Machine Breaks the Galaxy

In fact, there are quite a lot of flash points, and the funny parts are pretty good, but I would like to ask a few questions: 1. The preparation before the show-off and slap in the face is too slow, and the show-off and slap in the face are also drag-out and not refreshing. 2. The protagonist often avoids troubles with one sentence, but the author forces him to draw hatred and write 3 or 4 chapters. The word count is suspected of being too high. 3. The role of the black egg is not reflected according to the setting. It feels like forcibly turning off the plug-in and insisting on using it. I feel that I can write a book with 4 and a half stars, but the details are too delayed and far-fetched to give 3 and a half stars.

I think 1. This Mu Fan's IQ is not very high and he is too impulsive, 2. Moreover, the author's halo for the protagonist is too much, 3. Even the enemy's IQ is lower than Mu Fan 4. The author often uses commas, pauses, and ellipses to indicate pauses in descriptions, and continues Mu Fan's emphasis on awesomeness, which makes him feel aesthetic fatigue 5. Something is constantly ringing in Mu Fan's mind, Mu Fan Doesn't the head hurt? The author explains... The description is too simple 6. Mu Fan can be called being dominated by the lower body to a certain extent. Whenever he mentions his woman, he becomes impulsive and even loses his mind 7. The Wings of Freedom team established by Mu Fan is completely a decoration... It depends on Mu Fan alone... What do teammates do? Since you don't rely on teammates, why do you build a team?

A little guide from a ten-year-old bookworm. This article is invincible, with a little bit of a twist (but our requirements are not that high). The first two-thirds look very good, the rhythm is steady in the middle, the last fifth is seriously homogenized, and the ending is a bit unfinished (I can only say that in my opinion There are very few online articles that are not finished, after all, I want to keep reading... I always feel that it is not finished) As for the female protagonist, there are single female protagonists in the front and multiple female protagonists in the end. I understand that the emotional line is okay, but I feel it together. . (Omit the 1,000-word complaint here) The collapse of combat power is a bit serious, and the system planning distinction is not obvious, which is seriously reflected in the mid-to-late battles (200-word complaint here) In terms of plot, it is online in the early stage, OK in the mid-term, and late. . (I can't complain about it later) Logic aspect. . . Let's be strict in general (why is Wudiwen so rigorous in logic) Let's talk about these in general. My suggestion is, don't buy it all at once. I will finish it in a week, and I will finish it later. . I really want to give up the book and skip reading If you are in a book shortage, I recommend giving it a try (looking for fairy seedlings while reading), but I do not recommend reading it directly. Add a bookshelf to wait for the book shortage to come again (recommendation from the old bookworm) The above comments are purely personal suggestions (crossed out, made up), if there is any offense, please feel free to communicate (light comment)

The protagonist was given two sets of plug-ins, the AI ​​​​and the body, but there was no balance between the two sets of plug-ins. The problem has already been reflected in Luojia from the first chapter. He discovered the Star Thief Group with the AI ​​→ explored the intelligence → made full preparations → stole a mass-produced machine to take revenge. Then what? After being overthrown by a single shot, the AI ​​went offline, and the machine came out to clear the field and change the map. It seemed like I had tasted the sweetness after that. Each chapter ended with a "force majeure" clearance. All the planning and growth of the protagonist and AI were completely weakened by the deus ex machina. Zicui, there is nothing much to say about the game and the banquet Dragon King. After the instructor comes out to smooth things over, you can completely transition to the next map. Just brush a wave of bugs on your face and get a life-saving grace. But no, you have to pull out the machine and install a wave if it can't be solved by brushing again. Landu was the same. He spent a long time planning for revenge in the game, but in the end, it couldn't be solved by brushing his face. The machine pulled over the mechanical deity. There is no time when the protagonist and AI can solve the problem with their brains and technology.

There are too many plots where the protagonist is looked down upon and then turns around to kill the mentally retarded supporting characters, and the secondary character is overdone in many places, which is not suitable for me who is tired of this kind of routine. Just looking at the first few volumes, the writing is very good, and the overall context of the book is also very exciting. However, the routines are a bit repetitive and the more you read, the more you read. The emotional lines are a bit childish. I couldn't read the seventh volume anymore. Overall, I have high expectations for the author and hope that the author can produce better works.

It's obviously a solemn battle mecha novel, but it has to be written in a hip-hop style. It doesn't feel immersive at all. It makes me uncomfortable. Also, the author should stop writing female characters. It's really bad. It's forced into the show 😅

1. There are chapters with a certain number of words, but not many. 2. There are many logical flaws and too many setting errors. 3. There are too many overlapping things, and there is no core world view. While Xiaobai's reading is okay, the book shortage doesn't require so much. I originally wanted to settle completely, but when I saw 30%, I couldn't stand it anymore, so I gave up.

The writing is pretty bad, but the parts that are fun are very fun.

Is this book a good early stage? Very burning! But from the moment he went to rescue Wang Nuonuo, he felt that Mu Fan was too dependent on Shura! Give the protagonist a bad review! Overall, it's a good science fiction novel (๑˙ー˙๑)

Thank you so much to the author. This is the most enjoyable time I have read after five years of book shortage.

I just want to know how many people are still there from 2016 to now... If so, could you please raise your hand? Otherwise I will be very lonely

After more than a year of keeping it, I finally finished reading it! It's a pity that I have to raise it again

The character of Wang Nuonuo is so silly, it made me vomit. If something happens at home, I will burst into tears. If my phone is smashed, I will rush over and kill someone. You have to say that she is not calm, but she is quite calm when getting into the car with the military people. I just want to say that if you like Mu Fan so much, why can't you borrow someone else's cell phone to call Mu Fan and think of something? And with a net worth of several billion, he only has one mobile phone? Don't you have any connections or emergency response personnel? Isn't your little princess a direct descendant of Loki Heavy Industry? She has no opinion at all when things happen. She was there the whole time when Mu Fan was injured, and she was there the whole time when Mu Fan was fighting. With 1.2 Billion working capital in hand, how many mecha maintenance technicians can't you hire? This is not pure and pure, this is stupid! You can still be in charge as a little princess. If I were Wang Ji, I would be so angry. I know this is necessary for the plot, but you can't ignore the character's image, don't you think? Mu Fantou is also very tough and reckless, but the halo of the protagonist doesn't say much. And Mr. Tang just let him go after abusing him? Even if you don't dare to kill these two people in person, you still can't do anything in the mecha competition? Wouldn't it be nice for him to do some tricks on Mu Fan's mecha? I didn't notice how cruel Mr. Tang was during the entire description.

The setting has shadows of Shishi Legend and Mobile Storm! Are you also a fan of mecha science fiction?

After reading it, to sum up, this book mainly highlights one word, hard: 1. The plot is hard 2. The emotional line is hard 3. The foreshadowing of every killing is hard and sensational 4. The backstage is hard, the life is hard, everyone is finally impressed by the "hardness" of the protagonist

😰Don't the protagonist's body feel too small? Will there be external armor or the like behind? Or is the protagonist machine now a core machine?

It's really hard to stand the thought of blindly using the weakness of the people around you and the strength of the opponent to highlight the protagonist. It's even more uncomfortable than Qiong Yao's.

I feel that my IQ is too low and I am always creating conflicts without thinking, so I gave up!

Why do you think this book is good to read? For example, when the protagonist mecha said the name of the skill, I just felt full of the second-level atmosphere, and the plot was completely driven by pretense and slaps in the face.

Now that I have seen where the heroine was captured, I feel that there is really some lack in promoting the plot of the villain. How can I put it, now that I have seen it, it feels a bit like the Hong Kong comic Dragon and Tiger Gate. The plot has been driven by the protagonist's girlfriend being raped several times. The feud with the villain is basically a conflict related to the villain's face and the opposite sex. It would be nice to have more conflicts of pure interest.

It's a pretentious and slap-in-the-face story. It was okay in the early stage, but fell apart later on. The power was too messy. . There is also a planet that I can't describe. It's a planet, not a supercontinent in fantasy novels. It always feels like a supercontinent. My knowledge of physics is too poor. . . Looking for the Snow Tribe, brother, what you arrived at is a planet, not a city. . . . How can a level 6 mutant in the Blood Fang Regiment reach level 27 in the later stage? It feels much more powerful than the previous level 8.

The author's mental maturity is no more than thirty, let alone the structure. In other words, it is just water that uses young and active brain cells to rack their brains, and it cannot be up to the grade.

This novel is good and very passionate, but the most annoying thing is that even though it is already at the end of the game, there are always some ordinary enemies who think the protagonist can be bullied. He clearly announced his name just to fight the protagonist. SSS's mecha is the pinnacle of force in this novel. But the protagonist has defeated so many SSSs, and some people think they can fight with the protagonist.

Overall, I feel that the whole book gives people the feeling of being stubborn, just ignore the enemy's strength and just ignore it. Although sometimes it is fun to read, but it is boring to be reckless all the time. At least, I can occasionally manage it and occasionally tolerate it. Personally, I feel that it is more interesting.

Wow, I read a novel before the college entrance examination in 2019, but I haven't finished it yet. Now I suddenly read it at the starting point. I miss it very much, but I don't plan to finish it. I still thank the author.

First, although it is a mecha novel, the flavor of mecha is not strong, and the description of mecha is stingy. The description is very general and tasteless. Moreover, although it is set in the interstellar era, the description of ships is also very general. Starships are rarely described in the book. They usually only give starships names. Readers who are interested in starships can go away The second point is also the most disgusting point for me. I can understand the author's passing The writing idea is to create conflicts between the protagonist and the villain to promote the plot, but why does the author want to create conflicts so repeatedly? It really makes me sick. The protagonist really messes up wherever he goes. Geniuses are easily jealous. I can understand that the author occasionally writes a few villains. I only watched 60% of them and had more than ten conflicts with people. It really disgusts me. Does the author have no other writing ideas? The third point is that the world background of this book is really good and acceptable. Readers who can endure the second point can read this book. The fourth point is that almost every villain is stupid , it's very intellectual, and it's really poisonous To sum up, this book is just a hodgepodge of all kinds of interpersonal relationships, without any mecha flavor. I only see the protagonist resolving conflicts, and then dating his girlfriend. The protagonist's growth process is also written in a formulaic way. It's really just that the formula is repeated throughout the book. I can read many poisonous books, but this one is too poisonous and has no sincerity. It is confusing the readers, so let's put this formula aside

[Fn=2_2]I never thought you were also Haimi.

The novel is generally good, but the author seems to have no idea about living alone for 7 years. The protagonist's character is full of flaws. The key is that he is not isolated in the wild like Dragon Ball Goku.

Are there any similar novels? There is a shortage of books! Please recommend

The author really likes to apply the label of lone wolf to the protagonist