In Those Days of Imprisonment

It's not that using Celestial Magic is bad, but what you use is too complicated and can't be organized into a system. Hippo is quite sophisticated in writing forbidden magic. Basically, he can find the occult theory that supports this magic in reality (mainly the gold system, which these people all exist in reality. Yue Zhan also borrowed these theories, but obviously not like Hippo) So in-depth, if you are interested, you can go to the Magic Forbidden Bar to read the research of the big guys), instead of just jumping in randomly according to which one is pretty much written. Not to mention how profound the writing is, it seems that it should be okay to use some snacks to write things like the Five Elements and Bagua smoothly, but you have written so much that I guess there is no way to change it. I can only hope that the author will pay attention to it in subsequent creations.

What a drama! When you see people using magic, superpowers, etc., And then you try to bring in the ability to cultivate immortality, it doesn't even feel like it.

To be honest, this book did have some bad points when I first read it. The plot was not smooth, the male protagonist was not very clear and I did not like it very much, and the fighting scenes were not very well described. After gradually finishing the first part, the book gradually began to become clearer. Not bad at all, the popularization of some religious knowledge, the influx of many self-created plots, the irreplaceable protagonist of Kamijou Touma, the unique view of Aleister from other fan novels, and the rich world view of the forbidden world are all the highlights of this book. The last one is of course the single heroine Long Live Misaka Mikoto \(≧▽≦)/! ! ! ! Big cheers for the author! [Quietly making a small comment, hehehe, there will be a place where sugar can be made and sugar can be used for dessert~] Support this book and support the author!

I've written so much but it's not popular. Although I haven't read it, I can't think of a reason. The author is so miserable yet so perseverant…

I now announce the establishment of Fang Yuan Party

What the hell? (ŐдŐ๑), Why do I see Kamijou Touma as the heroine in the character introduction?

Um. . . The previous plot was a bit confusing, and when I saw Kamijou Tetsubashi's solo scene with Kamijou, I wanted to make a rant. Originally, I thought this section of the original work was the main reason why Kamijou opened her heart to Kamijou, and the protagonist of the same novel wanted to increase Kamijou's favorability, so replacing this incident was the most direct and efficient way. But the author copied the original work in this section, and Kamijou was struck by lightning in the end. Seeing this, I can only think that the author wanted Kamijou to continue to live in Pao's heart. However, the protagonist suddenly forced himself to have sex and hugged Pao. . . 😥

Let me ask you, is this book an original work or a second edition?

Made, you actually can't speak Chinese characters? Haha, I can't stand it anymore

If you haven't read the content yet, here's the picture first

Author, do you have a book club? If you have any, please send them, thank you

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