The Great Disciple of Xiaoyao Sect in Online Games

I have been reading it with free coins. To be honest, the early stage is really good, not to say anything else, but it has a mindless and relaxed atmosphere, which makes people have a pleasant reading experience. From the middle stage, readers keep asking if it is the end. It feels like a sudden change of author, a bit like the bloody harem of the previous Xiaobai novels. All the female characters have no reason to force themselves to fall in love with the protagonist, and there are also some pornographic two-dimensional things mixed in! It's a pity that such a light-hearted novel was ruined like this. Maybe this book will be finished when the Song and Yuan wars are over!

By the way, the first 300 chapters of this book are pretty good. Although it is a cool novel, it is not brainless. After the 300th chapter, it keeps falling apart. First, there was an inexplicable emotional line, where Huan suddenly fell in love with the protagonist, which unfolded without any foreshadowing; then the German Orthopedics also appeared, and the harem was directly sent to strengthen the group. Is there really no problem with such a perfunctory harem? ! Then the nameless team and friendly forces were completely reduced to the protagonist's pendant. Facing the plot NPCs, all of them were invincible. While the protagonist was banned, the combination of two super union elites and an unknown team couldn't defeat another super union weakling combination that was half disabled by the protagonist. It was simply Shi Lezhi! Finally, in terms of the plot, the protagonist has crippled two super unions, but there are still so many ignorant people jumping out to take on the protagonist; I just want to ask the protagonist if he has done something outrageous and outrageous, or does he have so many enemies who hate to kill his father or take away his wife? You know you can't beat me, but you still insist on making a cane wholesale? What's even more outrageous is that the artificial intelligence that monitors the game has a delay. It took a long time for the incident to occur before I realized that it must be the hardware configuration of the Xiaobawang game console!

The writing is smooth and the story is logical. Although it is well written, I decided to give it only one point. This is to make the author realize the impermanence of life and make the author work harder.

I feel sorry for Li Guanguanqwq, Carnival you have described so much before. In the end, there was no orthopedics!

That's it. Why aren't Wen Rui'an's novel characters included? Xiong Ba died too quickly! I was stunned when I saw it.

Long Xiaoyun, please die quickly. It's so frustrating to watch.

The updates are great, monthly tickets are provided

The author is so handsome. Please update me soon.

Author, when will you open None

I am a sailor, although I am not a traditional Chinese character, and the recommendation votes were not voted inexplicably, because I voted on my own initiative. Why do this? It's because I want the author to feel the impermanence of life and encourage the author to continue working hard!

The author is so handsome. The author is so handsome. The author is so handsome. The author is so handsome. The author is so handsome. Five sentences in. Please add more.

The Rise of True Martial Arts - Creation Signing - Martial Arts online games, please support, next week Genesis PC classification - strong recommendation, this is the only chance for newcomers, if there are book friends who think it is good, please help me, thank you, if you think it is good, support it!

Like the title, Fengyun, Golden Body, I haven't seen too many Fengyun, so I can only think of this

Finish spreading flowers? Although I feel like I can still keep writing. After all, the system is so awesome

A lot of this book is plagiarized from the online game Tomb Master

The name of the protagonist in the online game persuaded me to quit. I'm a perfectionist. I can't stand it if I fantasize about it, and I can't get into it.

Sure enough, I am really looking forward to the meeting between Zhao Min and Shi Feixuan

When I saw the chapter about red clothes, I felt my heart twitch. I don't know why.

It can be known from Richard's theorem that anyone who has female characteristics and has physical contact and verbal communication with Richard will fall in love with Richard, such as the Invincible East and the recent chapter Blue Phoenix, so it is speculated that Xuexin will fall in love with Richard.

The plot has collapsed! ! ! Alas, I also excerpted part of the plot of Fengyun and wrote some parts blindly. I can't stand it anymore! ! ! Moreover, Emperor Shitian cannot absorb Long Yuan at all! I suggest the author read the new chapter and my comments

What I want to say is why does it feel like the protagonist knows the plot one moment and doesn't know the plot the next?

Ask the author if he is finishing it?

I haven't been able to update very well these days. It's so out of context that I almost want to send you a razor blade.

It's a good book that ended early, so I'm going to continue it~~

I like this book and hope the author will keep writing and open up new horizons

I just discovered this novel today, give it a try

Isn't it just that there is no god?🙂

735 I have marked the error in this chapter, it is where Shi Wuzun came out to pick up Richard.

Damn it, sister, can we surrender! Can! The author is so handsome!

The author is so damn handsome QAQ