Fengyunjianqing

The long song comes to an end, and yesterday, lingering in the dream, once again has waves of memory, chanting a Sanskrit tune, and the melody is free under the green light. Repeat the sadness, pay tribute to the sweet dreams bound by time, fall into the beautiful and cold garden, let the tears poeticize youth, and say goodbye to the time.

You are the best! The author's writing style is beautiful and the subject matter is novel. It is really a rare masterpiece.

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Words are like flowing clouds and flowing water, and they leave a fragrance in your mouth. You need to be patient to read them. I like the author.

Balance work and rest, play when you need to play, write when you need to write.

Adding fictitious plots and characters to real history is a very good idea. I like it and we will encourage each other. Due to time constraints, I have only read the first few chapters of the masterpiece. I will take the time to read it carefully later. Thank you

I have read the chapters. The heroes are short-tempered and the love between children is long. It is even more exciting in the real history.

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I have read the latest chapter, the description of the characters is very good

I have read the latest chapter and forwarded it. The description is very exciting.

In the chapter "Silk Master", old people are not simple, women are not simple, and no one is simple.

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Your writing is getting more and more exciting, keep up the good work

Just listen to me and update it once a day. When you first start writing, don't attach importance to external things. As a literati, isn't it just words? Being able to arrange thousands of Chinese characters smoothly and properly and pronounce them catchy is a skill. Write the novel carefully and readers will come slowly. Don't rush for quick success. Of course, some masters update more than 10,000 words a day. One is because they have the ability, and the other is their reputation. Even if the writing is bad, there will still be people who will read it and be dissatisfied. I treat every author who writes something as a brother, so I don't be perfunctory, use clichés, or lie, as that won't help your writing. Tell the truth as smoothly as possible. I don't know whether people like to hear it or not.

I read the latest chapter "The Art of Swordsman", which I read more slowly and more seriously. What the language doesn't say is very smooth and relaxed. It can be seen that the author worked hard. The characters are also okay, because after only reading one chapter, it's hard to generalize. I don't often write book reviews for people. I keep saying good things and singing praises irresponsibly, which is not what I want and is not conducive to creation. Eleven out of ten people don't like to hear the offensive words. But I don't know why, but after reading the novels of Huangmen Sanzi, I suddenly felt a good feeling, a sense of closeness, and became a comrade. So let's be nitpicky for now, but fortunately it's all out of good intentions, and the intention of boxing is by no means "stick to drink" or "stick to kill". Smooth language and narrative are an advantage for the author, or a feature of the novel, but in turn it will also restrict the writing, that is, when the characters' hearts fluctuate violently and the plot suddenly changes, it is not easy to jump back all at once, giving people a feeling of great tragedy and joy, twists and turns, and thrilling. However, there are also successful examples of this writing method, namely Jin Yong, especially "The Eight Parts of the Dragon".

I have read a lot of semi-vernacular books during this period. If you read this book carefully, it is really good. The language is so exquisite. With the shell of this language, the reader can immediately enter the era and situation set by the author. In addition, this is a work with very few typos. Luluo is most afraid of typos that will spoil her mood when reading. This book won't. If you put so much effort into it, you can definitely do it well.

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