Sorry, I Love You Sequel

As the figure has grown longer, Walking with you in the darkness of dusk, We hold hands forever, As long as I'm with you, I can't help crying, When the wind blows my window, When the night wakes me up, I will erase all your sad memories, With that dazzling smile, white snowflakes falling continuously, Little did I know that the streets we walked through had changed, Gradually dyeing it into a piece of light, I live for another person, I really want to give everything for him, I learned that this is love. My debut novel is very poorly written. I would be very grateful if you could give me more valuable comments after reading it.