Jinxiugui

How should I put it, the author's writing style is still very skillful, but the plot lacks too much elaboration, and the forced things are the most unappetizing! If the author can put more effort into conceiving the plot and details of the story "reasonably and logically", he will definitely produce a masterpiece!

The character design at the beginning was quite likable, but later on, both the plot setting and the character development became more difficult... For example, the younger brother wanted to lead someone to kill someone else's sister. This kind of thing is not just a matter of coming to accuse the family and just being intimate with the whole family. Logically speaking, the two families have become enemies. In addition, I feel that the flow of the text has been adjusted several times. The aggrieved parts were too aggrieved. The transformation of the characters was reversed in one sentence. There are actually many unreasonable places, which are all sustained by the breath of the text. I hope the author's next book will be better

It's hard to watch from the beginning, it's draggy and lackluster, and the heroine is a bit stupid 😳

I like the author's writing style and the characters of many supporting characters, such as Yuan Zheng and Fu Shaoyun.

I hate that the heroine has paid too much for Yuan Xiang. Is it necessary? It's enough to be good to her grandmother, father and aunt's family. Yuan Xiang and Gu Chao don't care what they do, idiots

Um. . Is the heroine selling stupid characters all the time? . I always find this character a bit unbearable. . Although she is a normal girl. . But I still can't stand it. . 😅

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The writing of the book is good and the characters are not cliché. It's just too long-winded and I skipped reading.

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Apart from their appearance, the male and female protagonists have very good personalities, and the supporting characters also have their own characteristics. Although there is a vicious queen who is self-righteous, many of the relatives surrounding the male and female protagonists are very good, and even the emperor is rare to be open-minded and aboveboard. The whole book is loving but not abusive, tender and funny, the logic is clear, and even the small holes are not forgotten. Highly recommended!

It's so well written and wonderful. I wrote "The Journey of the Soul: The Righteous Soul". I hope you will pay attention to it.

It's a very nice book 👍. I really like the heroine's self-improvement attitude towards life, but she plays a wonderful life with a bad hand.

I thought it was a good book at the beginning, but then it became crippled from the moment Doudou helped Gu Chao get a concubine (I personally think it is crippled, please don't criticize): 1. Doudou himself said that he valued his grandmother and aunt more, so at least his sister was not ranked, but the author arranged for her to act as an informant to hurt her grandmother at the request of her sister whom she had been with for a few days. 2. She has written about Doudou's sensitivity many times, so why didn't she count Gu Chao and Aunt Jin's hypocrisy? It was like tearing out her heart and lungs as if she were her own mother. Then I was really short of books, so I couldn't bear to jump back and read, but I still couldn't stick to it. The heroine is becoming less and less individual, and she and Xiao Fei are a bit good, so they might as well be together. . . So I took a detour and just couldn't resist commenting.

After reading the beginning, I feel that the writing is good, and the first paragraph is also quite interesting, but I had a feeling that the child period will be very long, and the whole article is also very long, so I won't continue. PS People like Gu Chao are so invincible and disgusting. Anyway, the whole world is sorry for her. God and earth are responsible for her, but she is not the kind who does all kinds of evil. If she can't die, there is no such thing as divorce, she can only be disgusted for the rest of her life. Think about that feeling.

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This book is really beautiful, I like the heroine so much

Keep up the good work! 😁

I've read half of it. Although it's the author's first book, it's very well written. I'm looking forward to the next one.

Good looking🌹🌹🤭

Looking forward to the next one🤭

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It looks very attractive and beautiful. Great support for the author.

I read the free chapter and it was interesting, but it was too long.

After reading twenty chapters, I think the writing is really good. The more I read, the more I like it!

After seeing how much weight Cheng Xiaofei lost after being kidnapped, I felt that this plot had been seen in any book before. It was too similar.

Gu Chao's stubborn temper comes in handy when facing bad guys. No matter what you say, she won't go down the path you mentioned.