Eternal Prison

After reading a few chapters, I can only say that the most attractive part is the introduction 😭

It's a bland account, with a preface that doesn't match the subtitles, no logic, and a lot of awkward lines. I couldn't bear it after seeing a few chapters where the word count was too much. Shennong is dead and slipped away.

It's extremely poisonous. It's full of poison points. The equipment skills don't consume or cool down. When you hit someone, your blood will be forcibly deducted. It's a joke. You can still play the protagonist stream. You don't need more than 20 people in a team. All these equipments are so stupid that everyone will kneel down. IQ.

Looking at the introduction collection, I saw that Qianzhang Shu was a first-class author, and I was a little panicked. When I went to the book review area to take a look... I lost the motivation to even take a look.

The data is confusing, the logic is confusing, and there are many poisonous points!

More than 2 million plus more than 1 million is the first level. You can imagine how many options there are.

Running account, very boring, junior high school level!

I just started with 60 gold coins and it takes half a year. I don't care about hundreds or hundreds for a few days. It's hard to explode the bronze skill after a while. After dozens of chapters, I exploded many times. It's inconsistent and logically confusing. I'm persuaded to quit.

After reading some of the previous chapters, I feel that there are still many problems with the structural details of this book. First of all, what kind of water and soil raises what kind of people. In this kind of game where you have to start over once you die, and after years of hard work, the more things a player has, the more careful they must be. The author obviously didn't pay attention to this, and wrote that the players in the game are just like the players in ordinary games, seeking death at every turn. Secondly, the protagonist's character is very annoying, and it's normal to have pursuits. However, the protagonist's brain is always crazy, and he has a strong desire to gamble, and he often goes to extremes. Take for example the plot after the resurrection skill is upgraded to silver. Why do you have to risk offending a powerful guild to catch the leopard? Did the protagonist have any reason to capture the leopard? Shouldn't we prioritize finding other large numbers of elite monsters to raise their skill levels? It can be seen that the reason for this choice is far-fetched. If you want to write about big scenes, you need to have great insights. If you want to write about deep settings, you should have deep emotions. If you want to write about grand backgrounds, you should have grand thinking. The author of this book is clearly deficient in many respects. Of course, this is a common phenomenon in the online literary world, and many authors lack the precision and breadth of their thinking.

What's going on 🤭

The existence of the author, That is not a simple existence, That means tens of thousands of words can be written using the word "existence" alone. That is the existence of hundreds of thousands of words using the phrase "the existence of..., That is not a simple existence, that is the existence of..."

When I saw loan sharks, I said I didn't dare to look at them, because I didn't know what to do, and I hadn't been severely beaten by the society.

Does such a bad book still have fans? Author, if you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. And about Zi'er, why didn't you let her join in the end? I didn't agree with it at first, but forcing it to be added is the most disgusting thing.

It's so messed up that I can't stand it anymore.

Let me complain. The author likes the word "existence" so much. You can see several "existences" in one paragraph, and "the blood drain turns the sky red" appears many times.

Starting next month, there will be three updates a day, one chapter will be updated at six o'clock, twelve o'clock, and eighteen o'clock every day. It's so miserable to subscribe, please subscribe, dear friends, it will give you enough motivation to subscribe with more code words, dear friends. Tears ran down my face.

Don't want blue? Skills don't need to cool down? Unlimited release?

The linkage between 3D web game style and reality, there is a sense of immersion, but it feels very low...

I wanted to leave after reading the second chapter of loan sharking. Think about it, it's not easy for everyone, you are the one making it happen. . I was digging for gold, but I didn't expect to die on the spot in the later chapters. . .

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As the name suggests, I couldn't stand the first sentence.

I'm sleepy, go to sleep, and check the results around eight o'clock in the evening. The tenth update and the ninth update are ready. Dear friends, aren't the explosive updates unattractive?🤫🤫

Speechless, just build a super black prison in turn 0, not in the full level of Fengxing Guild, let's see how it works in turn 1! !

Dear friends, what skills do you want the protagonist to acquire? Use your ideas. It's best to be more specific about the effect of your skills. If it's suitable, I will use it. Well, the protagonist is mainly focused on summoning skills. Dear friends, you can let go of your imagination.

You have already enslaved three queen bees, how can you practice skills? Not even mentioning killing a queen bee!

Thousands of monsters attack, not only do more than 10 points of damage, but the monster with only 1W health should be defeated in seconds. How come there is still one tenth of the blood left? ? ? What's left?

After the male protagonist cannot buy the staff. . . Why didn't you return the money to his brother with interest? . . Just started watching. . .

In the first chapter, the elite monsters forcefully deduct blood. After reaching a certain value, the blood volume will no longer be reduced. If not, why do you need to buy weapons? There are platforms for card monsters.

The author is so awesome! I want to cum more

Dear friends, if you want to be a part-timer, you can leave your footprints in this building. Well, be sure to indicate Name, surname, skills, personality traits, spoken language, etc. If it's suitable, I will make appropriate arrangements.