Those Days When I Was in Qin Dynasty

I am——Eighteenth Hahaha Well, let's make up a story based on the experience of being eighteen - The Eighteenth Prodigal Son wandering around the seven countries of the Central Plains At the entrance of a certain valley at the western foot of the Qinling Mountains outside Xianyang, a man wearing a white gauze hat, a straight dark alloy satin black-soled red cloud robe, and a pair of ink-soled rosewood ice silk pantyhose with open-toe gripper boots. Hung on the back is a giant blade with a scaly tip that is wrapped in white silk and looks like a big stick. Only the golden handle is exposed. The platinum ghost 👻 has a red rope connected to a huge purple gold gourd at the bottom of its face. A green lotus is engraved on one side of the gourd, and a picture of stars in the sky is painted on the other side. There are Bagua numbers printed around the mouth of the gourd, and a Yin-Yang Tai Chi diagram is printed on the bottom of the gourd. Looking at the sleeves under the shoulders, fluttering in the wind, only one hand poked out from the upturned collar. The middle finger of that hand wears a nail engraved with red letters on a black background - [Zhu] - Looking down, you can see the nails painted with dark jade paint, not only on the hands, but also on the exposed toes under the feet. At this time, the visitor's feet had just stepped across the valley mouth, but he could not move. On the pale gold face with the eight-character tear trough, the standing sword eyebrows were slightly frowned, and the red pupils hiding the six-round magatama looked at the surroundings and behind him. As far as the eye can see, it is the barrier erected by Taoists for the discussion between heaven and man. The "invisible" place on the edge of the barrier is attracted by the giant blade hanging diagonally behind the current visitor, and energy is being swallowed up by the giant blade. Just when the visitor wanted to use the long sword held in the other hand in his robe, a single-edged sword with the word "Bie Yun" engraved on it. Just look at a Taoist in white who is as rich as jade "walking down" from the Nine Heavens, and asked: What is the name of the Taoist brother opposite? Where did it come from? The visitor raised his head, and the long wind chimes worn on his earlobes moved with the wind, showing a hearty laugh: Haha I am the eighteenth - well, I am the eighteenth generation pillar of the Yuwen Department from outside the Great Wall - Yuwen Yao The Taoist in white also laughed and said: I have heard in "Erya·Shijiexia": "Yao is the Tao." Then he beat the auspicious sign and saw that the person who came was a Taoist who was not much shorter than Sheng Qi, so he went on to say - : Ye Yuan, the poor Taoist, is not wrong. Yu Wenyao returned the gift: I have met Brother Dao, this is very polite—— After saluting, he found that he was back to action again. He couldn't help but feel happy, so he started chatting with Wuwangzi Ye Yuan, and the two of them headed to the mountain together. . . . . . End. . .

After reading it, I have some suggestions: Han Fei's identity is destined to be different from that of the protagonist, so there is no need for the protagonist to get too involved in the Quicksand Organization. You also know from Luo Yuren that Han Fei chose to die after Qin destroyed South Korea. This is destined by his identity and you can't save him. In addition, when I saw that the protagonist revealed the identity of himself and the Amazing Salamander to Zi Nu without even meeting him twice, I personally felt that the handling here was not very good. Even if you are interested, don't act like this. It's a bit too hasty. Finally, as a married man, Mrs. Hu's type is wonderful! Sister-in-law, I am Ah Ma! Anyway, come on, author!

I think the harem needs to be emotionally described! When you see a woman, you just tease her and act like a gangster, and then you give her for free, and you're just a stallion!

Scholars, come and choose your wives

Please write the skills learned in a more reasonable way, like Da Huang Ting, Shuang Quan Hands, Duan Quan Hands, it is easy to regenerate the broken limbs. It is so laborious to heal a complete person. If there is any problem, you can just change the body. Otherwise, you can say that this is a weakened Shuang Quan Hands, a weakened Da Huang Ting. Don't give the protagonist NB skills to suppress the protagonist. That is too stupid.

I'll reward you with two points, just to tell you, where did your sister's Taoist disciple come from? In the pre-Qin period, there were only people related to Confucianism. It was not until Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty that Confucianism became the dominant religion. How could a Taoist disciple respect Confucian etiquette? Look at the names of Beimingzi, Xiaoyaozi and Chisongzi.

After watching the beginning, why does the protagonist keep talking to Ying Zheng like a chatterbox? It is far worse than Xiaomeng, the Taoist king 😅😅😅

This author doesn't want this either😜

Probably between the chapter 249 and this chapter, which is the updated chapter 253! Problems discovered: It is true that the protagonist has traveled through time, maybe multiple times! Snow Lady and Dongjun are probably reborn! These two people have obviously never crossed paths before, but in the Taoist battle between heaven and man, they seemed like "old friends reunited"! After that, in Qin State, he further showed that he had known each other "before"! Jing Salamander and Ye Xiaowan also look a bit like rebirth! However, they are not the same branch as Snow Girl. What is shown is that Jingren is "over-indulgent" to the protagonist. No matter what kind of philandering behavior the protagonist has outside, he takes the initiative to decide whether Ye Xiaowan will stay or leave in the incident of the successor Ye Xiaowan. Now in the latest chapter, it is shown that Ye Xiaowan also "used to know" the protagonist! Let's go back and talk about Dong Jun driving the Moon God "away" from the protagonist! That's right, because there is a psychological description of Dongjun in the previous chapter, so the protagonist and Luna can't get acquainted again, lest the protagonist have "accidents" because of Luna in the future! Let's discuss Zi Nu again. This heroine is so "tolerant" of the protagonist, similar to the Frightened Salamander! The protagonists are Jing Salamander and Zi Nu. It's true that "what more can a husband ask for when he has a wife like this"! The two of them are so considerate! Finally, guess the "Qisu of Canglong" in this book! I am not talented, I think it corresponds to: Yin, Yang, metal, wood, water, fire, earth! And these seven attributes represent seven characters! They are: Yin - Moon God Yang - Dongjun Gold - Jing Salamander Wood - Purple Girl Water - Snow Girl Fire - Yan Lingji Earth - Tide Banshee Explanation: Yin, Moon God represents the power of the moon! Yang, Dongjun appears as the yang of the big sun! Gold, the Frightened Salamander is the broken dry gold! Wood, the name of the purple girl comes from the wisteria tree! Water, the shape of the snow girl comes from water! Fire, Yan Lingji lives up to her name as fire! Earth, the land where the tide banshee takes the will to poison! In this way, I am blindly guessing that the protagonist was taken advantage of by someone who was interested in "taking in" Han Fei, and designed to frame him. Han Fei accidentally uncovered important clues to "Canglong Qisu" because of his greed for alcohol! This clue is-"Qinglong Project"! Mr. Changping's behavior of secretly befriending and supporting Yan Dan was discovered by Han Fei, who was a drinker and a drinker. On the surface, Lord Changping conspired with Yan Dan during the banquet to use the grain seeds brought by the protagonist to reserve grain for his "Anti-Qin Alliance"! Because "Canglong Qisu" has always been controlled by the royal family of the Seven Kingdoms! For example, the former Duke of Wei, Lord Xinling! Leave this secret to the protagonist! Then, the person in charge of the royal family of Chu State is Lord Changping! The one from Yan State is Yan Dan! The Korean one is Han Fei! The unknown of Qi and Zhao. . Of course, these are all conjectures! Personally, I think the original meaning of "Canglong Qisu" is a set of methods for ascension! Exists in the previous Unified Royal Family Week! It is the real Taoism! The first royal families of the Seven Kingdoms divided up this method! Pass them down separately in their respective royal families! After taking over this secret, Mr. Changping thought - what would happen if he put away the seven secrets and made "Canglong Qisu" complete! ? For this reason, Lord Changping began to plan! First we must unify the seven countries! Mr. Changping saw Qin's "dream of going eastward"! People have the ability to accomplish it! Being the "King's Precursor", let Qin take the lead in unification, and then plan to seize the results of unification by himself! In order to achieve this result, the "Qinglong Project" was created! Help Qin unify first, and then collect the fruits of unification himself! Also, I feel that Mr. Changping played the role of "Taiyi Donghuang"! After his defeat, he turned to darkness and continued his plan! Otherwise, with the current strength of the protagonist, who is the opponent for ordinary people? It can't be that "Donghuang Taiyi" is some projection of the real person in the ancient demon heaven, right? ! Later, under the background of Qin's unification, the protagonist gradually collected the secrets about "Canglong Qisu"! So, these secrets were placed with seven different women. . What happened later, such as the expedition to expand the surrounding areas! Ancient ruins discovered! The protagonist unlocks his dusty memories - from before reincarnation! I know that these women I meet are destined! I was once one of the "rebirths", because practicing Taoism requires going through a lot of hardships and reincarnation! And "Canglong Qisu" is the key to unlock this secret and an important clue to the next step of cultivation! Well, that's it! Write so much and no one will read it, it will inevitably make people laugh! Finally, I wish everyone a happy Chinese New Year and all the best!

After reading the first few chapters, I thought the protagonist was fucking invincible. In the end, he didn't even arrive as a grandmaster, so he was rubbish.

My favorite surprised salamander O(∩_∩)O

Not a harem? What are you thinking about if you don't accept women yet?

What are you writing at the back? The front part was pretty good, but the back part suddenly dropped to a lower level?

When watching Qin Shi, apart from watching beauties of all colors vying for beauty, the main thing is to watch the characters in it pretending to be bad and fighting. As for the plot, who cares? Anyway, this is how I felt when I watched the Qin Shi Mingyue anime. No matter who is the most aggressive, I will only accept Master Xiaomeng. He is brave enough to challenge the uncle and Ergouzi at the same time.

It feels like déjà vu, as if I've seen it before.

Can you stop writing protagonists who use their lower bodies all the time?

Here are some suggestions. Each book should focus on three golden chapters. The top priority is to bring readers into the book. Who are you, where do you come from, and what do you want to do in this world? The first scene is a scene where Ying Zheng is beaten, and the protagonist is invincible as soon as he appears, and he also acts as Ying Zheng's teacher (dad). Completely unclear

Does the author have a book club? 😰 I suggest you get character cards

Who is that awesome and coaxing woman?

Does this book count as the protagonist's wife being reborn as a green protagonist? There's nothing we can do about the first episode. The protagonist is a latecomer. What about the second episode? Are you still following your old ways after being reborn? Still such a NB existence? (After the protagonist is reborn, those wives are not yet married.) After the second episode of rebirth, the protagonist's wife becomes someone else's wife. Is this considered a cuckold story?

Zhao Ji, Yan Ling Ji, Ji Ru Qianlong, Yu Ji, Li Ji,? ? ?

Chapter 556 adds a new background! A small world of immortality is hidden above the world of ordinary people. According to scientific explanation, it is a subspace independent of this latitude space. . In addition, it is also described from the side that the protagonist has now restored his "three souls"! Then, there are still "Seven Souls" waiting for recovery in the future! Guess: According to the historical process of cultivating immortality, it is now before Journey to the West! Did the protagonist accidentally intervene in this calamity? Not like that! ! ! ! According to the independent history of Sword Immortal, what kind of demon king appears? The protagonist has to fight to protect the people he protects? ! Maybe! ! ! According to magical history, there is also Darkseid in the future! A world-destroying supernatural alien invasion like Thanos? ! ! ! Impossible! ! ! In summary, the chapter five days later is just a small transition! Everyday life that started with flirting with girls has turned into an accelerating battle for hegemony and unification among vassal states! It is estimated that it won't be long before Great Qin will unify the Central Plains countries! In the next step, I will probably add a little bit of daily life style, and then spread it to the surrounding areas! Only when Da Qin's territory continues to expand, will the protagonist encounter more unknowns! ! ! There is the Nine Heavens Mysterious Girl in this background. Even if it is a small world, there are probably some mysterious ancient existences in the surrounding areas! Let me give you an inappropriate example! For example, on the British islands in the west, there is Artoria and the Holy Grail! There is also the great magician Merlin! On the islands of Asia Minor, there are still some Spartan warriors. Where does Targon exist? Or are they the saints who defend the goddess in the Acropolis of Athens? Furthermore, in the depths of a certain ocean, is there an ancient super city—Atlantis? ! Does the Hanging Garden in Mesopotamia really exist? ! Where does it lead to? ! ! . . . "Old ⑨, I suspect that I am the author's water jumper"! Why else would you have posted so many posts? Also by the author👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻? Haha, finally, I wish everyone a happy new year 🙂

The writing is good, but there are too many typos.

What the hell, chapter 255 will be followed by chapter 556, is it broken? No update in January