Traveling Across the Universe

It felt good in the early stage, but in the middle stage it became a bit confusing. My views on other works were very confusing, and they were obviously not the author's own views. It's good to read and pass the time...

When the protagonist's cultivation is strong and he can see subtle things, how can the heroine continue to see if she doesn't practice?

I'm really sorry for this title. I'm halfway through the book. I just traveled through one world and it's gone.

It seems that there are very few books about traveling through the universe of martial arts and the stars. I hope the author will write a little more in before finishing the book!

The author of this book said that he has this setting. The power of mind is related to one's own body, physical body, qi and blood, etc. Then using the power of mind to lift a stone, all the qi and blood in the whole body will be lost instantly. Maybe not all of it was lost instantly, but most of it was lost immediately. It has reached a point of deficit. Then later he used telekinesis to calculate so many times, and then, he even competed with his master in chess and sword skills. They are all calculated using the power of thought. The realm of his master. He can easily draw a tie, even after three or two rounds, he can still crush his master, and then use his mind power to calculate. At this time, there is no talk about the depletion of energy and blood, the consumption of energy and blood, and the like. You can't stand your own settings. Drive high and go low. And his master is also the inheritor of the great sect. It won't be too trashy no matter what.

My girlfriend and I had an argument. We had a very violent argument and broke all kinds of things. It seemed that this time it was irreversible and we had to break up... Then I woke up and breathed a sigh of relief - luckily it was a dream. But when I think about it carefully, I don't know the girl in the dream at all, so do I have a girlfriend? At this time, a delicate voice came from outside the door: "My dear, are you awake? I bought you breakfast." Then the door was pushed open, and a bloated, yellow-faced woman walked in carrying a plastic bag. The yellow-faced woman walked past my bed and went to the next bed. Am I in the hospital? I turned around and saw a long-haired girl lying in front of my bed, whose face I couldn't see clearly. I stretched out my hand to push the girl awake, and she raised her face - so beautiful. The girl said: "Dad, you're awake." I asked: "Why am I here, where is your mother?" Dad, are you confused? Mom is long dead. What, what year is it now? What disease do I have? It's the year 2046, you have a terminal illness, and the doctor says you only have one month to live. ... But now that medicine has developed, the hospital has cured your terminal illness. Very good. However, we sold all our property in order to seek medical treatment. Now not only can we not afford the hospital bills, we have lost our home. ?? Fortunately, I found a job and the income was pretty good, at least enough for us, father and daughter, to live on. Oh. Yesterday I received fifty customers in one night and was really exhausted, so I fell asleep just now. You... Dad, what are you thinking about? I'm talking about receiving customers. Cough?? Sigh, but now that the crackdown is strict, the drug business is getting harder and harder to do... You! ! At this time, a doctor in a white coat walked in and scolded sternly: "Xiao Li, go back to your room!" The doctor said to me, "I'm sorry, this is my daughter. She always likes to play pranks on patients." The girl made a face and ran out giggling. The doctor whispered: "Actually, she is not my daughter, she is a patient in another ward. Her symptom is that she calls everyone dad when she sees her." Me: "What kind of hospital is this? What disease do I have?" This is a mental rehabilitation center. You have delusions and always fantasize about having a girlfriend. After doing this for a long time, I still don't have a girlfriend... No, you have a girlfriend, and she is very beautiful. Where is she? You were mentally ill and she couldn't bear it and broke up with you. You are talking nonsense! I'm not sick, I want to go out! I'm going to find her! "Yes, you are indeed not sick. We misdiagnosed you." The doctor handed over a form and said, "Please sign here." "What is this?" "This is a diagnosis confirming that you are mentally normal. After signing, you can be discharged." I picked up the pen and signed quickly: "Can I leave now?" The doctor waved, and two policemen walked into the ward and showed me the handcuffs: "Please come with us." "What's going on? Where are you taking me?" Police: "Your girlfriend wanted to break up with you, so you killed her in a rage, and then pretended to be mentally ill to escape the blame. But the doctor has confirmed that you are mentally sane, so please come with us." The police came forward to drag me away, but I struggled desperately: "No, I didn't kill my girlfriend, I... I remembered, I don't have a girlfriend at all!!" The police stopped and smiled. Then they took off their police uniforms, revealing their white coats. The doctor stepped forward and said, "You finally remembered. You actually suffered from amnesia. We just used shock therapy to finally restore your memory." I took a breath and said, "I still don't have a girlfriend after doing this for a long time." The doctor smiled: "Of course not, you have been married for so many years..." I also smiled: "Yes, I remembered, I have a beautiful wife..." The doctor stopped laughing and looked at me seriously: "Now tell me, where did you hide your wife's body?" ......... Life is not easy, post a joke and Bo Jun will smile. If you laugh, I hope you can stop by and read it in my book. Thank you very much (^_^)

Finished this book... I've been following it for almost two years.

Traveling through the Song Dynasty, can the protagonist save the Song Dynasty with his personal power? Impossible! ! ! As we all know, the Song Dynasty could not punish officials, which resulted in extremely serious land annexation, serious internal strife among civil servants, and a lot of cowardice. In this case, the author, you can't solve the problem of land annexation in the Song Dynasty, increase grain production, and let the people have enough to eat, can you just rely on you to kill and kill? Rotten inside and cowardly outside, this is the Song Dynasty. Without completely crushing the Song Dynasty and re-establishing the country, no one can change the Song Dynasty's collapse, because those mud-legged people cannot survive, and the author does not mention it at all. Adaptation is not random editing, and drama is not nonsense. Reality can have no logic, but fiction must have logic. Otherwise, if you insist on saying that a dagger can penetrate the Kingdom of Jin, how many people will believe it? . .

Nowadays, all the gods are dressed in martial arts. I'm really tired of seeing them.

At first, it was a bit embarrassing. The main character was pretending to be cool for no apparent reason. I didn't feel that he was pretending. The author kept exploiting his weaknesses and avoiding his strengths. He always wrote theories that he was not good at and made people feel unreasonable without even thinking about them. He would not blur the explanations and kept explaining. I wonder if there will be any improvement in the future.

I hope the author won't write pretentious plots in his next book. The first third of this book is quite good, but the second half is quite unbearable. Not everyone can write pretentious stuff and pretend to be nice. It's difficult to write it naturally and smoothly. You can check out how Emperor Domination and Rebirth: Urban Cultivation are pretentious. If you insist on writing pretentious scenes, try invisible pretentiousness in the next book. There are too many forced pretentious plots in this book. I have never found a plot that makes people feel that this is a good pretense...

There are also sword competitions where you can see more than 300 flaws and more than 100 changes in one move. It's so exaggerated that you don't need it. There must be a limit to showing off.

It has no appeal and is boring to watch.

Isn't it embarrassing that the author is pretending?

I read dozens of chapters and slipped away.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. If nothing else, it's a bit exaggerated to say that the protagonist's telekinesis, which he gained when his super power went out of control, is a bit overstated. It increases intelligence, photographic memory, 24-hour unlimited investigation, acts as divine consciousness, etc. The most extreme thing is that he can use telekinesis to deduce. Tsk tsk tsk. If the protagonist who cultivates immortality is deduced using telekinesis, he will directly ascend to immortality without doing anything.

There are people who have finished reading this novel. I admire it. Anyway, I can't stand it anymore.

The author really wanted to be a Taoist, but unfortunately he did not study "Baopuzi" after graduating from elementary school. Instead, he read "Buddha Is Tao". I hope everyone can understand the awkwardness of his article.

When we arrived at Shu Mountain, there were a lot of reincarnations, and there was an uneducated daughter of Yuanshi Great Heavenly Lord in the main god space. . . . .

I looked for a lot of Infinite harem pretense stories, but I couldn't stand them after reading them for a while. I don't know if these authors have read some classics, and they don't even know what the rules are, and they still challenge it! In short, by taking some medicine and eating some grass, I was able to describe my realm in a daze, and successfully described people as infinitely rechargeable batteries! There is no need to explain this idea~~ So I personally think that the author of this book is more careful in writing, at least describing some of the Taoist cultivation concepts, and some movies and TV dramas from the Western world are also ingenious! I've been looking for a long time novel about Taoism, and this is the only one I've found! It's really rare... The only shortcoming is that the ending is a bit hasty, and "One Step in the World" is short-lived. The sequel to "Perfect, Covering the Sky", "Holy Ruins", was not written! "Swallowing the Starry Sky" only briefly described the beginning, and then it ended with "Emperor"😹! This makes people feel a little unfinished... In fact, I think the author can depict the protagonist's previous life as a scientist with an exploratory spirit. As his cultivation grows, he explores the mysteries of the universe and finds the origin of the multiverse of time and space. Thus one step further and transcending chaos!

Good guy, it's so embarrassing, isn't it? I can't stand the thought of "using your pretense as the source to ignite your body."

Hmm... Traveling through all the worlds and pretending to be cool with a woman in all the worlds, it's just too bad

I forgot how many chapters I read. Anyway, I only saw one character who traveled through time and lost control of his super powers, but not the others. I kept writing about how the main character was awesome compared to the main character, and I couldn't stand it anymore.

I don't understand why you are supporting the Song Dynasty rather than destroying the Song Dynasty and rebelling.

Didn't you go through Swordsman in the beginning? Why did it change to Water Margin after the refresh?

I remember that there are two people in the Yang Shen realm in Eternal Life. It seems that one is called the Immortal King of Creation, and the other one is forgotten. The Boat of Creation seems to have been refined by the Immortal King of Creation before, and they have their shadows in the Three Sovereigns, Five Emperors and the Hundred Saints Era, but you didn't even mention this in your article. Why do we have to write about Dr. Chen when writing about Marvel? He is a six-dimensional saint. Who said that Dr. Chen is in the six-dimensional realm? I am afraid that the author who writes about the fantasy world and time travel does not know what realm Dr. Chen is in. If you write a fanfic without carefully reading the original work, you might as well write your own fantasy world.

Didn't the Huashan Sect develop after the Quanzhen Sect was destroyed?

Isn't the protagonist's name Lu Yun? Why do you always use Lu Daoren in the future?

I just read the introduction. Is this martial arts?

I'm looking for a book. The protagonist travels through the Song Dynasty and becomes immortal. He is met by Wang Chongyang and becomes his disciple. The plot is similar to that of The Legend of the Condor Heroes. At the end, the protagonist's subordinates established their own country and finally collapsed due to the revision of history. The Ming Dynasty is established. The protagonist becomes the master of Zhu Di's wife. There is also a story about Heaven and Dragon Slaying. After it is finished, it seems to have traveled back to the story of Mingyue in the Qin Dynasty. Does anyone know the name of this book?