The Strongest Athlete

I really liked it, and finally got a sports book, but unfortunately it ended up writing about football.

The protagonist is childish, a dog-licker, a middle-aged girl, a loser, startled and retaliated with kindness... A variety of disgusting characters are gathered together, and it is really rare to be able to make a protagonist so disgusting.

What's annoying is that there's always a bunch of words after the end of each chapter, and the second chapter doesn't go smoothly. Could you please stop talking about it after the chapter? Is there so much nonsense?

I came across this book by accident, and I have only read the beginning. It is still readable, but the author talks a lot of nonsense, and there is so much nonsense at the end of each chapter that it makes people angry. Also, is the pig's foot going to be written as the Virgin? Ma Dan is often provoked by that supporting character, and he repays kindness with kindness. This is not in line with social values ​​at all. Besides, Pigfoot is still a child under 20 years old. Let's not say more. At this age, it is impossible for him to be noble enough to repay evil with kindness. Is the author happy after being slapped on the left cheek and then slapping the right cheek again?

After looking at the first 20 or so photos, there is a supporting character who keeps sarcastic and provocative! But the protagonist who owns the system has been enduring and not fighting, and he doesn't feel happy at all. It makes his heart hurt to watch, *, what is the writing? There is no writing skills at all! In fact, if you want to write a cool article, you should let the system provide the protagonist with a curse halo, which can be controlled by the protagonist and given to whoever he wants, so that the villains will be embarrassed or unlucky. This coincides with the cause and effect cycle of "evil begets evil", and readers will feel very comfortable reading it. Your sister is always suppressed and never raised. It's heartbreaking,*

There is a reason for every book's poor performance. In this description of character and performance, a 20-year-old is like a little lolita. She can't move her father and stick out her tongue. How about the baby! Maybe the author has read too many comics! But you have to know that many languages ​​​​are good when paired with comic and cartoon images, but would you try it with real people?

Is the author female? So feminine

The author is a powerful person and poisoned to death 88

Regarding skills, why can't the improvement ratio be a floating value? For example, in normal training, we should train through force exertion techniques, breathing, etc., And then watch the performance during the game. There is also the problem of adding points. I always feel that adding points is not my own, but what I get through hard work is my own.

The name of Chapter 134 was originally supposed to be "What are you looking at?" But because of my negligence, it was written as "What are you worried about?" It's really a bit embarrassing.

Please, write less about love. You are really not good at love lines. You don't understand the purpose of writing about love in this kind of fictional novel at all. A heroine whose readers have no idea and no sense of picture has no characteristics in her character and has no effect on the plot. It is simply a waste of pen and ink.

The IAAF has a rule that in large-scale events such as the Olympics and World Championships: "If an all-around athlete achieves a better result in a certain event than the champion of that individual event, the all-around athlete will win the gold medal in that individual event. If the all-around athlete breaks the world record in a certain individual event, that record will also become a new individual world record." So there is no need for the protagonist to also compete in the 100-meter dash!

Why do you always send @@@? It annoys me to death! ! ! ! ! !

The golden finger is too strong. It should highlight the efforts of athletes to improve their performance step by step.

Being banned for three years for hitting someone? Then the protagonist can directly naturalize to other countries without hesitation.

The writing style is really... It's not easy for someone to take over the sports category other than big ball, but this writing style... And comrades, you don't have an outline, do you? The yellow race ran into 10s and actually asked you to write 20 words in a narrative style and finish it...

Many domestic companies have no contractual spirit. Good luck!

I can't stand it, they are all a brat and a brat, I can't stand it.

This author calls himself Xiao Xiaojun, is he a Hari?