Online Game: Jinyiwei

The writing is terrible, and the punctuation is a mess. I won't mention it. The key point is that reading this article is like reading an outline. It's so embarrassing.

I suggest the author concentrate on writing this book. The newly opened book is not as good as this one.

I keep reading and subscribed to them all. But I have written such a long content. Do the roommates of the protagonist have names?

Is the author's thinking bad after reading the book? After reading the book on the Road to Easy Cultivation, I felt it was far worse than this one.

I just read Chapter 600 and I have to say that the protagonist is really miserable. Whenever the four bitches do a task together, the protagonist finds the task and is responsible for all the dirty work. The other three just help, but in the end they all have meat to eat. The second one can only drink soup and not talk about the harvest, which is always used as the key to unlock the next task. It feels like the protagonist's adventures continue one after another, but each time they are taken away by three people, he still works hard without complaining, which is too pitiful. And this also gives people the feeling that the other three are useless and can only rely on the adventures of the second child to improve their strength.

Let's count how many readers abandoned the book because the protagonist was constantly being cheated by three other so-called friends in the same dormitory? No matter what the task is, no matter how many rewards! As long as these three appear and are seen, they can always trick the protagonist! Every time, every time, every time! Damn it, you can't abuse your master like this

A game between a poor guy and his three biological fathers

Please read the story of the protagonist raising three biological fathers

After reading more than a hundred chapters, tell me your feelings. The reason why I can read so many chapters and still not give up is not because the author writes so well, but just because I want to watch martial arts online games. There have been too few martial arts online games in recent years, and I have basically seen all the ones before. Let me talk about a few shortcomings of this book: 1. The protagonist is too jumpy and often plays tricks to please others. I feel that the author must be young. 2. The protagonist is an ordinary college student otaku without any outstanding abilities. So why can he stand out in online games? What is his reason? Just practice basic martial arts, one or two layers of dragon and elephant, what qualifications do you have to defeat other masters? Does he spend more time practicing than others? No, after reading so many chapters, I remember that there were only two or three chapters that mentioned practicing. Most of the time was spent in the blacksmith shop, or playing tricks with the old man Jinyiwei, or helping my roommates or doing tasks myself. The rewards were basically nothing. 3. The protagonist has no principles and is only interested in profit. Maybe this is just an appearance that the author wants to give readers, but I have never felt it inside, maybe not. 4. Some plots are driven by the protagonist's misfortune, which means the word count is low. If you, the author, really care about this attribute, how come the protagonist can walk without falling to death? How can I drink water without choking to death? Is there a probability for everything you do? Since some chapters emphasize that the protagonist is plagued by misfortune, you might as well have the protagonist miss with a sword, only to be caught with his bare hands. 5. You have laid some rules in advance, but later you ignore these rules for the development of the plot. In the section about Tianshan Snow Lotus, you said that given the misfortune of the protagonist, committing suicide will definitely drop Tianshan Snow Lotus. But you said before that if Fengtian Chengren commits suicide, he will not drop anything and will not be punished by martial arts proficiency. Have you forgotten, author? Also, later, in order to lure out the president of the Wushan League, the third son attacked the president's girlfriend, how come he wasn't struck to death by lightning? I remember you said before that there is a penalty for violating the other female player without her permission. Author, have you forgotten again? 6. I didn't read a few chapters before I saw the author promoting a new book. You also said that you are a newcomer, so how dare you write two books at the same time? Aren't you afraid that your brain will be confused? But now it seems that it is really not clear. 7. In today's impetuous society, I feel that many readers don't like to watch plots in which the protagonist does useless work or is self-defeating. When the protagonist took Lin Pingzhi to the blacksmith shop and joined the Jinyi Guard, and Lin Pingzhi looked back at the rise and fall of the little princess, I felt that the protagonist's other identity was exposed. I feel like the protagonist is so stupid and not thoughtful enough. I don't know if this foreshadowing will be revealed later, and I don't know if I can see it. That's all. I can read so many chapters, which means I am short of books. I just want to read a martial arts online game novel.

I started reading it in October 2017. I read about 2,100 chapters until I suddenly felt tired of it. After that, I just put the book there and occasionally opened it to see how far the plot was progressing. I just wanted to wait for it to finish. Now it is finally finished. When I first started reading this book, I had just started reading novels. I didn't know there were genuine and pirated copies, and I didn't even know that I was watching pirated copies. Later I learned about the Qidian Chinese website. After that, I registered an account and voted for the author, but I never wanted to spend money to buy it. Now that it's finished, I still feel a little emotional 🤝

It's been almost three years and you're still updating. That's awesome.

To be honest, the protagonist has always treated NPCs as data. Even if he becomes sworn friends with NPCs, using them is more important than sincerity. There is no bottom line for the sake of profit!

**Alibaba Tencent? BAT? ?

A word of complaint: Don't use your brain when watching, don't think about logical relationships, don't think about double standards, don't think about plot, don't think about anything else, it's fine

I just started reading a few chapters and let me tell you my thoughts. There are too many typos in this book, at least 5 in one chapter. The second author lacks common sense. For example, in the chapter about the wolf attack on the grassland, the leader of the wolf pack is called the alpha wolf, not the wolf head 😅

The style of this novel is a bit mixed. It combines the three styles of "Shu Mountain" by Toad, "Going Alone" by Butterfly Lan, and "The Story of Red Tassel" by Dongjiao Lin Gongzi. Brother Jiu, I can't say whether it is similar or not like these masterpieces. I can only say that the reading experience is generally good, witty, humorous, interesting, and the reading experience is relaxed and interesting. This is probably enough. The writing style is mediocre and the vocabulary is simple, but the writing is concise and smooth, the sentences are smooth, not wordy, and there is no nonsense. Although this book is an older book, it does not follow the route of data flow or technology flow, but the relaxed entertainment route of the previous three big books. In terms of plot, the early stage was also written quite well. The plot is smooth and the rhythm is tight. There are no confusing and messy branch plots that make the reader's head grow bigger. In general, this book is more than enough to pass the time. There is no obvious contradiction in the combination of martial arts and online games in the background of the novel. It is just a bit helpless that the later period is indeed a bit unsatisfactory. ---Recommended by the official @hao "The Thirty-Six Strategies of the Great Shuhuang" Come to us for the Shuhuang!!!

The author's writing is pretty good. Please give it a thumbs up, everyone.

The subject matter is good, but the author's writing is so poor that it gives it a gangster feel. The characters are just lifeless backgrounds, including roommates.

I just read the introduction, why not delete the account and rebuild it?

I want to know the main character, Jin Yiwei, why did that Dharma King run away when he wanted to take him in as his disciple?

Forcibly lowering the intelligence is really confusing. At first, the factions were allowed to fight, and then they pretended to be good people to show that they stood for the faction. Tell me, even the Emperor of Xixia knew that you were angry at the beauty here. Maybe the factions didn't know? Believe in your evil, and then let Shaolin Wudang support the princess to forcibly reduce her intelligence. It is almost a routine, undercover to lower her IQ. I feel that as long as she is hostile to the protagonist, she is a fool and will believe anything.

I didn't expect this to be the end, and I feel like I could still write hundreds more. Come on, the author😊

The subject matter is good, but the writing is really bad, and the knowledge is not good. I said I was going to hunt lone animals, but a lion appeared, or in the forest. Lions are more difficult to deal with than tigers, lion blowing? Lions are more powerful than tigers. Then there's the beggar's chicken. Can your beggar's chicken just be wrapped in mud? No wonder it tastes average, and it tastes average like this?

To be honest, I went in because of Jin Yiwei's name, but after reading two chapters, I realized that the author's writing style was not good. I patiently looked through the table of contents, thinking that the writing style would improve in the future, but I complained that it had nothing to do with Jin Yiwei Mao, just a skinny.

What I want to say is the only one that I have really read except for the previous ones like Battle of the Sky 😃😃 But now, I don't have much money to go to school. When I get rich, I will post it here as evidence.

To be honest, after seeing more than 1,300 chapters, I really couldn't follow it anymore, so I stopped reading it. Now I'm here to finish it.

Isn't the golden bell strong? I'm also speechless. The author has no knowledge at all. Xiao Wuxiang Gong is rubbish. I won't read it until I see it. It's boring.

What happened to the protagonist and the little princess? How did it end up like this? Didn't he support her in becoming emperor?

There are already blueprints for chapter 600, but they are gone for chapter 900. I am really out of my mind.

I've read two chapters of the new book, but it's not my favorite genre. I still like this book, but it's a pity that it's almost finished.