Rebirth: Journey to the West

This Journey to the West book really made me very angry.

The nine innate gods? Fuxi, the god of wind? Thunder God Lei Ze? The other five are ancestral witches? Xing Tian is hanging out with Tai Yi? The ancestral witch became the subordinate of the demon clan? OMG! The setting is completely different from the prehistoric novels I read before.

Author, are pig's feet just a mouthful? There's a lot of nonsense. When you meet, tell us your brand name first. Didn't the prehistoric people pay the most attention to the feet? Why are you telling others?

After reading Chapter 70, I can't stand it anymore, but I can tolerate many other poisonous points. After all, the book is new, so I can forgive the awkwardness in the first part, but the character of the protagonist has nothing to do with whether it is a new book, right? Why is the protagonist so furious when he sees a demon harming people, so angry that his eyes are red and he is trembling with anger? Is the protagonist's parents dead or something? The death of a group of strangers is simply more infuriating than having one's own parents killed in front of one's face. There is no one left with this Virgin's heart. This kind of Virgin's character is the most unbearable poison.

I was about to leave when I suddenly saw the author's post. Just leave some comments. I feel that the character dialogue is very stiff, especially the description of the dialogue between the two, which really does not fit the character setting. All of them are old monsters who have lived for many years. They don't have any aloof temperament. If they want to BB without nutrition for a long time. When writing novels, you should make sure that the characters in the book have a strong personality, and don't just act like a chatty and stupid person. To improve his character, I recommend the author to read the Pili Puppet Show series. I think this will greatly improve the author's portrayal of the characters' thinking, behavior and speech. It's really too white now, I really can't accept it.

I feel that in the original work, Sun Wukong is a selfish, lawless, proud, treacherous, and bullying character. I remember when the heavenly soldiers and generals went to catch the monkeys, they didn't catch any of them. They were all jackals, tigers, and leopards. No matter how many monsters were killed by the monsters from the sky, they were let go. A national master also did good things and died in the end. Among all the discussions related to "Journey to the West", the most mentioned topic is why Sun Wukong was invincible when he was causing trouble in the Heavenly Palace. All kinds of strange answers have been extended to conspiracy theories such as the so-called goblin has a backstage. But the truth is that Sun Wukong is not as capable of fighting as portrayed in the 1986 version of the TV series. The so-called havoc in the Heavenly Palace is just drunkenness, stealing peaches, and elixirs. There is no real large-scale head-on battle with the Heavenly Court. Scenes such as beating the Jade Emperor until he got under the table are even more impossible (personal feeling)

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that the protagonist does not look like a time-traveler, the difference between Yuan Shen, gods, innate spiritual treasures, etc. As a time-traveler, there are usually many things in novels, can you not understand? Even if there is a difference between the novel and the reality, you shouldn't not understand it at all. The protagonist is like a novice who doesn't understand anything and is playing tricks in a place as serious as heaven. Heaven is serious and the gods value their majesty. Not to mention the Jade Emperor, will he joke with you? Watching you play tricks? And the protagonist was in his twenties after all in his previous life, just like a teenager who didn't know anything and was playing tricks in front of adults. As for the plot, it was as bland as water. Every little thing and scene took so long to write in detail. It is only right to have a detailed outline. As for the only villain in the previous dozens of chapters, Wu Qu Xingjun, it is even more inexplicable and feels mindless. Just because the protagonist is a newcomer and belongs to the Jade Emperor, and he belongs to other emperors, they want to suppress the protagonist. It's such an aboveboard and naked suppression, as if you have deep hatred and hatred towards the protagonist, and even have the intention to kill the protagonist. I feel that it's inexplicable that you have some small tricks behind your back to suppress you. After all, the factions are different, but you pursue me as if you have a grudge. He seems to have murderous intentions again and again, and he doesn't hide it and even confronts the Jade Emperor. I don't know how he survives to this day. No matter how forbearing the Jade Emperor is, a little immortal wouldn't dare to take action against him so blatantly. So all in all, the plot in the first few dozen chapters is boring, the characters are inexplicable, the protagonist looks like a time traveler, and is an idiot!

The chapter says that I really can't stand it anymore. Why are there so many novices talking about the Great Desolation? The Great Desolation is just a self-created background of Buddhism and Taoism. It is connected with some myths and some of them are made up by myself. Can you read the encyclopedia before talking?

This book is written by someone who was a college student before time travel, or a college student who has graduated and is looking for a job. Why does he feel like a mentally retarded child who knows nothing about anything? How many college students nowadays don't read novels? Feeling so embarrassed

To be honest, I can't even stand these malicious Hei Haotian novels...

There is too much nonsense and it makes me angry

It's a bit poisonous, and the writing is much worse than Fengshen Daoxing

Coming from Fengshen, it is obvious that Fengshen has made great progress. I wonder if this will poison me.

I'm currently pursuing Fengshen Daoxing, but the updates are too slow. Let's take a look at the previous novels.

The protagonist's personality is like that of a virgin, is it necessary to watch it?

The style is obviously in the same vein as Fengshen, but the writing techniques are still very immature, the foreshadowing is not that good, and Realm's way of shaping the characters is also very rough. For example, the process of the heroine falling in love with the hero, every paragraph is inexplicable, there is no emotional process, and it is just a plot. The author sometimes forgets about it, and the plot often contradicts itself later on. He also feels that since it is a journey to the West, the book should focus on describing the process of the journey to the West. However, the author obviously did not write about the Journey to the West. Of course, this is the author's first book, which is understandable!

I finished reading the book today, well, how should I put it, the Tathagata and the Jade Emperor were blackmailed. I wonder if any religious people have poured anything into your house, hahaha. But it's good. At least I dared to write down these thoughts and opinions. In the end, I don't know if you couldn't bear the pressure and actually cleared the Jade Emperor.

It has been poisoned to death, the protagonist is really useless. It has never happened before. What a sloppy writing. Try it now. You have more than ten episodes of sex is empty, mobile phone, mobile phone.

This book is incomparable to Fengshen. Is it really the same author?

It's a contradiction. In the front, ten thousand people died and they were all angry. When they started fighting, they were ready to run away, and then they didn't kill the female dragon. Bah🤫, no one can write like this. Poison death, magical powers, and various levels are not done well.

Chapter 5 is extremely poisonous, so it is recommended to skip it.

The new book has banned me. Just ban it. Am I not reading the original version? I don't mean anything else, I just want to ask, will there be more female protagonists in the new book? Just answer me.

It's really not interesting! After listening to dozens of chapters, I still can't listen to it.

I don't know about this book. I came from Fengshen Daoxing. Although for old bookworms who are familiar with Fengshen Journey to the West, all the logic in the back is a mess and it is completely written nonsense, but the front part of Fengshen is still good.

The writing at the beginning is average and the story is not attractive enough. It is powerful in the mid-term, majestic and majestic, full of characters, and fascinating battle details. Come on, the author, and give me a monthly ticket.

Isn't the weekly benefit free?

I have knelt before the Buddha for three thousand years, but never felt pity for my Buddha. I have knelt before the Buddha for three thousand years, but never felt pity for my Buddha. It's not the dust that covers the Buddha's eyes, it's the incense and money that haven't been offered. If the Buddha is not greedy, why should the world worship him? If the Buddha does not care about vanity, why should the world kneel down and worship him? There is a Buddha in my heart, but the Buddha does not have me. After suffering all the suffering in the world, ask the Buddha. Buddha said: Everything has its destiny. I laughed: Since you can't help me, what's the point of worshiping you? The Buddha said to save all sentient beings, but no one was saved. The Tao says to be kind to oneself alone, but to help others in times of trouble. In times of trouble, the Buddha says: close the mountain gate and not care about worldly affairs. Tao: Leading the people out of the mountains and hanging pots to help the world. In the peaceful and prosperous times, Buddha: Save all living beings and save the world. Tao: Go back to the mountains and forests to understand Taoism. Foreign paganism corrupts people's hearts and collects money and food. Be punished! There is no Buddha to save people, only the Buddha to be gilded. Be destroyed! No monks were seen eating fast and chanting sutras, only bald donkeys were seen wearing gold and silver. Sorry, I don't have a Buddha mind

What a **** novel. . . The first few chapters were okay. After enduring it for dozens of times, I still couldn't stand it after reading more than 70 chapters. It's long-winded, the plot is boring, and the explanations are repetitive. The fight between gods and monsters is like a duel between martial arts masters. There is also a long-winded introduction of products. The plot is pale and not attractive at all. Okay, bye.

I saw the author said that the heroine is ≤3. . . 😁😁😁😁😁😁, okay, I just watched a little bit

This book is very good, why are so many people criticizing it?