The Coming of the Immortal Dynasty

Firstly, the character of the protagonist has not been completely finalized yet, but it is understandable since he has not traveled through time for a long time, but I hope the author will pay attention! How many chapters are there? It's time to settle. The second point is that the protagonist has not killed Green Tea Piao yet. Due to the author's bacteria, he wants to fight with the same realm within the sect, and then the truth will be revealed. At the same time, he will be very happy. He not only solves the opponent, but also makes the opponent reveal his true nature in front of everyone, and makes himself innocent again. However, some readers may feel that this is not satisfying enough. It has been so many chapters and I haven't killed him yet. I am anxious to death. If it were me, I would have let Feathering or Nursing fuck him to death! Author bacteria, brothers are waiting impatiently! Brothers are all serious about reading, so they are very angry! I mentioned the above two points twice. How many chapters are there? So, the highlights can be summed up as one reason: Updates are slow! If your update speed increases, the plot's development speed will also increase. But with the steady update of two chapters every day, brothers, watch it anxiously! If there is no place to release the fire in your heart, it will make you angry. So, you know the author's bacteria!

Intellectually retarded novel! No wonder it can't be popular. If you don't strike first, you have to wait for others to kill you, and you have to come up with a set of brain-dead confessions, the Holy Mother's White Lotus.

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. It was said earlier that the Blood-Transforming Magic Sword is a magical power that comes from the early stage of becoming a god. It can't even be used to defeat those in the early stages of Qi training with one strike. Is this called a magical power? ? ? Are you talking about essence and blood? Generally, one drop will severely damage the vitality. The whole body's essence and blood will be condensed into a blood magic sword? ? ? And you don't even have to run out to pick up leaks, let alone have a grudge, a time traveler? Oh! People on earth are so simple! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A bunch of noisy points, and it crashes at the beginning

Chapter 6 won't work. Before others enter the dungeon, they have made it clear that they want to kill the protagonist. After entering, they still go to help when two sects are fighting. You go to help someone who wants to kill you. Don't say anything about being consistent with the outside world. Where does the sense of belonging come from when you just traveled through time?

I can only say that it's a good death 🤭🤭 You have to use prehistoric characters, and you have to be dark Then you can create a Nascent Soul that is comparable to the prehistoric boss Those who don't know think this book is the ancestor of cultivating immortals You have to challenge the gas refining, foundation building, golden elixir, Taiyi Golden Immortal, etc. That everyone has been familiar with for so many years Don't you know that water can carry a boat and capsize it? I can only say it's good to die

This is completely wrong. As we all know, prehistoric times are the ceiling for novels about cultivating immortals. Here it is. Taishang Laojun's magic weapon. The old man knows how to use mortal magic weapons. Not to mention using innate spiritual treasures. There will probably be a lot of spiritual treasures the day after tomorrow. He would use a piece of garbage for a belt. Doesn't he feel ashamed of himself? You can write other systems. This is how you write about cultivating immortals. He also belittled Honghuang to such a low level. Let's talk about a systematic person. Early stage of weapon refining. Take so long. The word insults the system.

👍 I have been reading along, and the initial intention is indeed good. However, due to limited skills, many readers who are not as focused on reading as the few of us will have a lot of questions. But as I read along the way, I can see the author's progress and changes, and I believe you can write a good work! Come on, put it on the shelves and make sure to subscribe!

This protagonist is even more disgusting than the rich second generation who are portrayed as evil. When he had no ability, he sat and waited for death. When he had the confidence, he started to cause trouble everywhere. He even got the emperor to ask if he had heard of Sun Dasheng. A villain's face.

If I were the protagonist, I would announce the matter of the brass ring. It is already lost anyway. Regardless of whether others believe it or not, there is no more loss after all, and it can disgust that woman, so why not do it? Besides, what if someone believes it? It should be noted that there are many things that it is better to believe that they exist than to believe that they do not exist.

Chapter 80 Qi Refining 4th Floor 160 Chapter 5th Floor 240 Chapter 6th Floor

It's not about fighting for hegemony. I thought it was about fighting for hegemony in another world, but it turns out it's not. After reading dozens of chapters, there's not even a hint of fighting for hegemony.

The ancient characters have declined too much. I can't stand it after reading ten chapters. Taishang Laojun and Tongzi can't even cultivate the golden elixir. The so-called Mingyue Gong can't even cultivate the golden elixir. The Golden Horn King has been weakened to this extent! Good thoughts from the author

I was poisoned and died on January 25, 2019

Although I don't read stallion novels anymore, I decided to give up reading them when I saw Lei Ting got married.

I have exchanged a new physique and still retain the characteristics of the previous one? Can golden branches and white jade mushroom bones exist at the same time? When Yu Hua and Yin Jiao come over, will they be in the Qi refining stage where they can't even fly? Even if you don't follow the prehistoric level of cultivation, is Yinjiao's cultivation level of refining energy? Is it that weak? And Mingyue is also a boy of Zhenyuan Immortal. Is there only one skill that can be practiced to the foundation building stage? According to this calculation, when Zhenyuan Immortal came here, was he in the Golden Elixir stage or the Nascent Soul Stage? Moreover, in the Immortal Cultivation System, one can live up to several thousand years in the Nascent Soul stage. What about refining Qi? How many thousand years did the great immortal Zhenyuan live in the myth? Where is the bright moon? Where's Silver Horn? In Journey to the West, Yinjiao has been in the mortal world for how many years.

Deserve to go to Jiang Jun Single Dog 🪖 There is not even a female protagonist

I have never read such a poisonous novel. He just wanted to kill the protagonist, but he immediately accepted a disciple. Author, you are insulting the readers' intelligence.

***Shuguang got some cards to draw characters out for, are you free?

It's good for a first-time writer, but I still can't read it. My personal preferences are different. I think it's too long-winded, to the point of perversion. Just the two pictures of Wuji Patriarch, just saying how arrogant and arrogant I am, I have done it in many ways. I really don't have the courage. I look forward to change, come on!

The protagonist has no personality The setting is unreasonable The character creation is too childish

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Die die die die die die die die die die

I've seen a lot of system streams, and their introductions are all about strong physiques, magic weapons, magical skills, etc. But I've never seen anyone redeem them.

Why the hell am I missing chapters in the books I've been reading lately! ! !

It's well written, but it's a pity that I don't read systematic novels.

Collected, clicked, recommended vote +12