The Master of Time in the City

As someone who read half of it and then started reading the catalog, I can tell you responsibly, don't read it, it's really boring. It's a good subject matter, but there are some loopholes in the early stage that are acceptable, but from the third third of the way, it's all about stallions, and they're still kind of white stallions... 7 Out of 10 chapters are on the bed, and the wording is extremely empty! Enjoy beautiful women? Seventy percent of your ten-chapter book are minions, and there is not a single curse word in it. They are all "I am so happy to enjoy you all", "You enjoy so much of us alone..." And so on. Don't ask whether these are ** words that a person can say. Do you think these are human words? In a book of more than ten pages, the word "enjoyment" appears thirty or forty times. Do you think the readers are pigs, feeding them swill? ? An extremely low-level book, a good subject matter wasted~

The protagonist is afraid of being exposed and chooses to compromise. The readability of this book has been reduced by at least one-third. Analyze it, as time goes by, more and more people will trade time with the protagonist, and more and more people will threaten the protagonist with such excuses. Could it be that the protagonist continues to compromise again and again. In fact, this kind of thing is like the unspoken rules of entertainment. As long as there is no real evidence and he refuses to admit it, most people will not take him seriously. Do you not believe it? Let me ask you, how can you prove that I bought or sold you twenty years of life? Therefore, the threat from Lawyer He is not a problem at all. Moreover, those who have money to buy their lives are rich people. They are powerful and their interests stand with the protagonist. Those who have no money and work hard are poor people. They have no strength and it is difficult to pose any threat to the protagonist.

The logic is clear and thorough, and it doesn't make you feel uncomfortable when you look at it. Like it!

I read a few books with a male and female protagonist, and once I saw Stallion, I didn't want to read it.

My name is Wu Hao. . . Feel a bit ashamed

The male protagonist in the novel who has his own personality is my favorite, yoyo~

This book is the craziest novel I have read in 10 years. It is called The Master of Time, and the protagonist buys and sells time. I asked why it is all about love and love? Around chapter 400, there are already seven or eight female protagonists. There must be at least one or twenty female protagonists in the future, right? It's purely a romance love harem stud novel. A very bad book!

Why don't you say you are a slave of time?

The author thinks too simply. Time trading cannot be that simple. The characters in the play are too calm. Just imagine, can you hold the feeling of selling your life?

This book should be called, Time Slave in the City (Harem Stallion)

There are also 5 out of 10 chapters on the bed. Isn't it disgusting?

After reading two chapters, did the author confuse something? What you are buying and selling is not time, but lifespan.

If the protagonist has the strength of a god or demon, then it would be okay to wander around casually. He is just an ordinary person who can trade life span, and it is so obvious that even a country, let alone a wealthy family, may not be able to protect it.

I have written 3.18 Million words, but the author level is only level 1. Although I haven't started reading it yet, I don't think I need to read it. As long as the writing is decent, it cannot be only level 1. I have found a lot of novels, and I have also followed books that have changed from level 1 to level 5. Newcomers can also stand out, as long as the writing is good. Since more than 3 million is still level 1, there may be a reason why it is only level 1.

By the way, this book is a harem novel, right? I only read a dozen chapters, and several beauties appeared, including a school beauty, two sisters who are not related to the protagonist by blood, a beautiful housekeeper, and two protagonists who feel sorry for their ex-girlfriends...

It's a very good book. I've read Chapter 45, but I'm shaking off my clothes in almost every chapter. I'm defeated. Author, you win!

Before Chapter 400, it was okay. After Chapter 400, it was like a stallion. Out of 10 chapters, 5 of them were in bed.

See Chapter 6 Abandoned There are too many women!

What the hell are you writing after you go to another world? All kinds of water characters. There are more than 20 chapters for a college entrance exam. There are more than 10 chapters for a qualification test. You can also write 3 chapters if you buy a space ring. You are not as good at water characters. What are you writing?

The subject matter is very good, but the writing is too ordinary, so it's okay not to read it.

Thank you Shennong for testing the poison😏😏😏

The plot advances layer by layer, and the writing is really good.

This goddess, I thought of a series... (Dedicating mental retardation for a beautiful different world)

**Book The family is so rich, but no one can protect them

I just looked at the first few pictures and couldn't stand it anymore. After reading the comments, they were all negative. Thank you Shennong for trying the poison!

Good article and good book, but not enough popular elements. It is recommended to add more, so as not to let the good book be buried.

I read a few chapters, they were very impressive and I learned a lot!

Great, great, it would be even better if it could be faster.

I have read too many books, and such a good book is so rare.

5 Tickets are given out every day, it will be much faster! ! !