The Amazing Camera

Why not extract things like Superman serum in the first place? After extracting an equipment ring from the game, I now have a figure like the Superman Serum, and I have strength, speed, and everything else. The most awesome thing is that after extracting the weak light, I didn't even think of extracting something to enhance my own strength. As a result, I was drugged and almost died. Shouldn't the first thing you do when you have a chance to do something is to enhance your own strength? Because if you die unexpectedly, all your adventures will be in vain. This means that the author has the final say whether you die or not when writing a novel. Otherwise, you would have died eight hundred times earlier.

A poisonous stroke! The protagonist's ideals in life are quite vicious. He wants to buy a big house, rent it to a beautiful woman, have sex with a beautiful woman, and be a landlord. I thought he was just thinking about it, but he actually did it. Oh my god! If you sell a golden house, and then use a camera to copy a few beauties, such as lolita, and hide them in a golden house, then this book will be on another level. 😍

It's a very bad novel, with a lot of irrelevant content and daily trivial matters. The original idea is good, and the setting is okay, but why does it seem to have no sense of refreshment at all? It is not worn away by bits and pieces of nonsense and boring plots, such as selling jade. The protagonist is an angry young man who has nothing to do with me. Why are you talking so much when others don't pay you, and you write a lot to the waiter.

To be honest, the subject matter of this novel is bound to be popular, but it is a pity that it was ruined by the author. The first point is that the topic of a chapter is easy to go off-topic. It goes in a big circle and has nothing to do with this matter. And most of the things in the chapter are nonsense. The second point is that the author wrote the protagonist's IQ too low. Maybe the author himself did not grasp the rhythm. Sometimes the protagonist's IQ is almost the same as a child. This is my summary of this novel. I hope the author can see these suggestions. Finally, I wish this novel will become more and more popular.

The dialogue between the characters is like children quarreling, and there is no one left! As soon as I meet a girl's IQ, I fall into arrears, she's a little bit poisonous, and I can't hold on anymore!

Why is it a duplex building? Isn't a villa better? A villa has a swimming pool, a cinema and a large restaurant. If there is a swimming pool, you can also watch beautiful women swimming. Wouldn't that be more eye-catching? What's so showy about a duplex? And why is my first tenant a policewoman? She is still a violent woman. Is it really that fun to abuse the master? Seeing this made me feel heartbroken. ?

Is the protagonist's personality too pushy? Even a woman can pull her ears and ride on her head

Cutting off the kidney is so fake! It's simply impossible, there's no way to save it, if it doesn't match the shape, change it immediately and you'll have to fry the kidneys!

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