Emperor Live Room

Still make the king and seize the title of emperor? Are writers like Seven Points, who treat novels like domestic trashy online games all day long, going to do this? Besides playing domestic online games, what else do you do?

When will you come back and continue writing?

Suddenly I realized that I had better go read this book, otherwise it would be disgusting to chase the eunuch.

After seeing a kind of ex called a cheating father. I gave up. Really poisonous. A systematic protagonist, still obliterating the mission, asking for fucking help in everything. That's all. If no one else comes forward to support, the plot will probably be GG.

It would be better if you do it in different layers. The blood will be too messy and it will be uncomfortable to watch. I won't give it up anymore.

Only a small number of people have proposed changes. You can just write according to your own ideas. You can first review it with some experienced netizens to try to reduce the loopholes. It is a fact that most of the people who read the book are students and have little life experience. The plots are often subjective and feel very satisfying. Many of them are unreasonable and they argue all day long about what is bad and what is bad. Just don't affect the core idea, and don't repeat everything the same. It seems that choosing a hundred beauties is a big hole, it is difficult to fill, it is a harem model, and it is too unreasonable to bring women from fictional novels into it now. If you write two or three, people may think it's okay, but if you write more, it will seem verbose. If you start from history or fictional novels, you will have a lot of holes to fill in, and you will be far away from the topic! After all, it's annoying to repeat. If you want to fight for the king, economy and military are the most important. If you have money, you will have people, if you have strength, you will have words, and less politics. After all, it is a world of force, so it is more reasonable. By the way, I have been reading novels for the past ten years, basically one or two a day, and most of them read the catalog. My writing skills are not good, but I can still have confidence in my vision.

Unexpectedly, the author actually missed the New Year's greetings. One year has passed. I want to ask you when the author will come back...

Why can't I find this novel directly?

The main character is a bitch and sometimes I really want to beat him up. The book is not bad.

The writing is too messy. Since you have traveled through time, don't let characters from Earth appear. It looks too messy. Can't you create original characters and the emperor of the country?

A novel about being killed by three poisonous grannies from Qidian

I'm here to sign in~~~~~~

This cover and the cover of another book both look like they were made by primary school students.

Why are eunuchs the most popular novels?

I finished reading it in one day, and I finished it before I knew it! What a pity eunuch! What a great book😭😭😭

Mmp~ I've been following you for more than a year~ I haven't updated in half a year~ I'm also drunk~ The eunuch is so heart-wrenching

I left, just as I came quietly, waving my sleeves, without taking away your money, you still have to practice! Thieves are not that easy to train. Thank you for reading my "The Storyteller of the Song Dynasty"

Why did you enter the palace? The results of this book are pretty good. Did you write it somewhere else?

1) Pay attention to the military aspect. The strength of the 10th level of physical training is 1000KG. This is a world of force. Conventional equipment has no effect, so horse pedals and saddles have no effect unless the horses are the same as those on our earth. What's the use? The third level of force is much faster than that of a horse! Besides, horses from other worlds must have good physiques in all aspects, their hides must be thick, and they generally have little wear and tear. It may not be good to add equipment. Unless they are particularly powerful, high-strength alloy steel, general materials such as Q235B have a strength of about 235MPA and a hardness of 100. Around Brinell, ultra-high-strength alloy steel is generally more than 5 times higher, but that alien technology should not be available. You have to grasp this yourself. Technology has little effect on physical training after the fifth level. It can be written that steel can be trained with human spirit (after cultivating the spirit), and it will be more powerful and stronger. I am an international welding engineer and an American inspector, and I am quite sensitive to machinery and data. If I am not in this field, I will definitely think of it if I read the book carefully. 2) Another issue is Earth's military force. Don't rise too fast. Imagine that the protagonist's brothers are all 20 years old and have only reached the 10th level of physical training, let alone ordinary people. The military environment is still so good, so even if the people on Earth are afraid of practicing martial arts, don't produce a lot of physical training in one or two years! There is no one who has practiced at the tenth level for more than five years, unless the main character is so good that he can pass it on to others. It takes at least three months to reach the first level of physical training. In one or two years, the earth can be almost covered. The higher you go, the harder it becomes. Compared with other worlds, resources and training difficulty will determine the speed. 3) What kind of existence is the system? Now that you recognize the protagonist, you should try your best to help the protagonist instead of giving out any tasks. When you do tasks, you will feel that the system is a god and the protagonist is a chess piece, just to play with you! Many novels are set like that. In fact, I think it's a BUG. It's fresh for everyone and fun for newcomers. But those who often read novels think it's a loophole and their thinking is not cautious enough. 4) I guess in the later stage of Wushuang, there may be some problems of material transmission and energy conservation between two worlds. What price should be paid? That's what happens in the later stages. 5) Regarding the issue of strength level, I don't think it should be a very specific data. For example, an increase in strength of 100KG is a level. Imagine that people are different in fat and thin. You can give a range, about 100 to 200, or what strength the muscles, nerves and bones of the body's meridians and other things can be reasonable. 6) The issue of broadcasting line of sight is that after all, it is the tenth level of physical training. It seems to be two or three seconds for 100 meters. The audience must not be able to see clearly, it is too fast; 7) The issue of the impact of fighting on the surroundings. As mentioned in the previous chapters, when competing with others in a hotel or something, the destructive power is tens of tons or more. People next to you can still watch it well, so you may not have noticed this. Unless otherwise specified, the house materials are very good! 8) It seems that the improvement of force and beasts have been written down. The description of the city wall can be written down. It is more than ten feet, otherwise the beasts and other things will definitely destroy it. People at the time must have thought of it. The above are my personal suggestions and are for reference only.

How many chapters did Pig's Foot look for to save Zhou Zhiruo's life? In the middle, I was still in the mood to look at various products on the list. After I finished, I chatted with the extra 9527 for a long time. After I finished, I also interacted with He Shen, and finally I came to meet him. . . . . . And by the way, the ignorance and childishness of Pig's Feet was fully exposed. I wonder what they thought about it? ? ?

The author of the Three Kingdoms Live broadcast next door is out of the palace. When will the author come back?

I look forward to the anchor entering Nanzhao Kingdom, stepping on Li Xiaoyao, picking up Lin Yueru, and robbing Zhao Ling'er! 🥺 I'm sure to give you a reward~ When will it be put on the shelves? Order it now!

I have basically finished reading more than 500,000 words of online articles on various subjects. If I am not good at writing, I usually look at the table of contents and pass the old routines if I find them. Newbies read books differently. I find all books interesting. I am confident that I am still a good reader. It's a good book. The writing is decent, with lots of ideas and few loopholes. I think this book fits this point. Why do you say that? 1) The writing is passable. There are so many authors at a certain point. Who has poor writing? ! Unless you are a very good writer who has read tens of thousands of articles and collected thousands of books, you are probably an experienced writer. To be honest, novices are not. 2) There are many creative ideas. It is estimated that many friends who read the book came in because of the title, which is fresh. But I see that many authors are really not very creative. If there are one or two points, they probably just copy others. Why? I probably copied other people's books because they were popular, but I never thought about why they were popular or what readers wanted to read. Innovation is based on life and does not necessarily have to be non-mainstream. I think it's easier if I have a broader vision, maybe it has something to do with the industry I'm in. If there are only one or two creative ideas, readers may not want to read it after reading 200,000 words, because the plot is cliche! Look at all jump fields. For example, this book describes the impact of live broadcast rooms, emperors, struggles for hegemony, and time travel on the earth. Let me give you an idea. For example, in ancient hegemony novels, the emperor occupied one city after another, and there was war. To be honest, everyone was annoyed by it. Why? Repeat, the Three Kingdoms genre is like that. If you want to write more deeply, such as rebuilding a city, write in depth about city walls, commercial streets, pedestrian streets, squares, and the development of highways between cities. You will definitely like to see these. Why, two words - conflict! Everyone wants to know what conflicts and impacts will be caused when moving from modern times to ancient times, because they really can't imagine it. If you write about war and fighting, it's really boring to read other than looking at the bottom B! 3) The problem of loopholes. Many readers are very creative in reading the book and are attracted to read it. The loopholes in this book are relatively few and acceptable. If I dig deeper, I can basically find loopholes in every chapter, such as the title "Force Suggestions" below. If the loopholes exceed the reader's tolerance and tolerance, simply abandon the book. Therefore, I think it is more important to reduce loopholes, write more reasonably, and occasionally be creative to keep readers reading. To have fewer loopholes, the author must have rich life experiences, which is also the most difficult thing! I guess the author of this book is probably around 26 to 30 years old, so there aren't many loopholes in the book. I'm not looking down on young people writing books. After all, young people follow the trend and write books in the hope of making a fortune. This is a fact after all, and I am telling the truth. But most of them are too eager to gain immediate benefits, or too eager to publish. Please review them more. I often write things myself, and it's hard to find mistakes when I write. I just can't find very simple mistakes. So I think the simplest solution is to review it before publishing it, read it once or twice yourself, and then review it before publishing it. Because it is difficult to find it yourself, especially when the surrounding environment is complicated and you are not calm. Judging from 90% of the novels from the starting point, if they are carefully revised, there will be at least ten times more good books! Many readers abandon the article when they see something they cannot accept. Especially if the reader is not in good spirits, it is difficult to read it seriously. Even if the other writing is very good, if you encounter a big loophole, you will just pass it, don't you think? Write a book quietly and don't get stuck. Once you get stuck, you will make mistakes. I feel like I've written it very well, but actually I'm about to fall into a trap and can't find it, so it's best to let others review it. In general, pay attention to review to reduce loopholes, read more other people's books to get more creative ideas, and generally don't be deliberate in your writing. This is very efficient, and I believe the book will become popular easily. The above is just my personal opinion, for reference only, feel free to write. If you can please support me, I am tired of writing and hope to read more good books.

It's much better than those anchor books, and more reasonable. In those novels, the audience knew that the protagonist had traveled through time, but his popularity was so low. No one went to find the protagonist, and no government went to find the protagonist. It was so unreasonable and full of loopholes. Wushuang, just be careful not to add fictitious novels, otherwise the loopholes will be big. Besides, there are a few people who know the characters in the fictional novel, and some people enjoy reading it, which actually exposes the flaws in the novel. You can use historical figures, because reality once existed, but don't use fictional characters such as Jin Yong, they are too unreasonable and difficult for everyone to accept!

[Fn=2_4]I don't know if it is the national jade seal.

How much can I upgrade my combat power with 10? Was it directly upgraded to more than 5,000 combat power? According to the world view of this novel, it is almost 300,000 words. If the author planned to write 3 million, then one-tenth has already passed. However, the strength of the male protagonist is only in the Qi training period of a small plane. The strength improvement is too slow, so my personal recommendation is to be a saint as soon as possible and go to the endless plane to compete with those Tianjiao sons for hegemony. The endless plane has endless opportunities. After arriving in the endless plane, then I guess the strength of the male protagonist can be increased faster, and there are still 100,000 universes in the endless plane. After fighting for one universe, you can fight for the other universes, and there are also 3,000 planes in other universes. And I don't know how big your world view is, but I guess there are saints and the existence of heaven. There are also levels in your universe. After all, there is only one heaven and the supreme way.