Time Travel and Transformation into a Stunning Heroine

I read both the original chapter 333 and the revised chapter 3556. Overall, the original version is fast-paced and very relaxed. It drives from time to time, shows off without stopping, and has an unruly atmosphere. The author lets himself go, enjoys himself from time to time, and highlights the word "cool". Then it was gone. After the revision, the first part is very depressing and tense. You can clearly feel the author's discomfort and resentment, which makes the protagonist very miserable. However, because of this, the emotion conveyed just fits the atmosphere of the plot, and achieves good results, making people feel deeply involved. So, although there are some minor issues, it's not too bad. Then at the later stage of the revision, probably after Journey to the West, it was obvious that the author was a little out of his depth. It may be that the protagonist's development is getting faster and harder to control, or it may be that the previous blows combined with the poor results are really bad. In short, the further it goes, the closer it is to a dead end. I think the author must have also discovered this problem. Maybe he didn't want to continue writing at that time, but he still wanted to finish the story. Unfortunately, he was trapped in the trap of rising stars and resurrecting the story at the beginning. The goal was too far away, and it ended abruptly in the end. Finally, here are some suggestions for readers who come here later and want to read it. First of all, you can look for the original version and read it, especially for those who like mindless and refreshing articles and those who like fast and unscrupulous articles. It is really interesting, and you may even want to read more. Some people say that the original version is poisonous at the beginning. To be honest, at least I didn't find it poisonous after watching it. Then it's time to look at the current revision, mainly the front part. With the original version read in advance, you can understand the author's psychology. The whole atmosphere and some original-related easter eggs can also be easier to understand. You can also look at the later parts. As for what is before and what is after, you can feel that the whole atmosphere has changed when reading the book.

Is the protagonist strong? Is he abusive? Is he abusive?

I want to be a girl, but I look so fake and no one can see me anyway.

Shippuden has finally begun, and Sakura's strength is about to catch up with Tsunade's in Terminus. Speaking of which, what kind of big news does the author want to make by letting Sakura become a pseudo-heretic? How will the love triangle between Sakura, Naruto and Sasuke end? Let's watch today's Rule of Law... I'm off track, let's see how big the author's imagination is😄

I remember that I watched the beginning of the time-traveling little dragon girl saving herself,,, and then mixed in various heroines,,, how to raise and prepare to kill, but became a Naruto fanfic. . . What the hell. . . Did I remember the wrong book? That said, that book is really good-looking.

I heard that this book has been greatly revised... If I remember correctly. . This book seemed to be very poisonous before. . The first world is The Little Dragon Girl. Being ooxx... Did I remember the wrong book? Σ( ° △ °|||)

The mosquitoes were boring, so I came to reward them again, and I quickly went to collect the red envelopes from the group.

Actually, I don't know how you would write a plot about Usopp and Robin quitting the Straw Hats. But I still mention it. I have to say that Oda is really awesome. I don't know if you've noticed, author, but when Usopp and Robin joined the group, they didn't reject Luffy. When Luffy invited Usopp, Usopp agreed without thinking. Robin even volunteered to join the group. When they arrived at the Capital of Seven Waters, these two people who had never refused Luffy's invitation all quit the Straw Hats for a time (for whatever reason). As for the others, when Luffy invited other members to join the group, their first reaction was to reject Luffy's invitation very decisively, clearly and without hesitation. There are two most important points. Although Luffy and his team are usually joking and joking, Luffy has never been a captain, but the Straw Hats are still very principled. Even though Nami always beats Luffy, and even though Sanji always complains about Luffy stealing ingredients, the Straw Hats have never disobeyed Luffy's orders and requirements as the captain. Regarding the issue of Principle, You Principle just said that although Luffy and his team usually do not emphasize the superior-subordinate relationship and the hierarchical relationship between the captain and the crew, as crew members Zoro Nami and others have never violated as captain Luffy's orders. Even if Usopp and Luffy had a falling out and left the group, it wasn't because he violated Luffy's orders, it was just because he and Luffy had disagreements over the handling of the Merry. And although Luffy and his team are indeed more like adventurers, what they did is considered evil according to common sense and the law. Don't talk about the difference between common sense and law in comics and reality. Let's not talk about other things the Straw Hats did and were blamed. You rob the Supreme Court and the Supervisory Bureau, you rob prisons, and you rob prisoners. If these three points are legally legal...😅 Another point is that although Luffy and his team have a pirate ship and a pirate flag, they do not have a pirate group name. Rather, the name of the pirate group has never been determined. It's just that everyone else is always calling "Straw Hats" and "Straw Hats".

Why do people who see this kind of male-to-female transformation always want to see the protagonist being fucked? Am I a pervert?🥺🥺🥺

I'm more looking forward to who the protagonist of Detective Conan's world will be.

If you look carefully, the writing style is still the same~😜 Mosquitoes are big

Oh my god, is this really the book about the little dragon girl who smears mud on her face, hugs her little lolita, washes apples in a footbath, and transforms into a female monkey and all kinds of lilies? I thought I remembered it wrong

This book made me realize one of the essences of human beings!

I saw this book because of nothing else but because of the crazy author I saw in the book review section, so I saved it.

Can he handle this heroine being fucked by male protagonists from several worlds? 😃😃😃

Forever. . . The author of Always Online Σ( ﾟωﾟ; ≡ confused

Can we write Hero Soldier Company in the next world? There are many stunning beauties in there.

After taking a look, the author seems to have mixed feelings about every reader's comments.

After reading several stories, I suddenly thought that if the protagonist reaches the highest level and is fully resurrected, will he not want to be a man after being a woman for too long? 😅

I read a little bit of the original version on QQ Reading. I was fucked by Yi Zhiping twice in the beginning. It made me laugh to death. Later, I was still writing on someone else.

Is this Lily still single or remarried? If you are Lily or single, you can still take a look. If you are getting married, forget it. It's really unbearable.

I just want to ask, are you serious about more than 3,000 chapters?

Are you kidding me? Naruto only has over a thousand chapters, and I don't watch Naruto at all. Read this novel🔨

Did the author work in the shock department of UC? The book is very good, but it's a bit too shocking.

I looked at the table of contents and Naruto has written more than 1,500 chapters. . .

Can you give the main character a normal name? I think this is quite important. Sometimes people are dismissed just because of a name (personal opinion)

Because Chapter 1500 Naruto persuaded him to quit 🥵

The author has been with Qidian for 11 years and has 110,000 fans, which has increased by 10,000 a year.

Damn it, the content was changed after it was released. 🤤🤤

Finally alive_(:з∠)_