My Super Estate

To be honest, this novel is really rubbish. When writing about farming, just write about farming. Selling things provokes the underworld. The protagonist goes to discuss business. A security guard inexplicably dislikes the protagonist. Then the protagonist opens a shop and makes trouble in the police station. Then a big boss supports the protagonist. Then the spirit revives and suddenly it becomes a fantasy and immortality. I don't see any of the leisure and relaxation of farming novels. They are all routines from ten years ago.

I like the author's creative inspiration and support the author's continued efforts. The realm of cultivation in the author's story is rather vague. It doesn't seem to have been set before, but it seems to have been added temporarily after writing.

What the hell, heaven and earth have just begun to change, and they have become sworn brothers in just a few dozen chapters, and they have sworn, forget about swearing, and swear that heaven and earth actually responded with thunder. The two of them are the biological sons of heaven and earth, and their friendship is earth-shattering.

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Alas, I originally wanted to complain about a lot of faults, but when I saw that it was published 16 years ago, and it is still being written now, the author's perseverance can't be too hard on him.

My backyard is full of dragon world, why can't I find it?

There are too many gory plots. A good taneda flow adds so many messy things. Readers have their own tastes. Those who like taneda flow may not necessarily like those who pretend to be hegemonic. The author mixes them together to drive away readers with different tastes.

Where is the follow-up to the world of Panlong in the previous twelve pictures?

When I saw that I made my first pot of gold by selling cucumbers, I didn't even have the desire to watch.

Let me state in advance that I am not bragging, I am just commenting from my personal point of view. It is not easy for the author to persevere all the way up to now. He should be encouraged and supported, and recommended for rewards. As several friends said in the comments, the pit dug in the early stage was a bit big, the design was slightly unreasonable, and the routine was not effective. Prepare for timeliness. Nowadays, everything in society is fast food. The three golden chapters in the novel are not unreasonable. Instead of continuing to struggle with this book, it is better to re-register an account and get a new book. With this book with 2000+ chapters, my writing skills have definitely been practiced. Catering to the existing trend, writing a more popular book is not a problem.

The lower part of the previous 12 Panlong Worlds is there.

Also, the protagonist can make trouble for a gangster who runs a casino with a daily income of tens of millions by selling vegetables for only twenty-five yuan per kilogram. How did this gangster survive to reach that position? Even after his spiritual energy has recovered, he is still so arrogant that he dares to collude with the police to cause trouble openly. In that kind of environment, unless he has a connection with the sky, he will not survive for three episodes. In the book, Boss Bai obviously explains that he only achieved his status by his own force. May I ask the author how he survived to meet the protagonist with his IQ? You don't know how to be a human being. Your brain has become a muscle before you can do such stupid things.

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When I saw the introduction saying: The seal of the old gods was broken, the first thing that came to my mind was Cthulhu, Weapon A, etc. Can I still be saved?😭😭😭

Although I haven't read a chapter, I'll leave a mark by posting it I admire you, you are such a big brother! If you have the perseverance, with more than 3,000 chapters in three years, you can definitely write three different types of books But you haven't given up, you are still working hard, you are awesome, I support you 😡

With such bad grades, it's incredible that the author can write so many words! ! ! ! This is not a rant, just a sigh

Can't read

After reading Chapter 2, the writing is a bit bad, a bit long-winded and unreadable. The first two chapters of Luo Jian are just superfluous.

I watched it for a long time before I realized it was related to the work

I don't understand at all what the role of Luo Jian is in the first three chapters of the game? If you want a supporting role, you can just call him Wang Duoduo. How can he treat him like a fool when he witnesses the opportunity of pig's feet? The melons planted with spiritual liquid blossomed under his witness, and in the blink of an eye, Chapter 3 found a messy reason to prevaricate. Is he a fool? Are you a transparent person? Was it used by the author to fill in the word count? Putting aside whether you are stupid or not, if someone knows about such an incredible opportunity, are you not afraid that someone who comes after you will find out about it? There are a lot of people who are capable of reviving spiritual energy. No matter how powerful you are, how can you escape the detection of the country? How can pig's feet guarantee that Luo Jian will not reveal it to the outside world? Not jealous? Won't betray? Although very brainless, I admire the author's perseverance after three or four years 👍

The writing is good, but the chapters are too messy. Some plots feel a bit confusing

After reading the book, I know that the author is a person with dreams

He said that it was uncomfortable to watch. To be honest, I don't know if the protagonist has any brains. The total net worth of the previous vegetable seller was less than 2 million, and he was about to buy something worth 10 million. I finally understand why your book's performance is so poor.

It looks so cowardly, poisonous, and super poisonous.

You! A teenager in his twenties?

I just want to say that the author is awesome in every sense of the word.

The realm of spiritual practice in the story is very vague