The first 1/3 of the variety show became popular. The protagonist was written by a real person author. Although the character is a bit flimsy due to his background in the entertainment industry, at least it does not have the pre-made flavor of "an article was written just to satisfy sexual fetishes" like other danmei articles, and the length of career and relationship is also well balanced.
But the emotional entanglement in the middle 1/3 shocked me. I suddenly entered the heart-throb mode at the center of the universe, and all the monsters and monsters were sucked in like their heads were lowered. It made me feel on pins and needles and felt like a ray on my back. I really couldn't stand this morbid way of writing. In addition, the audience for the heart-throb article is somewhat sick, and some of Duan Ping's speeches were made by subway men looking at their mobile phones. [Eh~]
After confirming the relationship in the last 1/3, it becomes an ordinary romance article, and the career section is much simpler. Fortunately, the forum is interesting and enjoyable to read.
As a result, the extra story continued, and it was so perfunctory that it made people angry. After watching it for the first time, I wanted to say "rnm refund my money".
It's quite fun, but the actual experience of the text is far from what I expected after reading the copy... The author's quality is always high and low. I complained about the character portrayal in "Women's Clothes to Provoke Long Aotian", and later "The Male Vixen" was unconventional and worth watching, but now it's the same old habit again. The early stage was so mediocre that I almost wanted to give up the article, and the later stage was at best a short-drama-level, low-quality enjoyable article. The emotional line was even more outrageous. With such good data, it can only be said that the social pressure is still too great.
I can't stand the paragraph reviews, it ruins my mood too much. The atmosphere is the worst in Jinjiang. A novel has been completely ruined by the paragraph reviews. Learn from the lesson and close paragraph comments before reading the article.
Sad... I was really interested in pursuing the article, but I got a slap on the head. I thought it was just a simple system log every day, but inexplicably it turned into a real-time voice? ? ? Flash to the old waist. It was originally considered to be an unconventional theme about the voice of the heart. After all, the work diary actually had nothing to do with the voice of the heart, but it suddenly fell back into the cliché... Now it is quite unlovable. It is a fictional version of the Jiajing Dynasty but the personnel and personnel are basically the same. The author's literary talent is also very good, and there are paragraphs and commentaries to popularize science, but I really don't want to see any more imitations of "Manchu Civilization and Military".
I've abandoned this author's writing, and I really should spend some time polishing my writing skills. Both the conception and presentation are mediocre, and I won't try it again.
From the bottom of my heart, I don't understand why the author gave the main characters such incredible identities and backgrounds - the female protagonist is the daughter of a contractor who died on the construction site, the male protagonist is the grandson of the concubine of a landlord who was liquidated, and the important supporting role is a speculative and protected black market boss... The author takes a look at it, does this have a positive image at all? ? Even if the family is in debt and the wooden door can solve the urgent need, can't we change the reason for the debt? Even if you are implicated and criticized in a special era, can't you change your life experience? Watching the windfall fall on the heads of "evil people" is like eating a fly.
I call it takeout literature: literature about takeout + literature about eating takeout + takeout-style prefabricated literature. Food is an art, and tasting food is also an art. Can you stop writing like gutter oil and just want to scratch your stomach after reading it? Also, if it weren't for Lu Xun, why not write about such a philistine philistine as the protagonist? OK
You can tell the author's level from the naming of the two characters in the opening scene... Let's just say there is no sense of language at all! Shen Xun (shěn xuǎn) has two upper tones and cannot be pronounced. Or the author wants to read Shen Xun (shěn gèng), but there are two identical rhyme parts, one nasal before and one after the nasal. Compared with the ordinary "Shen Heng", which one is more smooth? The same goes for lín liè. With the same initial consonant and similar finals, it sounds like a southerner with no distinction between l and n. How about comparing it with "Lin Nie"? The author's rhyme and pronunciation are so bad that I almost doubt that I can even speak Mandarin well.
A good case... A case that shows what works written by an author without aura are like, a case that shows how the author's cognitive upper limit limits the protagonist.
This is the first time I've seen a free chapter written more brilliantly than a paid chapter... The heartthrob's attribute awakens unexpectedly, and the supporting characters are all bosses, and the routine is thunderous. Just looking at the free chapter is enough, don't buy it.
This book can simply be described as magical. At the beginning of "Get Rich", I wrote the main character as a villain who was ambitious and stupid, and almost wanted to give up the article. Later, after getting on the right track, it finally looked like a standard "Get Rich Goldfinger" career novel, and its reputation was on the rise. However, it suddenly took a turn for the worse, and suddenly came up with an AI alien setting, which shocked my jaw; then it was finished in a hurry, and the assembly line started to outline the outline. Did the author consider the reader's tolerance when he was imaginative? It can literally kill people. It's quite a cool article just by showing the plots of picking up omissions in various investment industries, but coupled with the beginning and end of the story, the reading experience is really bad.
Unable to complain... Awkward, suffocating, like a lump in the throat. It completely conforms to my stereotype of entertainment industry articles: 100% copies of real-life film and television variety shows, with no innovation at all; copies of various phenomena in reality, but all the advantages are mine. The fandom won't hold me back, I won't be called a resource person if I take advantage of it, and there is no marketing at all outside the fandom, haha. This system in particular is simply a target set by the author to stir up conversations between men and women. No plot is enjoyable to watch. From time to time, the system will be arranged to jump twice to disgust people, giving the author a space to vent his complaints, and then give the protagonist a reason to continue to "peacefully coexist" with the system, and then continue to disgust people. I even think that if this system was non-intelligent, had no mouth, and only had a mall, it wouldn't be so uncomfortable! I often read other people's comments about a certain article as frustrating. Now I finally understand this feeling. Not every new setting is appropriate in the article. This sister-in-law system's setting dissuades readers in the title and irritates the audience in the text. What is the meaning of existence?
Although I am lazy, I am European! Although I don't want to get involved, my boss insists on my promotion and salary increase! May I ask what is the meaning of the author using the shell of attacking workers and opposing involution to write about the life of Ou Huang Lai Ying? Those who are curly are despised, and those who are neither curly nor European do not deserve to live. In recent years, crossovers between x-x cultivators in the workplace have become very popular, but I almost read one and discarded the other. The author's other book "Becoming a Star and Starting from a Walk-in" is quite good. The modern setting is the comfort zone for venting the grievances of working.
This is no different from the article about the world's rich and powerful boss ten years ago. If you change the background, you can get 100,000 in Danmei District? ? The writing was quite innovative, but the story telling was really bad, and I didn't make it to Chapter 10. I especially couldn't stand the feminine and charming supporting character. The author made the plot look like a joke, and for a while it was hard to tell whether it was written like this on purpose or because he really thought it was cute. [Loading]
Sometimes I don't understand why some articles are so popular. When I saw the word "heartfelt" in the title, I should have run away without hesitation. The value of this book is to become a concrete case of "limited writing power": if one or two words can explain something clearly, the author needs a paragraph; if one or two paragraphs can tell a story clearly, the author needs two or three chapters. I feel that when writing a manuscript, the author is absolutely free from the reins. He just hits the keyboard wherever his inner drama plays out, without even revising the manuscript. After all, the inner voice is so nonsensical~
It has a standard setting of a delicious and enjoyable article, but the author's ability seems to be unable to keep up with the exciting design. Writing about food was relatively natural, but once it switched to the field of infrastructure, there was a contradiction between mature reference materials and immature authors, resulting in the protagonist's character being like a college student managing a group, but the growth line was not the focus. Instead, the protagonist was set to use the rules of modern society to reduce dimensionality and attack. If you use it to kill time, you will feel that your time is wasted.
This one is the most shocking to me so far. Not only is the psychological description amazing, but what is even more amazing is that cousin literature can be restored in 2024? Or was it written by the author of "Qing Chuan Daily", which is said to be a satire on the feudal monarchy? ? ? I couldn't bear to skip the chapters I wrote three years ago, but I didn't expect that three years later I would be just as shocked. Duomumuduo, whats wrong?
After all, it is the second most recent article, and the writing style is much simpler. I actually don't care much about the angle of attack and reception, but "Iron Brother" has Zhuyu in front, so I don't think this cold style is right... Sticky, it's better to be sticky.
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