and premise. There should be a national war in the future. Don't you think it's awkward if you scribbled the name and the name randomly? Also, can you be less clichéd and more sincere? If the writing is not very good, then you can refine it a bit. If the full text is 1,000 words, you should add at least 500! I can't stand it, how can I support it? Wouldn't it be nice to keep the text pure?

Just read chapter 5 and write about women for 100 chapters, and it will be amazing again.

Http://u. Qidian. Com/z8DufroP Misaka No. 19090 Was experimented in advance, and was killed by Accelerator without any suspense. Death, this is Misaka's destined fate—— Misaka has a self, repeats her own destiny in different forms of existence, and in other forms in countless dimensions, but she has the desire to change her own destiny. Can Misaka girl's wish come true? Why would she have such an opportunity? Stay tuned——

Let me give you a suggestion: condense the current chapters into 30 chapters, and then expand them into 65 chapters. You can still read it.

I like this subject matter, but the author still has a long way to go to be sincere, but it is not easy to persevere for so many chapters. I hope to improve my physical abilities before I can devote myself to writing. 😰

I just discovered it and started reading it, new articles and new experiences. Not bad.

Write one chapter on one phone call, don't stop, write a hundred chapters of phone records for us to see

Have you never seen a beautiful woman in China? Or should we pretend that we have never seen a beautiful woman? Can you not be so watery and have such bad routines?

She likes to eat sweets, and he likes to buy sweets for her to eat. The two fell in love, but they broke up because they applied for different universities. A few years later, when she was watching "Si Chen Will Become the God of Love" alone at home, she saw his text message: "I want to get married." She cried and replied: "I don't like eating sweets at all!" Then he quickly replied: "I want to eat sweets with you for the rest of my life.

It's all introduction. . . . Character introduction. Item introduction. Introduction to the sect. . Your three pictures have more text than others. All written by the author himself

I think the story is very good, but the author likes to use it very much. In fact, Yang Wei's catchphrase seems very unsatisfactory. I read the first three chapters and was very tired. Why does the author write this at the beginning? Just write directly, "Actually, what is Yang Wei doing?" And don't mention this or that.