The Dao Lord of the Primordial Beginning

After reading it now, I really feel that this is the kind of fairy tale that is slow but getting more and more satisfying. From the solid beginning of the first chapter when you wake up from time travel, to the five-door competition, to the understanding of simplifying the complex, the rhythm is comfortable, the fighting is crisp, and the setting is also very ambitious. It is not easy for the author to write more than a hundred chapters. This old-school and steady approach is worthy of support. Come on, keep reading! 👍

I'm optimistic about you, update slowly and keep updating.

Dad, I haven't eaten for three days, so I'm just waiting for your update!

In the second paragraph of the first chapter, the word "body shape" is repeated; the sentence "eyes radiate brilliance, and the brilliance is extraordinary" is also a bit problematic; the third paragraph describes how to retract the radiant light and change it to the point where the light in the eyes begins to slowly become introverted. However, the routine flow of rebirth is still used very well at the beginning, which can enhance the reader's sense of immersion.

Is it still okay to pick up this book and write it after ten years...? I re-opened a new book and said it was going to be a major overhaul but stopped. I'd better start a new book again.

When I went there, I saw that this was a 16-year-old book. Did anything happen to the author at that time? If you keep writing, you will become a god in 16 years. What a shame.

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