The Demon King's Dimension Travel Record

The writing style... Is really average. I didn't read the back part, but the front part is really a bit poisonous. The Demon King's charming eyes, and even the Demon King who behaves a bit like Xiaoshuai later on. The story is good, but the writing is not good, it looks awkward, and there are emotional scenes... I suggest you consider it if you don't have enough food. Others... I won't say more. I hope you remember to type up the natural paragraphs later and don't pile up a lot of dialogue there. The author probably wrote the book with love, so few people read it...

The protagonist's strength is too weak. Since it is a vector operation at level 5, he is exhausted after facing dozens of deep seas in the Kanmu world, and even let Nagato sink (although there is damage control). This is at most level 1, right? Not to mention that the protagonist is still a master of assassins and swordsmanship. I have been trying to wait until the protagonist is super powerful, until the merchant is not so weak, so I skipped back a few chapters on the pirated version... In the main world, the protagonist is only at the peak of level 2? Facing hundreds of skeleton soldiers, the author's description is that his heart is hairy and the character is pale... I said, after all, he was killed from the mountain of corpses and sea of ​​blood in the campus apocalypse. Can it be worthy of your strength? Accelerator is already invincible, why are you still on par with the Skeleton Soldiers? I was originally going to keep silently giving up, but when I was reading the book reviews, I saw that the author said that he wanted to comment and point out the shortcomings that could be improved. I thought about it and expressed my own opinions. You can think about it yourself, author. As long as the emotional aspect is concerned, I don't think it matters. Since it is positioned as a harem story, it is actually better to have no emotions. The basic setting is that the female character has a maximum initial affection for the male protagonist. People who want to see delicate emotions will not be satisfied with your harem, so it doesn't matter.

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Is this the kind of guy who is called the Demon King and is actually a dead otaku? ? ? ?

When I first read it, it was really missing a lot of chapters, which made me look for a pirated copy.

I hope to add storylines such as Magical Girl Ilia, Holy Grail War, Ship B, Girls' Frontline, etc. The person who has occupied the top spot for several months in a row stays

Why are you skipping chapters? There are so many missing chapters.

Emmm, the goblin at the beginning reminds me of Goblin Slayer. If this is really Goblin Slayer, then probably Hatsune-sama. . . . . .

The framework is too big, the writing style cannot support it, the system is too exaggerated, and it even has a Chinese name in a Japanese comic, which is embarrassing.

I like the direction of the plot and the choice of the world very much, but I just can't like it. It feels like it will lower my IQ level... If the writing was better, I would have to read it no matter what... I can't say whose fault it is, I just feel so sorry. Come on, author, don't make the male protagonist so childish, don't make the female protagonist so mentally retarded, you will succeed.

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To be honest, I plan to keep reading, but I can't help but come here to complain. Even if the vector operation of lv5 is so weak, why do I have to let the enemy go every time? Just change the title of the book to The Holy Mother's Dimension Travel Record.

I've never played Kanji, and if I hadn't read too many books, I wouldn't know who is who.

The group number is 581824228 I hope that all book lovers can join the group and make this book better and better through everyone's discussion.

After reading the comments and combining it with the first chapter, I realized that this is a pseudo-demon book. I have no choice but to become a demon king for the sake of the system and the mission. It is a boring book that is ambiguous until the end of time. It adds countless seasonings but never starts the meal. It is also a gross Crystal Palace.

I don't know why, but I couldn't stand it after reading two chapters.

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The ship girl has some strength in persuading her to retreat. . .

I hope readers who have read this work will leave comments to see if there are any shortcomings. Your comments are my biggest motivation.

Come on, I'm optimistic about you 😄