Live Streaming in Another World

He is not very slow-tempered and knows how to be cautious when doing things. The protagonist really has potential, ahem, I hope I can find a partner, otherwise I will look lonely.

To be honest, if I were to comment on this novel, it would be that the story is rich enough, but not exciting enough. How should I put it? There are many amazing things about this novel as a whole, and they are all related to the scientific field. There are also many interesting places, most of which are reflected in the interaction between the live broadcast rooms, but the frequent occurrence of such jokes in the Chengye Live Room and the Failure Live Room can easily cause a kind of aesthetic fatigue. There are also many plots in the article that should have been described in one go at certain moments, but at this time, such a live broadcast was inserted. When the content of the live broadcast is finished and then return to the original matter, as a reader, if you continue to watch it, you will feel a little disconnected from the previous content. It felt like the atmosphere of the previous events was diluted by the live broadcast room. The sword is a double-edged sword that can kill and save. The key depends on whose hand the sword is used. Therefore, sometimes such live broadcast paragraphs are used very well and make the book appear very interesting, but sometimes they are not so beautiful and will mess up the atmosphere of the plot. As for how to use it specifically, as a pure reader who has never written any novels, I have no opinions on you, the author. You still have to figure everything out on your own. These suggestions are based on my true feelings. I don't know why, but when I read this novel, I felt a sense of depression and heavyness overall. Even the happy plot during the live broadcast was described to me like this. It feels like one person is leading them through the unknown scenery in front of countless compatriots, but they can't help or give themselves anything. Look at loneliness.

The main reason why it is not popular is that the main character is amazing in the middle of the work, and I don't know how to write it later. Like the data warriors, pure IQ crushing is actually very exciting.

Qi Chi, layman, where is your new book? What about the new book?

I just wanted to ask if anyone knows when the author will write a new book. Ah, in the desert of books

I found out that the author was a time traveler, so he was caught. It seems that no new books have been published

The plots of Layman's works are very compact. I would like to discuss based on the works I have read, whether it is Law of the Wasteland, Data Heroes, Extraordinary Game, or this other world live broadcast room. Basically, things happen one after another, closely connected, and it is relatively rare to settle down and think about summarizing mistakes. Even if you find a place to rest for a while in the rapids to sort out the whole story. There are really very few, especially the Transcendent game and this other world live broadcast room. The protagonist is basically in a state of continuous rotation. Let's briefly summarize the Extraordinary game. When the protagonist is hospitalized, he encounters another person who wants to kill him. He uses chili powder to kill him, and it immediately becomes a tense and exciting hospital copy. I finished the hospital dungeon exhausted, the guide appeared, and something unexpected happened right away! The Seven Corrupt Armies are in chaos, and the protagonist is on the run to save his friends. I finally got into Tiangong University because my grades were so good, so I worked non-stop to maintain my advantage. The harder I worked, the more advantage I had, and it continued in a virtuous cycle. Well, that's probably it. Because I have good grades and I don't know if I have solidified the foundation, I challenge high difficulty. I pass thrillingly and challenge high difficulty because of my low strength to get full marks. I continue to challenge high difficulty. I encounter a very powerful enemy (the legitimate son of Longhu Mountain) and defeat the enemy with difficulty. I also work hard to enhance and enhance! Finally, it seems that I can settle down, but I was arrested because of Wei Feifei, but that's it! You must strengthen yourself to save others even though you are trying to sell everything! Upgrade all the way and go fast! After saving people, I have to contribute to the union of time and space! It doesn't stop again. . . Well, I definitely don't mean to criticize. This does not mean that this kind of writing with a tight plot is not good. As long as it is arranged properly and the twists are reasonable, it is also very good. The layman's work is not perfect, but it is pretty good. But watching this kind of work makes me feel tired. Because the plot is tight, readers will also feel nervous as they follow the protagonist's vision. A work like this, where the plot is always at a tense moment, cannot be managed at the speed of 4,000 words a day by layman. I definitely don't mean that lay people are slow to update! Four or five thousand words of updates per day are definitely not too little, but they are not too much either. The update speed, which is directly related to the intense plot, is one update per day (four to five thousand words) in a leisurely manner, which gives a subtle sense of dislocation. If, according to the speed of plot development, a third update breaks out at a critical moment, the performance of the Extraordinary game will definitely be several levels better. You must know that some readers decide to keep it because they can't stand the daily update speed. If they keep it, they will forget the previous plot. If they keep it, they will forget it and no longer want to read it. There is such a part. Most readers use their mobile phones to read novels. Note that the purpose of novels is to relax. Therefore, layman's works are not suitable for those who need to relax when they are serialized. But these people who need to relax are basically working people. They can afford to subscribe, just because it is not suitable. . . You know. This is the current result. Layman's works were not very successful when they were serialized. After the book is completed, subscriptions will continue to come in one after another, and there may even be more than when they were serialized.

I want to know when the new pit will be opened.

I read 20 chapters without thinking. It was too hard to read the character names.

The author has opened a new book