Tianjie Mobile Phone

I just want to ask the author what is the highlight of the book. Is the meritorious immortal just immortal? So the Empress Nuwa is so meritorious that she cannot even defeat ordinary immortals?

Brother, everything the protagonist has comes from his mobile phone, how can he become a soldier? ? Cell phones are not allowed in the military. Author, do you not understand the meaning of being a soldier? Have you been deceived by those ghosts on TV? ? ?

I have a whole system of gods as my backers. Why on earth are you telling me to become an athlete? Compete with the Hulk for strength or speed with The Flash?

People say there are three golden chapters, and the first few chapters of this book are really golden. I thought it was a sacred book, at least the rhythm of food and grass. When the first real-life story came out in Chapter 7, I felt depressed😒, aggrieved, and wanted to vomit. Dozens of corpses, a kidnapped woman who was about to be killed, just two mortals. You have powerful supernatural powers, the strength to move mountains, and the card of Dong Zhuo of the Three Kingdoms. You said you are afraid, well, you can only say that you are not afraid of losing fans by writing like this.

You can only read the first 30 chapters of this book, and it doesn't matter if you don't read the rest. Even a salted fish is more ambitious than the protagonist.

Chapter 326, it really feels a bit incredible.

Forget about turning into an ugly fat man in front of you. When you call the police, no matter whether it is true or false, the police will be dispatched. It's just a matter of speed or slowness when there are many people and few people. The criminal police is so free to patrol the school for you? You are already a freshman and yet the whole school is mobilized to hold a sports meeting just for the sake of holding a sports meeting? Are the military, provincial sports, and criminal police all so free to watch your school's sports meet? Are you so casually asked to become a super soldier or athlete? Such a powerful golden finger is still struggling to decide whether to be a soldier or an athlete? How about doing something else? Or can't they develop well without being promiscuous?

I feel like this book is so stupidly written. I actually vomited on several pages of my first love ink.

Although the book is over, opinions no longer matter! I only read the first few dozen chapters. When I saw the reserve and troop training parts, I felt very uncomfortable. I really couldn't stand it! You, a person who has been blessed with immortality, go to the army to train? Isn't this nonsense? It's completely illogical!

You are all destined to be immortal. You said it was "very cool" because of the three-year no-tax policy? ? Please, are you naive? In your opinion, the purpose of gaining extraordinary abilities is to join the reserve army and then enjoy the three-year tax exemption policy of the reserve army? Do you still need to receive training from the Sports Bureau and the army? ? ? ? ? If you can take a bite of the elixir and train others for a lifetime, are you really not afraid of being sliced ​​into pieces? As for the Super Soldiers, every big shot said lines like "Super Soldiers" in a serious manner, which is really childish. Furthermore, in the face of cross-examination by a beautiful woman without any evidence, you inexplicably admitted it? ? ? ? It was so depressing that I vomited.

After reading more than ten chapters, I failed to resist the poison. When the author wrote about the reincarnation of various small worlds, I thought he was writing about infinite flow again, but ended up with a bunch of messy settings, such as the small world of the Three Kingdoms, the orthodoxy, the possession, and the thing that cannot be removed within ten years. In the end, it is to give the protagonist the ability to transform into Dong Zhuo. Isn't this the character draw card in the system novel? In order to add this setting, it took almost a chapter to explain, and it still made the readers confused, and the writing skills were mediocre.

I have watched it before, but I forgot why I stopped watching it. I watched it again, and after seeing that it was connected to the military, I finally understood why I stopped watching it.

If you want to cultivate immortality, you should cultivate hard. If you want to be a soldier or engage in sports, you should give up decisively.

Don't read what's written is too rubbish. He is both a soldier and a national athlete.

In the first few chapters, I thought I needed a divine book, but I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw soldiers or athletes. Or I could just write about sports, or I could just write about being a soldier, or there could be a supernatural game, but I really can't stand it anymore.

I have read Chapter 394 so far. How should I put it? The author may be a very conservative male chauvinist. This article mentions 1. A woman not cooking is bad for marriage. 2. The child cannot have the woman's surname. The second point is understandable if there is only one child. Brother, you only have one child in the cultivation of immortality? 3. If you read this book as an urban superpower, it will be boring. It takes 300 chapters to reach the fairy world, and most of it talks about metaphysics, Feng Shui, and popular science about fortune-telling. I switched from iOS to Android, and I was afraid that the gold coins would be out of sync. I bought a lot of books in a hurry, and the only one I couldn't finish was the one I couldn't finish, but the thought of not reading the huge loss echoed in my mind.

In fact, I was very interested in reading it at the beginning, so I read it one after another. But later on, I felt nothing at all. I often skipped chapters. I felt it was just average. Alas.

Later on, it was written as "Swallowing the Starry Sky". Mutated monsters, warriors, God of War, gravity training room, God of War preparation camp, consciousness-sensing helmet, virtual universe company, genetic medicine, and hundreds of billions of bounties are all elements in "Swallowing the Starry Sky"

I have the impression that the author's other book "The Great Infinite Divine Ring" is very good-looking. You can support it.

Destroy three generations out of context and abandon the trap decisively.

After more than 30 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore.

After reading ten chapters, I decisively gave up the book. The author should experience life more before writing novels 😰

I don't recommend everyone to read this book. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I don't even know what it is about.

Don't write novels with this kind of writing. After reading a dozen or so chapters, I forced myself to read more than 200 chapters and then completely lost my mind. The writing was a mess.

It's a paid book and it's gone. It's a very interesting book.

I just want to ask him when he started cultivating immortality? I have read more than 140 chapters

Why are so many chapters missing? I was reading it carefully, but suddenly one chapter was missing in the middle, which was really weird. I have seen more than 140 chapters so far, and there are four missing chapters in total. I gave up when I encountered missing chapters again.

The emotional line is written in a piece of shit, and the whole book is ruined by this piece of shit. Don't the current authors know their own merits? If they insist on writing something they are not good at in a large space, they are really destroying the Great Wall.

Chapter 326 released in 2017 made my scalp numb.

I have been writing about my entanglements with women. I have to publish the book and go to female channels.