Curse of the Immortal

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Damn it? Have you started writing again? ? It's been eight years now

As a bookworm, I am very happy to be able to write my own opinions on the novels I like. I am also very grateful to the author for writing wonderful stories, which gave me spiritual support during the book shortage. I simply write down some of my thoughts, I hope the author can read them. 1. As a small person, Shiraishi's grandfather wanted him to be on the gold list, so he kept working hard. Even though he had failed three times and was laughed at, he still did not give up. He praised Shiraishi's persistence and perseverance. 2. There was a sudden change in the family, and grandpa was seriously injured. However, Shiraishi was able to stay calm in the face of danger and use his own abilities to write spells for grandpa to improve his physical condition. His courage and filial piety are commendable. 3. After a competition, he was framed, and a good citizen became a villager. His life path was changed, but he was a blessing in disguise. When the village was facing internal and external troubles, he worked with the villagers to overcome difficulties, made suggestions, and laid the foundation for unifying the village. He is even revered as a god by the villagers. 4. When the village was under siege, and the young and old in the village were held hostage, Baishi single-handedly rushed into the enemy formation with unstoppable courage, and was seriously injured in order to save the villagers. His courage, ambition, courage, and caring for others also earned him the respect and love of more people. 5. Regarding the story structure of the novel, I also have some small suggestions. The pace of the novel is too fast, and sometimes there is more than one storyline in a chapter. Although it is enjoyable to read, it is not conducive to the author's plot. Many stories end while unfolding, causing a certain shortage of readers' sense of picture. 6. In terms of the creation of supporting characters, I hope that more characters like Xu Jian and Wei Dragonfly will appear. Many supporting characters are gone without even being able to eat their lunches. They have no sense of existence and picture. Regarding the establishment of villains, the author's description is a bit vague, such as Kong Tan, who has no physical characteristics, although I have a fresh memory of his affairs.

I have read too many battles between gods and demons. The author writes about the conflict between gods and immortals. . . Interesting.

I prefer to read novels about yin and yang spells, Taoism, Feng Shui, etc. This novel suits my taste.

The author suggests that there be fewer locations and supporting character names, as too many would seem confusing. Refueling is not bad.

What else can I say, I can only admire you for thinking of such a wonderful plot.

The novel mainly depends on the plot. The plot of the speaker's novel is attractive. I like it!

The plot is compact, seems to have a sense of urgency, and is awesome. 🤭🤭🤭🤭

I went to "The Return of the Soul" and put a curse on the book to increase sales. No one else has such imagination! Ox

When it comes to Shinto, we have to talk about the ancient gods, the founding Yuanling and the four major disciples! Below you are a Shinto person. . .

It gave me the feeling of "Swallowing the Stars", Shiraishi is Luo Feng! Awesome!

It's beautiful, but the waiting is excruciating.

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If I learn a spell, I'll put a curse on my banknotes, hehe, you know!

From the first chapter to the present in one breath, several hours have passed at a glance. Just can't stop at all. When I first read the title, I thought it was a novel about cultivating immortals, but it was completely different from the formula of previous novels. How should I put it? It's very novel. Although the protagonist still has to cultivate immortality, the biggest weapon here is the magic called Yin Yang Curse. What this yin and yang curse is, I believe everyone has never heard of it or seen it. Indeed, it was my first time too. It can be said that the author of this book has opened up a new style and a new path. What is the Yin Yang Curse? In my opinion, it is also a kind of skill, but it has some unnatural effects. Why do you say that? The protagonist is actually a very ordinary and special person at the beginning. If you want to be a scholar, you won't be able to graduate in a few years. Not to mention practicing martial arts, he has no talent whatsoever and is a useless person. By chance, I got this Yin-Yang spell, which completely changed the rhythm of my destiny. At first, I didn't understand the purpose of this Yin-Yang Curse. I understood it after he first saved his dying grandfather, then made the novel a best-seller, and then was selected by the princess to draw a mediocre painting. It turns out that this thing can be changed, but what can be changed? Human will, or the original fact. Very cool stuff. It's like the protagonist has opened an unknown cheat. Before he knew it, everything started to go the way he wanted. And this progress is also very rapid. From a rookie, he becomes stronger step by step, and he slowly learns his skills. Practice martial arts and cultivate immortality. All in all, it is very interesting and refreshing. It gives people a very relaxing and strong impulse to watch it. Don't hesitate to watch it and you will know.

The TV series Qing Yun Zhi is a big hit, so I wanted to search for "Zhu Xian" to review it. After entering the keywords, I found that there is also this book "The Curse Immortal". I wanted to click on it when I saw the introduction. I have to say that the introduction of Sun and Moon Speaker's works is very domineering and suits my taste. "I have a curse that can curse the birth and death of the heaven and earth, and the growth and decline of all things." The author is unconventional, different from the ordinary cultivation stream, and the immortal cultivation stream uses the curse as the focus, which really made my eyes shine. I believe many readers have the same idea as me. Closer to home, this article has been following up since the beginning. As a senior bookworm, I think the following points are worth reading: First of all, the background chosen by the author is the fictional Xanthium Country. The identity and background of the protagonist Shiraishi is an academy student and an ancient culture. It is full of flavor. It is different from modern articles about cultivating immortals. The appearance of various artifacts and masters always feels inconsistent. The author of this article has a sense of flow and flow, which makes people read it heartily. I believe that the author was careful at the beginning. Secondly, the character design is also very unique. The male protagonist is not a born weak person. He does not pretend to be stupid or hide his clumsiness and pretend to be a pig to eat the tiger. He does whatever he wants. He is silent when he is not sure and is not arrogant when his abilities appear. Moreover, Baishi's ability is also very simple. Without complicated techniques, he can travel all over the world with his Yin and Yang lines. Finally, and what I think is the most outstanding aspect is the plot design. There are not so many divine twists and turns, and the protagonist who goes with the flow has experienced many things, from being framed, to rising as a cultivator, becoming the leader of the world, to challenging the masters, becoming stronger step by step, which reflects his hard work and persistence. However, there are two suggestions from loyal readers: First, it is recommended that the author explain the narrative clearly, such as how Shiraishi's Yin-Yang Curse came about; but I hope that the author will update it quickly and add some content to each chapter. These are not satisfying at all, but I still can't stop. In short, Sun and Moon Speakers, keep up the good work! Will always support you!

It's okay. It's not easy to find one like this at the starting point.

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