Women's clothing beauty gong x love brain dragon Aotian Shou, body feeling favors each other and favors attack, Shou has the ceiling of combat power, gong is a normal modern good person's mentality, but he will not be sloppy. It's not purely weak in terms of combat power, but compared to being weak, it's a pity that there's never been much room for improvement. But it's rare to find a book that is so naturally charming and not annoying → "You can tell she's a princess." The women's vest lasted until more than 60%, and it didn't completely fall off in the end. The bed is weak. But the feeling is really very restrained, and the intention of attacking comes first, which is a bonus.
The settings are all round, the ending is a little rushed, but overall it's okay, with a little bit of past life in the cookie.
It's a pity that compared to the main storyline of sweet sister-brother love, my taste is more inclined to the traditional point of view of Brother in the Past Life. The youthful spirit of the past life is portrayed, and the plot of the two people fighting hand in hand really irritated me.
Master Gong is a good civilized person! Gong has a very naughty and free-spirited and cute personality. Even though he is a medical practitioner, his martial arts value is not weak. He also resisted very hard when he was imprisoned in the small black room. His counterattack was so cool. In the early stage, I was an exchange student (?), But in the later stage, I gradually grew up and changed, turning black and so on. I was a little bit worried about it. Although I liked it at first, I was really self-centered. Fortunately, the two of them developed very well in the later stage. In the end, I saw the love between birds and fish (dense fog), and it was indeed a smooth journey. Gong is the darling of the world——
There are a few pairs of sub-CP descriptions, all of which are okay. And this person who cultivates immortality feels that there are many reactions and ideas, and the "immortal" feeling above is not important.
The plot and characters are pretty good, the post-apocalyptic beauty Qiang Gong x Qidian Wen Long Aotian, who is cold on the surface and a little bit evil in reality, but has a good heart and a strong mentality. He doesn't mind women's clothing from the beginning, and he is fearless in changing the original plot. The master and apprentice are suki, and in the later stage, there is a honey trap to trick the shou into changing his ears and tail and come out to play with him. It made me laugh so hard.
It's a pity that the writing still has room for improvement. I feel like I'm writing whatever comes to mind. The plot of the middle and back together is a bit scattered. The writing goes through the Qidian novel, and it is indeed similar to Qidian's writing style in all aspects...
It can be considered an early article, and there are some stereotypes in the text; in the end, only a few people knew about women's clothing. Sometimes the small details are confusing, but it doesn't affect the overall situation.
Ps: There are more deputy cps
It has the tone of a fairy tale, and there are generally no problems with the logic of the story. There are foreshadowings (although the foreshadowing is quite obvious) and recycling, but it ends a little too fast in the end, but it is still very sweet. Flaws do not cover up strengths.
Gong is a smart and outstanding person, but also an ordinary good person. In the early stage, he would feel guilty and pity, and he would take care of Shou (but later he would be obsessed with Gong and give back a lot.). The system was very constrained, and the mission and the original intention were very conflicting, which led to a lot of conflicts. However, after the system was half offline in the middle and late stages, it was really sweet for the young couple to fall in love, and except for the restricted system part, they basically talked straight, and they also respected each other and put themselves in each other's shoes, which was very comfortable. There are plot points of torture, but I feel like I tried to describe them as little as possible. There should also be a few pairs of obscure sub-CPs, but they are not mentioned clearly, so you can just ignore them if you don't like them. (It should be noted that the group portrait part at the beginning is also very exciting. I can remember that many people are also concerned about their development, but there is not much explanation at the end. Damn it)
It was written in ancient times, but it is a classic. Villain The emotional line is average, but the plot is quite interesting, especially in the early stages. It's a pity that the outline was cut later. The practice is going according to nature, the writing style is not too serious, the writing is smooth but there is still room for improvement, there is a little bit of a running account at the end, and the imaginative design is quite logical, but it is a pity that the progress is too fast.
Purely sweet article. A relatively innovative reverse cross-dressing pattern. Gong is the beautiful, powerful and miserable demon king, and Ue is the original harem protagonist of the true sect. The characters of both sides are actually quite common. Gong can stand up well, and I like the xp. I like the portrayal of Shou very much. He is kind, sincere, generous and naturally delicate. After enlightenment, he has the belief, perseverance and courage to move forward. The way of love is also generous and calm, proactive and not pretentious. The overall reading is relatively comfortable and there are no major mistakes.
The disadvantage is that some parts could be more delicate, and the plot does not need to be pushed too quickly. It is a bit sloppy in the later stages, which is more obvious. The writing will be better if it improves. The climax is a bit hard and not high enough. The extras don't quite stand up to scrutiny.
It's a rare female-on-male main attack, even with some narcissus elements? (The shell that was broken through was originally Shou's), Shou is still a first-class male protagonist, it's fun, and the jokes are all to my liking, but the logic is a bit messy, the pace is a bit fast, and some emotions can be more detailed
It's a good main attack that kept me spinning, it's powerful and has the element of robbery, the logic is smooth, the group portraits are well written, and several very important and favorite supporting characters have a good ending in the end! Very nice!
I originally wanted to deduct one star for the middle part of the system (some parts are really annoying...), But for the sake of the effort at the end, let's show some mercy to this idiot.
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