Pokemon Champion Pikachu

Damn it, I just checked the information and found out... The female Pikachu's tail is actually heart-shaped? ! ! 😰

I always feel that the author's writing skills are not good. Is he a newbie?

If Sister Xianer is not short, the world will collapse!

Pokémon for a while, Pokémon for a while, what Pokémon are you writing about? Why not just call it Pokemon!

In fact, I really want to see a novel where the main character is a normal Pokémon... I don't really want to see a Pokémon that turns into a human or simply does things that humans can do... It's too destructive, and I still don't understand why it's interesting to write a novel just to put on a skin... Basically, I just stop reading those types of books and don't want to spend time... I just see similar ones and complain about what I don't like, so don't blame the author... The votes will be treated as speaking fees...

This is my first time to post a comment. I downloaded Qidian just to complain about this book. I remember that I went to the Electric Gym when I read it. Not to mention that I had a good impression of this book before. I thought it was very interesting and read that part twice. Until I read it again a year later, this Over the past year, I knew what I was doing. I actually used my brain when reading, and found out that it was full of flaws. It felt like it was forcibly integrated with the elements of cultivating immortals. I just kept reading. After reading for a while, I felt that I was not in a good state, so I took a break and continued. After reading dozens of chapters, I gave up completely. This part is a part that I have read a little bit. Why must I add the element of cultivating immortality? I think this book is okay without the element of cultivating immortals. After adding it, the elements of Pokemon are completely destroyed, and the book becomes more and more boring as I read it. I remember it was said later that the protagonist has transformed. I have no objection, but why is the height of the protagonist so small? Why do all the elves that the protagonist conquers later learn the Sixth Form of the Navy? I really couldn't bear it anymore. By that time, I felt that the Pokémon element had completely become a useless thing, and the more I read it, the more embarrassing it became... I didn't read what the author wrote after that. I hope that if the author keeps writing like this, it will really be meaningless. I don't mean any harm, I just hope that you, the author, can write it well later. In addition, try not to try those with low poison points.

This book is not as bad as those reviews. Maybe the author's introduction does not indicate that this is a Transformation Lily novel, so most of the readers who read it are those who have never been exposed to transformation literature.

Leaving aside the writing style and the like, is it really okay to just write the article without checking any information? A little bit of ethics is necessary, basic characteristics and attribute tables are essential, and Dr. Oak is a doctor after all. Why use 100,000 volts to hit Pikachu? Isn't it meant to be an opponent of the same level? Isn't it a waste of a lot of energy to encounter the lightning rod characteristic? I can understand your mood of wanting to write a cool article, but the appearance is invincible magic and a painting style that feels inconsistent. You should also pay attention to the basic method in a cool article, but being able to write more than 1 million is also awesome, and self-pleasure is enough

In the author's novels, except for the original male protagonist, the men are basically passers-by and only appear in three chapters.

Can you change "she" to "he"? It looks awkward.

Female Pikachu is acceptable, and it's okay to have a bunch of friends, and it's okay to tame female Pokémon, but what's going on with all of your Ash's pets having their gender changed? Bulbasaur and Charmander are both male. . . All the mothers here are speechless. (You can watch the animation yourself if there is no basis for it) After reading several chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. .

If you say it's a man, he's always doing it, I just feel like hehe

I haven't even read one picture, and I still don't know whether the pig's horns are male or female.

Is your chapter title weird? Why do they always use the content of the next chapter as the title? Any hints for the next episode? Do you know that this will degrade the reading experience of readers?

I just want to know whether the main character is a boy or a girl.

Pikachu wants to be a Pokémon trainer, so he has to quit

Mythical beasts roam everywhere, the second level is not as good as a dog, and they still like to follow the main plot

"Ordinary people" who carry the secret book of cultivating immortals Don't want to say anything

I bet the author hasn't watched Pokémon very much, and the screams are really wrong 😅

I seem to have read this book on QQ Reading before. At that time, I didn't seem to be a VIP, and the memory came to me in a daze.

There are so many long-winded modal particles. I just read a few of them and there are a lot of them. What, what, ah, what, what, ah, there are them at the end of almost every sentence. I think that although it is an old book, it is not all full of modal particles.

The protagonist is only in the first level of heaven and is already stronger than the champion in the early stage. Not to mention the ninth level of heaven, is it possible that the next level of heaven will blow up the earth? I feel like the first level shouldn't be that strong, right? The first part is too strong, how do you write later? Do you feel like you will blow up the universe without Jiuchongtian?

There should be a Transformation Pill, right? Should it be okay to transform into a human form with a certain level of strength? Is there no such thing as a spell to transform into a human form? Why does a Pokemon have to be a trainer? Pikachu is too small, and items such as Poke Balls are difficult to use. It is difficult to carry items. The same is true for space props. Without them, it would be even more troublesome.

The author's 14 works are level 1?

I think it's fine if the scream is normal

I'm going to use the boss's website to recommend the same Pokémon novel and revive the Pokémon era starting from the zoo. I hope you guys can appreciate it. Finally, I wish the author to make a lot of money every day, order thousands of books, and become platinum as soon as possible!