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Chapter Three. . . When I saw the marriage, I was immediately persuaded to leave.

I quit immediately after reading the introduction. Taishang Laojun asked you to shut down the alchemy furnace? Not to mention that the three great saints are the most powerful, but you can't get the materials! Does the Queen Mother want you to terminate the Shejitu? Do you really think that thing can break easily?

After arriving in heaven and coming back just to show off? There is no sense of substitution. Abandoned.

I thought it was quite interesting at first, but then it became very boring as the protagonist learned more skills, especially in the real world where he didn't know what he was doing. The author's plot arrangement and design were still a bit immature. I don't understand why the protagonist insists on pursuing Yatou Xu. The protagonist doesn't like her and ruins her marriage. When things get busy later, there is no plot about Yatou Xu. It's anticlimactic. The plot of learning cooking and smelting in the real world is quite far-fetched, and I don't even know how to complain about it. He made a sword and went out to sea to fight for justice. The whole plot was completely reversed. From crossing two worlds to fighting for kings, the protagonist's watch was a bug. If he was so unhappy, he could just use the watch to destroy their network system or economic system. After capturing the soldier with the stick, the protagonist actually got together with the pirates, and even said that the woman who snatched the stick would be given to everyone. Isn't the author young? Slavery has been abolished for such a long time. Of course it sounds very pleasant to say it. If you really dare to be the protagonist, you will become the public enemy of the world. Even the Chinese cannot support the protagonist. The protagonist borrowed Miaomiao's live broadcast room, and then Miaomiao came to rent the protagonist's house, forced the plot, and forced the character into the protagonist. The other party didn't want to rent it, and the protagonist even changed into the identity of Poseidon and asked the other party to stay, wtf, I don't understand why he did this?

Overall, it's pretty good, but it feels a bit unfinished!

I saw a few pictures and couldn't stand them at all 😅

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