Making a Living in Another World's Spatial Realm

I think no matter how good the article is, let's not make so many typos. It's really uncomfortable to read, so I gave up.

The heroine's IQ is really getting more and more unsatisfactory~ Is the heroine really mixed up with a lieutenant colonel in her previous life? Did she really survive in the apocalypse? Really lived as a ghost for hundreds of years? She can only panic and rely on others~ and even cause trouble. She regrets that she was too lazy to practice in the past~ too lazy to practice alchemy. ~So the elixir reserve is not enough~ I am reading this book now~ I can only read it because the heroine's past life experience does not exist~ Even though it is a bit unbearable~ But I will force it to read ~ The heroine is really mentally retarded and it is hard to watch~~ Has the author forgotten the background setting of the heroine's previous life?

Just durian alone can make up so many words! When we read novels, do we really not need the author to copy the information found online and put it directly into the novel?!

Not good-looking, mentally retarded. If he had this IQ, he would have died a hundred million times.

Not so good! Isn't the heroine a lieutenant colonel? How did he become a colonel based on his IQ?