Qin Louchun

The beginning was pretty good, but I didn't expect it to become more and more wordy, the characters were unstable, and the plot design became more and more suspenseful. I skipped chapters and finished reading it. I was exhausted.

After actually seeing the VIP chapter, has this really changed the author's writing style? It's so long-winded... I can't stand it.

Do you need to write dozens of chapters after going over and over again about the Xu family and the Qin family's big house? Write it from Xu's perspective, write it from Yao's perspective, uncle's perspective, Qin Jian's perspective, Jinhua's perspective, Jinchun's perspective, Mrs. Xu's perspective, Mrs. Xu's perspective, Xu Rong's perspective, Zhao's perspective Mo's perspective, Hanzhen's perspective, as well as Mrs. Cai, the eldest son of the Cai family, Cai Yuanzhen, and the seven aunts and eight aunts all came to think about it and express their opinions over and over again. One chapter has passed! The marriage can have been decided a long time ago, why does the author keep repeating it again and again from different perspectives? This problem is not limited to this incident, but almost every contradiction in the article is like this. It is understandable that the author makes money by writing books, but it is too much to inject too much water!

The content of this article is entirely driven by the best relatives. The ancient official family version of the best fight is divided into two parts. The heroine's family wipes the relatives' buttocks in a fancy way, which accounts for 99% of the article, and the remaining 1% is the heroine's fancy mourning. I am really convinced by this article.

So much filial piety is too much. My cousin is only 9 months old, and there were many relatives in the past. If we continue like this, we won't have a chance to have children. It's not very unfilial.

Never buy a book. Because this book is really stupid. Anyway, if you buy it and read it, you'll be even more stupid... It's really not well written. Procrastinating and extremely long-winded. So many chapters are basically just enough words.

Why are the women (villains) in the author's works always the same and so menopausal-looking? What did you say? [Why should a woman embarrass a woman?] Don't think it's a bit crazy to write this kind of character all the time?

I can't stand watching it from the beginning. The original heroine was killed, the mother was forced to die, and she took someone else's body. She didn't take revenge or wanted to, and she looked like a virgin. How bad can a child be if he doesn't understand?

Was this book written by the author himself? It's too verbose, and it's suspected of cheating money.

Can these minor supporting characters have less roles?😆😆

There is no heroine in this book, only supporting heroines😁

It's so long-winded that I can't stand it once I read it. The characters are not fleshed out. I feel that the author is writing from the reader's point of view. It's too superficial. It's far inferior to Xian Da's books.

This book has more poisonous points than usual. There are too many places where the logic is illogical and the character collapses. There is no one who makes me feel so awkward and can't help complaining about this book! The main reason why I have to complain before abandoning the article is because the greater the expectations, the greater the disappointment.

The author has been unable to change his verbosity after so many years.

I couldn't get into it even after reading it twice. It's too long-winded and the villain jumps from the first chapter to the last chapter. I don't know if the author is the heroine's mother or the villain's mother. The villain does wrong things without being punished and still dominates, and the heroine is as easy to bully as a baby cabbage. One second my mother was still there arguing with her sister-in-law and she wanted to pay with her life, and the next second she committed suicide in despair? The characters are inconsistent and unreasonable. In ancient times, there were ancestral halls and clans, and parents were bullied by their daughters-in-law. Every time they are elderly grandparents, but according to the age of ancient people, they can be grandparents in their 30s. Unless there is a delay in marriage due to filial piety or other reasons, the heroine's grandparents are in their 40s at most. The author's description gives me a feeling of being in their seventies or eighties. If it were modern times, it would be normal to be grandparents in your seventies or eighties, but that was in ancient times. Even if the heroine's grandfather gives birth to a child at the age of 20, the grandfather will only be 50 years old at most. The author is just trying to get rid of the plot, all kinds of long descriptions and unreasonable character logic, especially because he was so good at writing books before. I feel like I've exhausted all my talents

I have just signed a contract to write about the female protagonist in "The Legend of Troubled Times, The Story of Young Master Ji". The history can be tested and the pattern is grand. It is about seeking the world during the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period. It is more refreshing and less verbose. Three Kingdoms is the queen, and one dynasty is approaching the nine heavens! "Kill three husbands, two kings and one son, and perish two countries and three ministers." In history, her name only has the word "Xia Ji", but few people know that her surname is Ji Shao. She was born with the twin stars ordained by the prophet of the witch clan during the Warring States period to bring chaos to the world... Later generations will sneer at her. The most evil witch in the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, she? Well deserved! A hero in the world? Emperor and prince? It's just a knife she uses for herself. She lives soberly and sees clearly that she doesn't want to fall in love in this life, but it is inevitable that she will fall in love once... The feudal princes are fighting, the heroes are vying for the deer, the waves are treacherous, look at her bare hands gently twisting, planning the world between her skirts

It ended too suddenly

Nowadays, the introductions are all good, but the articles are not so good.

I always thought it would end soon

I am participating in the Qidian [Vote for Online Literary God-level Famous Scenes] event. The original text of the famous scene I submitted is as follows. Come and discuss it with me! Qin Hanzhen's verbal calculation speed was much faster than hers, and he immediately pointed out the mistake. Aunt Tiger smiled sheepishly and said: "I'm so confused that I can't even calculate such a simple account clearly." {"LinkId":"883432641","LinkName":"515 Book Fan Festival-Famous Scene Voting ","LinkUrl":"QDReader://ataru. Qidian. Com/noah/883432641?_Viewmode=1&nocenter=2&f=tg"}

The heroine camp is such a waste. A housewife who killed her own mother is kept in trouble by jumping around and arrogantly causing trouble! Fortunately, I just jumped to check when she would deal with it, and found that it would take a long, long time, so I gave up and stopped reading!

It's too long-winded, and many of the things that have been said are repeated at length, as if to make up the word count. It feels like I've been watching it for a long time. The heroine is still an 8-year-old girl, and she has no sense of existence.

It's finally finished. To be honest, this is one of Liu Dashu's poorly written books. The male and female protagonists are not very outstanding, and some descriptions are very, very long-winded and repeated over and over again. I have always been a loyal fan of All Subscribers. I really like Liu Daping's plain writing style. I hope the next book will improve!

It's not bad, it's a short story about parents, overall it's quite heartwarming...

I don't know why there are so many recommendations. I couldn't stand the first few chapters. People who died in the first two chapters will be resurrected. I'm speechless.

Is this the end? I feel like I haven't finished writing yet😭

After looking at it, I felt: the old lady's foot-binding cloth was smelly and long...

The male and female protagonists have always lived in the glory of their grandfathers, without any stories of their own. The love stories written directly about the grandfather and grandmother are better than theirs, and the emotional lines are all forced.

Miss Qin finally calmed down, right?

My cousin died and she still had to serve nine months of meritorious service.