The Sword Immortal Who Travels Through Time and Space

I read a few of them, and they were a bit rubbish. The protagonist lived like a dog in the Cultivation Continent. The swordsman showed his sharp edge without any sharpness. He would have died long ago in reincarnation 🪖

I was speechless. It turns out that a swordsman is a swordsman holding a sword in his hand. As for kendo. As for the sword intention.

Hong Kong actually fell...

At least you have a sense of national responsibility. Writing a book with this mentality will never become popular.

Although I don't like the current mainstream hypocrites and ruthless protagonists, the protagonist of this book feels that the Virgin is too much.

There are several points that are disappointing. The first point is that the so-called Chinese martial arts has not reached its peak and the essence has been written. Vaguely uncomfortable. I was attracted to it because I saw Chinese martial arts, but gave up because I didn't have Chinese martial arts. Second, martial arts cultivation relies on spiritual energy, so this cannot be the world of martial arts. This is actually cultivation of immortality. It makes martial arts eclipse a lot. Third, the span of time travel is too big. The second world is even more speechless because it is foreign. I just skipped it without watching it. The third world is actually Tianlong. How many people can accept this span? The writing of Guoshu is not exciting enough, and it feels like it is perfunctory. Tianlong looks even more terrifying to me. The protagonist goes to study the so-called Beiming Magical Skills when he appears, and then pretends to be an immortal and goes to the Infinite Sword Sect. It's not exciting at all, and there's even less anticipation. To be honest, if your writing of Chinese martial arts is truly wonderful, a lot of people may love Chapter 2: Crossing Dragon and Snake. It's a pity that the second chapter is actually a robot. If you wrote Chapter 3 about Xiaoao, a lot more people would watch it, even the movie version would be good. As a result, you come directly to Tianlong. So I really don't have any expectations.

I started skipping about halfway through it, and I probably understood what the problem was. Author, you don't have an outline, do you? I write whatever comes to my mind. It is disorganized, the system is unclear, and the plot is not outstanding. It is all based on your personal opinion. How do you feel about the plot and how can you modify it randomly according to your personal preferences. But you have to know that what you like may not be what everyone likes. What you want to complain about the most is the world plot, Advanced World and The system of the lower world is completely unclear, and it is almost unbearable to watch, so there is a reason for the poor performance. You should read more about the shuttle articles written by others, how to plan the system, plan for growth, write an outline before writing the article, and whether you have thought more about the character and behavior of the characters in the plot.

I didn't want to read it at the beginning. It was written that the sword immortal could make elixirs and weapons, and was said to be different from other sword immortals. Later, I saw betrayal. A dick who had a Madonna attack and was reborn through time was unexpectedly plotted without any precautions. It was so poisonous.

If you can't read it or write it, don't write that way.

The word betrayal makes me lose interest.