Death Red Envelope

Let me go, what did you write? This paragraph and that paragraph have no preface and follow-up. There are so many loopholes.

I see the most shameless person in the pretense, who kneels down and slaps her in the face at the first glance, and even after being teased and rejected by a woman, she still pursues her shamelessly. How despicable.

The other authors of "Red List" and "Gangshenma" are all bad at writing.

I've reached chapter 27 and can't stand it anymore. There are really too many plot holes. For example, the scene where Xia Yue's mother Wang Guihua is in the bar is obviously unjustifiable. Xia Yue's grandfather obviously has a high status, but he doesn't care about Wang Guihua in the bar. How is this possible?

Medium to lower, medium and above average, rank by yourself. This article is a follow-up article, but the protagonist does not have any sense of decisiveness. If it is said to be gradual, it is really a problem with the setting. After all, there are already pearls in front of you. If you are unhappy, what do you think you are doing? Moreover, in the next 20-30 chapters, the main plot is really a bit messy and the main line is not clear. In general, I can come up with a novel plot and there is a future. If I don't do this, I will starve to death sooner or later. I really don't like it, but I have a bad mouth, so don't complain!

Why do authors choose ugly people with lots of shortcomings as protagonists?

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The more I look at the back, the more dizzy I feel.

The author is very skillful in controlling his works, and we are blessed (the less recommended the more public), but you must follow your own ideas and do not change due to the requirements of some readers. Finally, I wish this book a great success.

Master the language well, grasp the attractive plot and write it down, so that readers can be immersed in it. It must be a good book!

It's so exciting, this book will be a hit!

Well written, with such a powerful name, it looks like a good book. I have saved it and support you!

The protagonist's family was beaten to death, but instead of beating the other person's family to death, the protagonist wanted to save the other person's life. Is this a man? Or is this still a human being?

Continue, Wei Mao, take care of yourself! [Fn=2_6]

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