The plot and emotional scenes are both good, mainly through understanding Shou's heart knot to promote the plot. The emotions are delicate and real, but sometimes there are too many lyrical sentences and it is dry.
I like the setting of Shou, and the parallel world is also very good (note that Shou in the parallel world is 1), but the ending is a bit rushed. I thought their love relationship will have to be laid for a while.
It's a rare sight. It uses women's clothing, online games, and e-sports memes that I was annoyed to see in Jinjiang. The data is not pretty, but believe me, the level is far higher than those with fancy names. This data and list are really not worthy of this article.
At the beginning, I felt that the author was not very good at writing, but later on, he got better and better, with more and more exciting plots. It is not like many of the novels that I am optimistic about that tend to rise and fall. The women's clothing, which I was beginning to think was particularly useless, also comes full circle and has great moments (although it's still a bit abrupt).
Although some of the characters in the group portraits are still relatively thin, they are now more distinctive, and the combination of meat and vegetables is indispensable. Everyone has their own story, which makes me feel that they are more than just background panels.
The emotional drama and career line of the whole story are really well matched, and I didn't feel that any part was redundant or redundant. In particular, the reversal of the two's status after Shenxiao's psychological transformation and Ren Renyan's psychological revelation directly doubled the deliciousness of the love line (it's delicious, I love eating, extra Moduo Moduo, and some sub-CPs). The classic career line has returned to its peak, but it has also created its own new ideas and rhythm.
I hope Mommy's next book will be better! I will continue to follow the article!