Ping Yao Ji

The article is very novel and the plot is very attractive. Today, when there are so many works, I am really happy to see such works... I hope the author will continue to work hard, develop his own style, improve his writing skills, stick to his own writing path, and don't ignore quality for the sake of quantity... I agree: quality comes first! Dear readers!

I feel that the author has a lot of potential in psychological portrayal. The characters are written very deeply. I am quite optimistic about this article...

I must say that this novel is a conscientious work, and it can be seen that the author put a lot of thought into it.

The author's writing style is very good, and the psychological description of the characters is very appropriate. Come on~~

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Now that I have seen it, I feel that the progress of the story is not particularly compact and needs to be strengthened a little bit.

This time it's a relaxed story, guaranteed to be exciting!

Come on, author! 🤝

I like the way the author uses some side things to express some more important things, which is very natural and clever.

The action descriptions in the novel are quite good, with a very delicate feel, which perfectly brings out the characters' personalities.

I discovered this article yesterday and couldn't put it down. I read it until about two o'clock in the middle of the night and finally finished it! The writing is wonderful, the characters are very distinct, and the plot is not procrastinating. It is a good article worth reading! Finally, there is one more thing I want to ask for: can you go faster! There are many articles on my bookshelf that are too slow. Now I have forgotten what they are about. When I open them to read, I have to re-filter them. Sometimes I give up in order to save time, so I would like to ask if you can read them less slowly, because I still really hope to read two chapters of such articles every day. Thank you!

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Hello, author. I appreciate your work very much. It is very good. I hope I can communicate with you.

Come on! Try your best not to be a eunuch!

My wish is not big, just give me a passerby from A, B and C. Although I can't be the protagonist's buddy, I can be a passerby in a certain chapter. Don't let me die early, at least live for a few chapters. Just simplify the character's name from my nickname. I would like to thank the Football Association in advance and fulfill my little wish. It is not easy to become a character in a novel.

The subject matter is novel, the writing is excellent, and the story is compact. It has the potential to become a god, but be careful not to overdo it.

The setting of the novel is relatively new. I've been tired of reading cool novels recently, so I want to change my taste occasionally. This style of novel is not bad!