The Ancient Fantasy of the Broken Minesweeper's Thoughts
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Contains some very critical curse words. Records ancient/immortal writings that have not been updated due to various reasons. Partial lightning protection, but I only represent an individual (I am a trumpet)
The world view is good.
The way of heaven is also an atypical way of heaven, and it is not a dominant existence.
The character plot is pretty good.
I quite like the twist of two young men who failed to become apprentices. After they separated, one of them turned around and was killed by the other.
I also think that the explanation of the motivations of the two apprentices was well arranged.
The latter is because I really don't like this kind of people in front of you, and they are full of flaws, and even though I don't bother to cover it up, I still don't firmly recognize the pulling feeling I feel. Ma Jiawen is not bad, I am just too inclined towards soul mates.
[Release Literature] I flow tags [Rebirth] [Fantasy] [Master and Disciple]
It turned out to be the article I came across when I first started chasing articles...
Of course, I liked it very much at first. Even when I listened to the radio drama, I thought Meng Xueri was so cute, and Ji Xiao had a sense of silent doting.
The early interactions were also quite interesting.
Then I skipped to the ending without watching it, which was confusing.
Later, I made good use of search and found out that this is a piece of relief literature.
My mood was quite complicated. I thought the two of them were a good match, but in the end I looked at Shou and thought of someone else.
He also made an agreement with his senior brother about the next life...
"Couples who are close to each other and distant from each other".
"I also thought about whether there would be a you here, waiting for me in the future.
But I have no future. "
Shou saw Gong at that time in the illusion of a thousand years ago, and went together to prevent the war before Gong was born. Due to the causal relationship, Gong in the illusion will no longer exist. This is what he said to Shou before dissipating.
When I read the writing, I really liked Gong's character.
Then Gong is indeed a very beautiful, powerful and tragic character.
But because there were many uncomfortable points in the setting of the novel itself, after reading the key plot, I decided to abandon the novel at that time.
1. Gong's parents were originally hostile, but they got together by accident.
After knowing that she was pregnant, she wrote that it was the nature of dragons to protect their offspring, so she decided to give birth to Gong?
To protect your offspring, you gave birth to him and threw him away to the human race to fend for himself?
When Gong's father found out about his son, the first time he saw Gong, he said, "Stay away from my daughter."
Um?
2. There is a disgusting supporting character at the beginning, but he survives for a long time in the text.
Atypical text.
Gong is really pampered,
But in comparison, all the characterizations are different.
The whole logic of Shou's sect is weird. They don't listen to Shou's explanations and force people into desperate situations. On the other hand, they will worry when they see Shou being injured, but they won't give him a chance to survive.
Brothers, brothers, and master all make people uncomfortable. Each has its own disgusting features.
However, in order to directly promote the development of the plot, the empathy is very fast. I only met Gong once and didn't get along with him for a few days, but he regarded him as a spiritual support and set off on the journey to find him when he came back.
Then when the two met for the second time, the intensity of the atmosphere made people think that they had been Taoist monks for many years.
How should I put it? After suffering so many grievances before, Shou still dared to talk so easily. He was somewhat undefended. Although the viewing experience is very poor, I haven't fully subscribed to it, but I gave it a 4-star rating because I had the impression that the author seemed to have a pretty good attitude. I hope there will be better works in the future.
Very strong ancient flavor. The writing style has a very antique feel
The early atmosphere was depressing
In my memories, I saw the scene where I and I were getting along and were inseparable and holding hands. I don't know how many times it happened, but it made me so happy when I was not in a perfect state (
"So can men also become Taoist couples?"
But the attack is even more outrageous.
You two really deserve to be together for a few years and be separated for thousands of years (.
Float
I feel like my writing style is not very good.
From the look and feel, the author tried very hard to describe it, but the images and content were a mess.
(Speaking of it, most abandoned articles have this feeling. I may not be describing it correctly.
It's just that there is too much deliberate writing, which is counterproductive. )
The outage is weird.
It looked very broken.
The characters are also very thin.
The protagonist seems to have a lot of thinking but is not slipping up at the critical moment.
Also, because of my passive mind-reading ability, I heard a lot of bad voices, so I felt a bit bitter and resentful.
Just... OK, you are the protagonist and your opinion matters.
Overall, too vulgar.
Cliché tacky.
The shortcomings can only be ignored without thinking before continuing.
It just so happens that I like antique style (the cover is also a bonus)
In terms of the plot, there is a good aspect, which is Lin's experience. He is a big tree that attracts the wind, and he is young and frivolous.
At the same time, fame and wealth will make people do whatever they want. (I still feel that although Tang is a selfish villain, he is completely bad but not that completely)
(Maybe conventional thinking is more accepting that a person's good intentions are completely disguised, so Tang treats Lin selfishly, which makes me feel a bit disconnected. I am more accepting of a complete bad guy who will die without mercy)
I quite agree with the views expressed by the author. The general idea is: the environment is not good enough, so talented people cannot give full play to their talents.
I don't know whether I should say that Xiao is very oily.
(It would be appropriate if there were synonymous alternatives)
Regarding, the reason for regicide is: My family Zikui is sick and cannot catch up with the exam. Only national mourning can postpone it.
Regarding, the reason why someone can live one more day is that if there is a national mourning, you can't take Zikui to see the lanterns on the holiday, so let him live one more day.
...
Yes, you are so pampered (rush, 4 sounds)
Lots of internet slang.
It was acceptable in the previous article, but it is too original here.
(In line with my initial impression of the author)
There are many characters but no focus.
Rebirth becomes a sand glyph, very fragmented.
In fact, it is very annoying to frequently use the magic of turning stone into gold without any scruples.
Although there is a touch of gold later. But the protagonist did get a lot of benefits from using this technique.
It fits my stereotype of main writing.
Qigong has a strong feeling of being in a superior position for a long time, which is very uncomfortable.
It wasn't clear who it was until Chapter V, but in fact, I had a vague feeling that it was the young man in the wheelchair.
When I first met him, I thought he was a young nobleman. In fact, it is true, but the author writes it differently.
→The noble young master who has never begged for help in his life begged him twice not long after encountering Gong, hehe
The plot setting makes people uncomfortable:
1. The protagonist of the original book, Shou, was forced to marry the original owner in order to save his biological father (attack 2). In order to set off the protagonist, it can be seen that the protagonist of the original book, Shou, has been reduced to an intellectual state. He has a weak brain and weak abilities.
2. The protagonist captures the miracle doctor and imprisons him in the hospital. Then, in order to make the miracle doctor owe him a favor, he secretly arranged for the miracle doctor's son to work under a certain general in the military camp. (He's already been healed by a miracle. It's the scarcest resource on the battlefield. If he asks for it himself, won't he be able to get such a thing?
3. After careful consideration, Gong decided to save the man. Since he was in a wheelchair and unable to move, Gong carried him into the carriage, while his subordinates said to him: "Young disciple, put down my young master quickly!"
It was your young master who asked for the rescue. Now the other party is planning to save people and let your young master go to the carriage to take shelter from the rain. What the hell are you doing?
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