Nice! The writing is very good. A Fei's acting skills in each copy are really great, and the logic of the copy is very good, and the transition of the emotional line is also well written!
Very beautiful! ! ! In the middle, I was looking forward to it ending, but when it was over, I couldn't let it go. Every dungeon is very unique, innovative and beautiful. It was not easy for Jane Daring and Little Stuttering to reach the end. Everyone is well-shaped, with joys and sorrows, some are unwilling to let go, some are stuck in the past, and some are running towards the future! ! !
It's good-looking. The front is good, but the emotional line in the back is not very good. There are a few flaws. There are extras to supplement it. Overall, it's good.
The protagonist's superpowers are so novel and different, hahaha, it just feels a bit... How should I put it? Personally, I feel that there are some parts in the article that are a bit... Well, I can't put it into words, ahhhhh, that's it.