Three Kingdoms Yellow Turban Invincible

The author looks at history. The Yellow Turban thieves do not distinguish between good and bad. They only burn, kill and loot. Do you know how many innocent people died in the Yellow Turban Uprising? Do you know how many innocent people were taken advantage of by powerful families?

What it says at the beginning is bullshit. It's a bunch of nonsense and there's something wrong with it. If you don't rebel against the family, they won't despise you. He also said that he was determined to rebel. Aren't you ready to rebel? Then on the way back, you met Dian Wei, and you met a talented person. What should you write? Can you write something? Something of one's own, something of one's own power. Look, if you can't stand it, who will look at you?

The plot design of the author's book is a bit far-fetched. The part about Tang Zhou's whistle-blowing is a failure. Since the protagonist comes to Luoyang, Tang Zhou is the sword of Damocles hanging over the protagonist's head. He must be removed. How could he forget it? The author only designed this to forcibly introduce the bloody battle in Luoyang and the subsequent plot. However, such an unreasonable design made the bloody battle in Luoyang, which was supposed to be a small climax, not readable at all. This paragraph is really a failure.

Pig's trotters are just a waste of money. If you haven't read them, don't read them.

It is recommended that the author lay a good foundation in the early stage so as not to lose readers.

The author moved the plot too casually when writing, which was really depressing. Also, the main character keeps vomiting blood

Come to cheer up my brother and buy two packs of cigarettes. In addition, I am making an advertisement for myself, "The King of Hongnong in the Late Han Dynasty", which has all the redemption and lottery systems. I will draw a poodle~😃

The new book "King Hongnong of the Late Han Dynasty" has been uploaded. All readers are welcome to collect and pay attention.

The last sentence of Chapter 125 is a stroke of genius 🤭🤭

Let's see how it goes. I read it in one go. It's really cool. 😁

Dad, do you think there are very few emotional scenes in your book? Although the battlefield of war and iron horses is exciting, I think it is better to have some soul-stirring emotions occasionally. 😊

Is Wanrou the heroine so far? I feel like although I didn't use much space to describe Wanrou, I feel that it was written with great care. ❤️

I saw the author's promotional post in the Yellow Turban Bar, and came here specifically to take a look at the author's masterpiece. There is nothing wrong with the topic selection of "Yellow Turban", except for the slight deficiencies in the writing style. However, the setting of the characters does not conform to the romance or history, which is a major flaw of the book. An overly unconventional setting will not attract people's attention. The protagonist is Zhang Bao, one of the three leaders of the Yellow Turbans. Personally, I think the author gave the protagonist too high a starting point. Without the hardships of the early struggle, there is less to watch. Online novels, especially the first one, must attract readers at the beginning, but the author's beginning is not attractive. The author is based on the battle generals in the romance mode, and his writing of battle battles in the historical mode is not ideal. The history party will abandon the book because of the battle generals in the romance mode, and the romance party will also abandon the book because of the explosive setting of the Yellow Turban Army. The Yellow Turban Army is to write about the sadness of the Yellow Turbans. A tepid writing method like this is not satisfactory. Writing about the officers and soldiers as more violent and highlighting the mediocrity of the court is one of the ways to embody the justice of the Yellow Turbans, but the author did not do this. I don't care too much about the historical details, but some people may think that the author has written a novel without even reading "Three Kingdoms" because of the author's lack of attention to details. Personally, I think there is little point in sticking to this book. I also wrote a book review for "Ant Thieves Are Crazy", but I don't want to continue writing there now. After all, the author also has his own thoughts. Talking too much will only make the author bored. Haha, no matter what I say, he will continue to write according to the character setting that will remain unchanged for thousands of years. 😤

Brother, your writing in the first few chapters is indeed very average. Please revise the first few chapters when you have time, otherwise you will start to blame you for your inability once you encounter it. 🤫 Also, don't stop updating. There aren't many writing about Zhang Jiao and other topics, and even less writing can make people feel good about it. I've watched both Ant Thief and Heroes, but they didn't quite suit my taste, so you have to stick with it. If you put it on the shelves, you will definitely subscribe to support it.

I'm waiting for Qingfeng to be released. In fact, I paid attention to the author's book when it was first uploaded. Because the theme chosen is the Yellow Turban theme that I like, I have been paying attention to it. Throughout the whole text, from being average at the beginning to attracting me tightly at the end, it shows that the author has made great progress and that the author is really writing with all his heart. As a senior bookworm, I can understand that it is not easy for a newcomer to persist until now and make such great progress. Please don't reject other authors casually.

Qingfeng often browses the book review area and replies to comments one by one whenever he has time. Many of them have provided pertinent opinions. Qingfeng is very grateful to you. Qingfeng is not afraid of criticism, and he is even more grateful for guiding Qingfeng. He said that Qingfeng is very grateful to the two elders @ and @ who first gave guidance to Qingfeng's writing. Later, many elders successively gave Qingfeng guidance and encouraged Qingfeng. I am really grateful to you. Regardless of criticism or guidance, Qingfeng will be loyal to you, because you are the guides for Qingfeng's progress. But please don't give personal attacks in the comment area, okay? If the writing is bad, you can give your opinion. If it really doesn't satisfy you, you can just abandon the book. But giving personal attacks can only show your low quality and nothing else about you. Qingfeng asks readers who make personal attacks to please be merciful. Qingfeng would like to thank you.

Come on, I have been following your book. From the first chapter to now, you have made great progress. Keep up the hard work, five evaluation votes and 1,000 starting coins will be given to you. Come on, work hard. Although the possibility of your book becoming a god is not high, it can be seen that you have been writing seriously. Come on. 🥺

In the novel, they can also cast spells, and both the protagonist and others have cold faces.

Author, if you dare to update two chapters, reward 1888😎

Dear friends, if you find anything illogical in the book, you can point it out here. If it is not due to plot arrangement, but to logical errors, Qingfeng will correct it. There are also typos in the book. You can point them out here and Qingfeng will also make corrections. [Fn=2_7]

Turning the wheel of reincarnation to build a building is better than outsiders, otherwise it will really send you into reincarnation. . 😳

Here, Qingfeng is building a supporting building. If you want to be a supporting character, you can briefly introduce the background, type, and camp. If you can design a simple plot that matches the book, you will be given priority and may be promoted to become a long-term supporting character. 😄

The post was refined just now, so I won't hesitate to share my views on how to write with the author. It is best for an article to have an outline and the most basic character settings from beginning to end. At the same time, it is best to set the characters in historical novels according to your own suitable method. For example, the Three Kingdoms area can be set with the ability of romance or the ability of history. When writing, try to incorporate your own emotions. To put it simply, you put yourself in the protagonist's shoes and think about what the protagonist should do next and what to say. The character's personality is also one of the aspects that the author is not good at and needs to be strengthened. The author can take some time to try to describe a person and write out the characteristics of this person. As long as the author can describe the character's personality well, I think the next book will not be easily missed. If you really can't write the character well, you can use another method. For example, let an important character be summarized in one word, such as benevolence, righteousness, bravery, treachery, etc., And then focus on describing the character with the meaning of this word. Rationality is one of the important pillars of fictional historical novels. This rationality ranges from historical common sense to the behavior of characters and the development of events. This aspect is also difficult for many authors to grasp, but as long as they are grasped well, it is basically no problem to have a click rate of hundreds of thousands. The description of the plot is also one of the aspects that the author needs to improve. For example, if this novel is to use the Yellow Turban Army as the protagonist, it must discredit the army and the court to a certain extent. (In fact, it is enough even if it does not discredit and focuses on describing the dark side of the imperial court.) Personally, I feel that the plot of this book is too smooth. The protagonist is a victorious general. Victory is achieved too easily, making readers feel that it is tasteless. At the same time, the description of the battle is slightly insufficient. For example, the formulation and implementation of the battle plan are important description points, and the battle process is the top priority of the fictional historical novel. The description of the battle should pay attention to the following two points. First, the description of the strength, combat power and situation of both sides before the war. 2. The description of the battle situation during the war should not be too smooth here. There should be a process from a stalemate (or disadvantage) to a comeback after a successful strategy. It's almost time to talk about my personal feelings. If the author feels that my analysis is meaningful, please leave me a book review. I have written so much, so don't tell me that you are too lazy to reply. [Fn=2_4]

Qingfeng fell in love with the Three Kingdoms when he came into contact with the game "Romance of the Three Kingdoms 9". 😰 First I read "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms", and then I started looking for fictional novels about the Three Kingdoms on the Internet. I found that the protagonist of every novel stepped on the bones of the Yellow Turban and rose to prominence. Then the protagonist began to show his power, his tiger body shook, all kinds of great people bowed to him, and all kinds of beauties threw themselves into his arms. It was very interesting at first, but after watching it for a long time, you will get tired of it. 🤫 Later, I discovered that in every novel, the Yellow Turban Army existed as a mode of giving experience monsters to the protagonist. As for Huangfu Song, the great killer in the late Eastern Han Dynasty, he also reached the pinnacle of his life by slaughtering millions of Yellow Turbans. From that time on, Qingfeng began to conceive of the Three Kingdoms in his mind, and wanted to write a novel with the Yellow Turban Army as the protagonist. There are no cumbersome plots in the book, only logical plots. There are civil servants and powerful generals, but not a lot. There are beauties, but you won't see each other one after another. 😚 It wasn't until some time ago that Qingfeng finally plucked up the courage to start writing his own novel online. Qingfeng knows that you all have very good tastes and is used to reading books by great masters. Qingfeng just wants to say that it is undeniable that the writing style is immature, but Qingfeng hereby guarantees that he will write the book seriously and conceive the plot seriously. There will be no interruptions or eunuchs. Please give Qingfengfeng a chance. [Fn=2_7]