Everlasting Night Lord

I have seen many different memes about the background of cultivation, and the one in this article is quite unique, but it is not completely new. It just adds some of my own thoughts to the old ones, which means to predict the future, and then connects it to my own world of cultivation, showing everyone a different modern cultivation. Returning to the topic of this article, many friends say that if there is writing but no plot, it will not attract readers. If there is plot but no writing, it will still not attract readers. In fact, this is not necessarily the case. The plot is the center of the entire article, and the writing is the stepping stone to the plot, holding on to the addictive tendon of the reader. Let's talk about the main line of this article first. In fact, the introduction makes it very clear. A cultivation experience that knows the future is also a strong foundation for Su Ye. The prelude should be faster and there should not be so much foreshadowing. The world of cultivation enters the main theme and accelerates the reader's good feelings towards the article. The main thing is to be selected for admission, and then directly brought to Canglan College to start Su Ye's next journey. The main plot in the later period was well shaped, but it was quite satisfactory and had no attractive highlights. Let's talk about the plot of this article. It's actually quite care-like, and it's well-founded. However, the focus of this article is wrong. The focus of cultivation should be the "pleasure" in the upgrade process, rather than starting from the beginning. After arriving at the academy, laying the foundation, broadening horizons, interacting with classmates, etc. Should all be done on the basis of "pleasure". In terms of description, the previous plot was too slow, too slow, quite mediocre with no highlights, and wasted a relatively good plot. Fortunately, he started his own resistance in the follow-up process, and the plot of self-breakthrough was well controlled, especially the rare psychological description, which highlighted Su Ye's character, Su Ye's thoughts, and how Su Ye wanted to gain a foothold in Canglan College. Then let's talk about the scene description in this article. I really want to praise it. Whether it is from the beginning when Su Ye and Xun Ran met, entering the academy, breaking through, discovering the value of his own force, the moment when the sky shattered, etc., The writing style is very good. At least he can fully express the magnificent places that need to be expressed, as if he is immersed in the scene. The most touching thing is Su Ye's struggle at the beginning. Faced with the days of being laughed at, Su Ye kept struggling forward and tried hard to break through. When he was about to break through, what he thought and felt not only depicted the scene in a shocking and deeply rooted way, but also highlighted Su Ye's character of never admitting defeat and succeeding with hard work. Efforts may not necessarily lead to success, and giving up will lead to failure. Even if others laugh at him, he will not give up on himself. Finally, let's talk about the characterization in this article. Characters are the soul of every novel. If you want to know whether the novel can be deeply rooted in people's hearts, vivid and colorful characterization is very important. It can not only play a role of bonus points, but also make people feel as if they are actually there, transforming the male and female protagonists into themselves, and thus entering the world in the book. As the male protagonist of this article, Su Ye is a very attractive boy, not only because of his character, but the most important thing is that he does not shrink back in the face of difficult moments. He has a unique personality charm, just like Su Ye who breaks out of a cocoon and has his own attraction. Both Xiao Yu and Qin Yue are attracted by Su Ye and they come together. Although many things will happen in the future, they will meet many people and they will eventually leave. However, in the end, looking back, you will gain a lot. Newcomer Wang Suye is well-deserved. He will go higher and fly further. To sum up, I wish the novel will become more and more popular~ This review is the opinion of one family. Please do not delve into it. If you have any questions, please feel free to post them privately~ [Book reviewer Rosedie Weiliang from the third group of Book Review Group commented] 🌹

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Come on, author, the bullying and details of the plot are good, especially the protagonist's amnesia after the battle. I was very excited in the early stage, and then I probably got tired of it, so I decided to give it a bland one. Oh, I can't tell. Anyway, author, please do your best.

1. "Suddenly, a burst of ringing broke what Su Ye wanted to say..." Suddenly, it is particularly inappropriate here. If the phone is just ringing, there is no need to do this. If you read it carefully, you will feel that there are some big words but little use. If it were changed to "at this time", it would read more smoothly. 2. "Gradually, a smile appeared on Su Ye's face..." "The admission notice has come, but there is no excitement and excitement as imagined..." This sentence is to answer the question of why Su Ye smiled on his face. If it just said that the admission notice has come, it would feel very abrupt. Therefore, it is recommended that the sentence be changed to "It turns out that the admission notice has arrived..." Summary: What is important in writing novels is the beginning, inheritance, and transition. The beginning is to explain the actual object. Just make it clear what you are writing. The inheritance is to pave the way for the next step and to better explain the above. From the above, we can see the author's anxiety in writing the article. Don't be anxious when describing things. Think first and write later. Don't rush. The author must do this well, and clarifying the words is the first problem that must be solved now. It is recommended that the author read his own book. Yipin, meditate. Second grade, peace of mind. Third grade, perseverance.

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