I Have an Alien Game on My Phone

What a great idea. It was written as a brainless B article. My writing skills are really bad. I couldn't express myself clearly after writing something for a long time. I wrote it as a B article on science and technology. The 10-year-old bookworm persuaded me to give up and ran away.

I feel like the protagonist's IQ is so low. The troubles that can be solved easily are allowed to develop, and they have to wait until others find trouble. It's really...

The protagonist has the capital to become the king of the galaxy, but he keeps writing about hackers...

After reading the first chapter, I don't want to read anymore. This woman's IQ is overdue, and she still insists on doing this after we break up. If my girlfriend dares to humiliate me like this, I will dare to throw concentrated sulfuric acid in her face the next day.

I thought it was a black technology route, but it turned out that I kept pretending to be slapped in the face on campus, and this slap in the face was so low that I couldn't even feel the protagonist's facial slap. Later, I kept writing about hackers, which had nothing to do with technology. I didn't even make it to chapter 50 and gave up on the book!

I can't stand it, there's no point. 1. The game is not written at all and I don't know what the author is thinking. 2. The technology is not written at all. It's basically a piece of shit. They already have high-end equipment to control the power and money. Sooner or later, the result is all kinds of pretense and the content is vulgar.

If you don't make good use of your golden fingers, you'll tinker around with a hammer and a stick all day long. You're sick. You can't walk when you see a woman. You meet a new woman every day, and all of them are beauties. They all either have a crush on you or are attracted to you. The author didn't write an outline when writing the novel. Isn't it because he has never seen a woman in real life that he can't write well? After you write it, you don't read it yourself. Don't you find it irritating? Didn't your Chinese teacher teach you to stick to the title of your essay? You went off topic. You didn't know that the title of your essay was about game aliens and technology, not women, not young ladies like Lolita and Royal Sisters. If you were to give a score to this work, it would definitely be 0 points. You have gone off topic. No matter how well written it is, what's the use? I would like to give you a suggestion. Change the name of the novel to "Things Between Me and Beautiful Women". It will definitely fit the content of your novel and it will not be criticized by others.

Author, please update more than once a day, maybe three or four chapters. The current word count is too small, I can finish it in one bite!

He was poisoned and died, but he persisted in watching for one day and was successfully persuaded to quit!

It's really hard for me to watch. The storyline is too toxic.

This theme was from a few years ago, and it was really good-looking before. But I have to say it's really poisonous. A person with status and status doesn't even have the most basic self-cultivation, and repays kindness with hatred. Who would cooperate with such a person, for fear of being cheated to death. There are actually rules for reading in the library. You can't read randomly. You can only read what I tell you to read. Moreover, a well-known domestic director doesn't even have any public relations skills, and he doesn't even have his own navy. Who would believe it? When an actor actually uses whoever is good at basketball to play the role, I accepted it. It is extremely poisonous.

I didn't expect that a plot that seemed cliche in 10 years was actually written in 2016

Shen Nong is dead. If something happens, paper will be burned 🤝

This protagonist is also an idiot. They bombed you with neutron bombs. After you used alien technology to repair your genes, you didn't use alien technology to take revenge. Instead, you ran back to China to compete for some interests with domestic families. It's really a typical infighting expert.

The writing is so idiotic. In reality, the protagonist has done this and the earth has been destroyed by alien civilization hundreds of times.

Dog-like IQ coupled with shit-like plot

I've read Chapter 17 and received five-star reviews. Check it out. It's so good... Goodbye to you

It's a rubbish book, but I was deducted more than two hundred points before I even read it. And it was for downloading the free chapters in front of it. Damn it.

You can tell from the introduction that you don't need to read this book.

Only the thinking of a middle school student can write a book like this

It's a bit poisonous. After reading a few chapters, you already believe in charm potions. Why can't you believe in aliens? What a great network of connections, he's a college student, it's really cool

It's useless to have such a cool thing, hack them, find out whether the enemy has any evidence of crime, if it can't be done, just kill them.

He has been successfully poisoned to death, and the pig's feet are idiots.

The introduction persuades the series to be abandoned, but it can't be blamed. After all, the book was written a few years ago. This type of routine was still very popular at the time when this was written, but it is no longer possible. Hey, it's so hard to find a book that can be read to the end. Either I can't stand it or the author is too lazy.

Can't you live without being the protagonist? Can't you write a book?