Suffocate Moments

When I first read this book, I felt that the writing style was too old-fashioned and not suitable for young people to read. But after reading it a few more times, I realized that the author wanted to write suspense literature, so there was no problem. Suspense literature written in this style of writing makes it easier for readers to penetrate deeply into the world composed of words, and it is startling and fascinating at every step. However, it is not without its problems. Although I don't know why it was recommended, the number of words is too small, and there has been no sign of updates for three days, which is really confusing. And because I haven't gotten it yet, I really don't like it to be as old as autumn. Although I can't read it, I also wish the author can persist in writing the words in his heart regardless of criticism, so I leave this comment. To be honest, it's hard for me to write like this, let alone the people who read it. As the saying goes, you can't speak well. Such retro writing is still a bit niche in today's society. But since it is true love, then stick to it. Don't care too much about push and push. Just let it go with a normal mind.

The first chapter is too exaggerated, the method is too exaggerated and unrealistic. The two-year internship period is a ghost, and the salary is too low and often starves. The old employees leave their jobs to the two-year interns, but they can stay in this company. Is this a regular salary of 100,000 yuan a month?

The author's protagonist setting poisoned me. As for being so poor, how can I have enough to eat on 3,000 yuan a month? It sounds like it is miserable. I only have 600 yuan a month for food, clothing, and living expenses, and I can still live well.

Without Chapters 1 to 8, the obsessive-compulsive disorder would collapse

It's so awesome, I couldn't stand the first chapter, it's so fake

In the past, when I saw paid chapters, I would go to the website. I don't know why I accidentally clicked on the subscription after reading this book. Maybe... I cried because I was reading the novel for the first time. Don't laugh at me, but I really got choked up in Chapter 77. There is also the story of the driver looking for his daughter... Because I have a daughter, so I can relate? I have been reading Million Words, which makes me happy and depressed. I heard that it is coming to an end and I feel emotional. I think the only shortcoming of the author's book is that he is too concerned about the completion of the picture and uses a more traditional writing method compared to the online article. You can feel the author's efforts in catering to the online article and his own writing style! It is rare that the plot is not well written, but the realistic plot and emotional description are very attractive. Not only the heroine Zhao Nianci, but also the first love Chunxia, ​​or Qingqing, all make people like the characters very much. However, Internet articles are relatively fast food after all. What they pay attention to is simple violence. Conflict and excitement are the most important. As for the author's emphasis, most readers who are used to reading Internet articles will inevitably not be used to it... For example, the emotional line written by the author is a gradual process with reasons. Older people like me can understand it, but what most people want to see is how powerful and attractive the male protagonist is, and then girls flock to him. Having said all this, I just don't want the author to feel that his writing is not good. At least, I like it very much! The picture is very full, the story does not appear to be procrastinating, and the rhythm is an interesting interweaving of daily life in the story of obsession. The main line is also very transparent. The conflict points are from low to high, and become more exciting as you go to the back. As a novel with typos, rather than a popular online novel, it is a very good novel. I can't thank you enough for the full subscription, I can only give you a long review. I hope readers who click in can read it more quietly than other books. Thank you. 🌹

"Circle of Suffocating Friends" is over. I'm very sorry that I can't see the ending so late due to 404. Update time paused on August 31st Although there are not many, I am very grateful to the book friends who have been accompanying me to the completion of this book. Your clicks, collections, recommendation votes, monthly votes, and of course subscriptions are all important nutrients for my life. Every time I see a page popping up on my phone with news about the Writer's Assistant, I will be excited for a while. I would like to express my special gratitude to Dark Night, Floating Life, and Sagittarius. From the beginning, no one cared about them, and they were even criticized. When I wanted to give up the most, it was your two or three subscriptions that allowed me to maintain the five subscriptions including pirated subscriptions. If it weren't for you, I might not have been able to complete this novel. After that, I got noticed by the owner of the big book list, and I got many new readers, and I got to know Hai Kai Shui and Kaka. This is really interesting... No matter what, the ending of this book is not very ugly. For me, it can be regarded as a life achievement. Thank you, thank you very much to the readers who have been watching until the end. Crying, laughing, touching, this is the circle of friends that makes me feel happy But this is not the end of my online writing. Please also pay attention to my new book "The Salted Fish System Ruined My Youth"

I voted for two monthly votes and recommendation votes. The author must not tj

Chapters 3, 4, 6, and 7 were eaten?

Two years of internship, what kind of different world is this? Taken too much for granted.

Dear brothers, don't worry about the internship period. It's just that the stupid male protagonist was deceived by the black foreman. Sometimes the novel is lower than reality and just uses numbers to increase the impact of the event. It's just that I didn't grasp the intensity well, but it's too late to change it. The memories don't match up.

Why so much less? The author should rectify it quickly. Now when I read the book at Qidian, it doesn't feel like it is genuine. It is worse than a pirated version. There are always hundreds of chapters missing. How come there are so many that need to be rectified?

It's not that I don't read it, it's just that I can't read it because of the missing chapter.

Two years of internship? It seems that the general internship period is two months and three months, or at most half a year.

Is the author still alive? If you are still alive and you make a sound, I will give you a reward.

Everyone 🤝 I am also a 95-year-old. The internship paragraph at the beginning was written in my heart. Unfortunately, the rest of the article is a bit jerky to read. Obviously, the online articles you read are not as much as the traditional literature you read. This is inevitable. So it will be a bit highbrow. It is recommended that you read more online articles. After all, what you write is online articles. It would be great if it can be appreciated by both refined and popular people. Naturally, you can see through the routines at a glance and learn the techniques in one go. There is no need to read books. There are also many good people in the Internet literature world. I am still persisting in writing now, I give you 32 likes???

I'm afraid that there are not even a hundred floors, so it's over.

I have decided to vote here for the three recommendation votes every day from now on. Please support the author, please work hard, okay 😊

Well, Zhao Nianci is still not resurrected. My heart hurts so much

Reading click-1, 🤔🤔🤔🤔

After reading a few chapters, I feel pretty good. But after reading the book review, the ending didn't seem very good, and I didn't want to read it immediately. Never watch a tragic ending, lest you feel depressed

The transliteration should be "I kick Saga" and "I kick Saga" (Bo~er-the second tone =be)

I feel that the action description and psychology are a bit vague, like the scene where Wang Fa blocks the protagonist, and the following chapter

Uh, uh, there are too many missing chapters.

I just saw this great book and subscribed to it. Unfortunately, many chapters are missing.

What a mess, I can't read it!

Zhou Qing's story made me sad. The author's writing skills have allowed me to see growth in this chapter, and I hope the author can write better and better 😄

The book list has been added, and all subscriptions are supported. Come on, the author, give me a hug~

Come on, author, |(￣3￣)|raise high

After reading more than 50 pictures, I feel that the author's writing is really good and does not look like a newcomer. However, I would like to ask if this Zhao Nianci is the heroine? Very concerned about this