Dragon Ball Xenoverse

The introduction is very discouraging. Why do Dragon Ball fandoms have plots where the protagonist is invincible? Such plots are really boring. What Dragon Ball wants is the feeling that the enemy is so powerful that it makes people despair, and then the Z warriors work together to defeat the enemy with their skills. The main character is Invincible. I might as well read a novel about City Invincible pretending to have a harem...

Don't be so rude when writing your introduction. . . Introduction: Persuasion to quit is the first wave. .

I didn't want to read it as soon as I read the introduction. I guess the writing wasn't very good.

The heroine is not Bulma and slipped away

I don't like time travel with emotions. For example, I hate a protagonist and admire a protagonist. It seems very unqualified. Time travel is either to complete a task or to plunder all things to strengthen oneself, and personal emotions affect the income. There are many time travelers who protect the country, serve the people, and fight for all mankind. It's disgusting. I think there is no problem in opening up a space when one is strong enough. When the time comes, you can raise as many humans as you like, or create a universe, no matter what. It's disgusting to see those time travelers with great potential playing the role of protecting mankind! Okay, I haven't read this book, it's just based on my thoughts, so here goes!

I haven't watched it yet. Did you finally travel back in time? What kind of soy milk and fried dough sticks direct x

This name is so popular, is there a Dragon Ball Xenoverse 2 😂

The combat power is just a random code. When Vegeta arrived on Earth, the protagonist's combat power was tens of thousands. However, he still couldn't beat Vegeta when he used Kaio Fist 20 times. When we went to Namek, the protagonist had a combat power of one million, but Vegeta only had 24,000.

"Rebirth of Super Cell" Lu Ming, an otaku addicted to the two-dimensional world, accidentally traveled to the Dragon Ball world and became an important villain boss in the Dragon Ball world - Cell; however, he did not expect that he did not become the big boss Cell, but became a premature baby...

What nonsense are you writing? I have no idea what you are writing. Are you practicing calligraphy?

By the way, author, are you sure you've seen Dragon Ball? Nappa's combat power is 7,000, okay? Also, Goku's combat power after adapting to 100 times the weight is 90,000. If you don't understand, please stop writing nonsense.

Brother, in your introduction, you do this, but you can be more subtle about that, really.

I just realized that the setting of this novel is really awesome. The world of Dragon Ball tens of thousands of years later. Wukong and others have become legendary figures. However, a mysterious dark force is ready to move. They are changing the history of Sun Wukong and others. Don't know what the purpose is. Then people tens of thousands of years later gathered together. The Space-Time Administration was established. Fix corrupted history. Just tell me whether this setting is awesome or not.

I've read a lot of Dragon Ball fan fiction, and many authors like to add things like the Realm of Time and the Dragon God Sattar into the books. I just want to ask if the anime I watch doesn't have these things at all, or maybe it does, but there must be many readers like me who haven't seen it. Don't you authors think about it when writing books, haven't those of us who haven't seen these strange settings of Dragon Ball? Originally, Dragon Ball had a small audience, but it also added a strange setting. How could the book become popular?

The writing is too messy, the writing is unclear, and the plot is unclear. It will definitely be a hit.

I am still a fair-faced newcomer. I was originally very pure, but because I couldn't find the novel I wanted to read, I turned on the computer in desperation... And stepped into this deep pit. I knew that my writing might be poor. Here I hope that everyone can actively point out the shortcomings in my novel to correct their own mistakes. In fact, I don't think criticism is a bad thing. On the contrary, I think it can correct many of my own mistakes. Moreover, someone criticizing it means that my novel is being read, and I am very excited. I hope everyone can criticize me enthusiastically! ! (How do I feel that I have M tendencies!!)

Majin Orb's journey through time was so dark that he didn't want to write about it.

I feel so confused and can't understand. Is it because the world has changed, or is my university diploma fake?

The introduction should read: Ah Quan, I want to kill you

The protagonist's name is Pika, so he persuades him to quit

The author writes so well, why are there so few comments? You can come and take a look at the book I wrote

Dragon Ball Super really came out, I thought this book had all the kings hahahaha